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The Performance of a Lifetime – Chapter 12
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“So, are they coming down?” Kit asked curiously when Alice reached the table.
“I don’t know.” Alice shrugged her shoulders, sat down and picked her cup of now cold coffee. She took one long drag and winced at the sour taste.
“What do you mean you don’t know? You said you were going to fetch them. You went to their room, didn’t you?” Jenny inquired after it became apparent that Alice was not going to say anything else. That fact alone was an oddity for the talkative blonde and enough to catch the writer’s attention.
“No, I didn’t.” Alice saw the doubtful faces around the table and she chuckled hollowly. “You guys, I was kidding. I went to the bathroom.”
“You spent an awful lot of time in the bathroom.” Helena replied, the corners of her lips twitching into a mocking smile.
“When a person has to go a person has to go.” Alice shrugged innocently.
Kit’s eyebrow rose in disbelief and Alice rushed to explain hoping to forestall any more questions. “After that tango last night it didn’t take a rocket scientist to know that they’d be busy this morning.”
Kit chuckled while all around the table heads nodded in agreement.
“It was one hot dance.” Shane mused out loud.
Alice drained her coffee slowly, thoughtfully. Suddenly she got up decisively.
“I’m going to get more coffee.” She turned her back to the rest of the table, faced her girlfriend and Shane and asked with a waggle of her eyebrows. “Tasha, Shane do you guys want to come?”
“Yeah, I could use some more coffee.” Tasha nodded and got up.
“No, I’m good.” Shane replied sleepily with a little shake of her head while she lifted her cup still full of coffee towards her friend.
“I think you could use another one.” Alice widened her eyes and waved her head towards the deserted table where the coffee refills rested.
“Are you sure you are quite all right Alice? First you disappear into the bathroom for ages and now your head seems to be having seizures.”
Alice ignored Helena’s teasing voice and instead focused her attention on her oblivious friend. She pointed at Shane’s cup and called out.
“Spider.”
Shane jumped from her seat, awkwardly putting her cup down on the table.
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Jesus! I so love that story!
Me too and can’t wait for the next chapter:)PPS PPPS
Loved the morning. Very playful. Fun. Although, come on Alice, Tina has done all the work so far. Bette needs to grow a pair, tell Jodi off, and maybe tip off Janet that she can do better. Maybe some other guest should show Tina some attention.. because I don’t want her humiliating herself by chasing after Bette unless Bette is putting in the same effort back. So far, she has hardly stood up to Jodi’s advances. Can’t wait for more.
Nice update, this is my fave story at the moment. PPS :¬)
well needs to make thing clear with jodie and no more of this talking crap. jodie is suppose to get married she needs to buzz of and if tina really wants bette she needs to fight and let her know! :)PPS
Indeed, what *does* it take to woo Ms. Porter? I, for one, can’t wait to find out. Thanks for the post, sabina, I’m really just enamored of this story.
Great post … it makes me smile and want to read more, you are really a very talented writer ! I do not know what it takes to woo Ms. Porter but I am sure you have a pretty good idea for the next chapter. Please continue that way, I allow myself to speak for more other “silent” readers, it is too good.
Wooing’s good! Can’t wait for it. PPS!!
this is THE story i look forward to. can’t wait for the next post :)
Alice is way too funny. I think Bette should tell Jodi to leave her alone. She should also sign it too, so it’s clear. Jodi, you snooze, you loose.Great chapter S! Now, go back to writing! ;-)
Wooo hooo!! Bring on the “wooing” Love their interaction and the little covert pow-wow Alice had to have w/ Tasha & Shane…Thx for this & looking forward to finding out what Jodi wants to talk about (& hopefully Bette will set Jodi in her place; AWAY from B&T!) & for the wooing (hope B does a little of her own wooing as well) to begin ;)
Woo her Tina, Do It!
I think I wouldn’t take much wooing, but it wouldn’t be bad either. Tina is right, she can’t be the rebound. But then, that is taking a lot of chances.
Long chapters with lots of great moments and a bit of drama is great – it’s the effing waiting that is so frustrating:-) another great one from you – thank you for keeping the pace and the drama it keeps me comming back for more and occationally re-read ;-)
So happy when I see a post by you..the love between them is so perfect. Don’t let Jodi spoil it..don’t let Bette allow her to spoil it.
love the update and certainly hope that Tina takes Alice’s advice to heart!
Great update. I don’t care what Jodi wants Bette needs to let her know they’re done for good. Tina go claim your woman.
I hope this means you will “Woo” us into another NC-17 encounter – the last one was simply too good not to repeat! Alice needs to be having her little chat with Bette as well — Tina seems to be rescuing Bette from herself at the moment…Alice needs to help Bette see the error of her ways…
Rejoicing over another update! oh..the anticipation! please post soon! :)
yes, we will take all the wooing you have to give us This is soooooo good
I’m really loving this story. I disagree with Alice. Tina’s done her part. Bette needs to verbally kick Jodi to the curb and stop giving her false hope. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter. PPS
Woo woo, I just love this story…it’s perfect in every way! Yep, Tina should do some wooing and Bette needs to tell Jodi it’s over…she’s moved on. And where’s Jodi’s bride to be? If I was her, I’d be telling Jodi it was over between us too. Can’t wait for the next update!
Hi, I just wanted to say that I love this story and look forward to each update. You always put a smile on my face when I see this story on the front page!
damn Jodi to hell!!! this story freaking rocks big time. I hope Bette does not get all confused by Tina telling her to talk to Jodi.
Sorry not to have commented on your previous very sexy, very well-written chapter, but I’ve only now regained my senses… was feeling a bit weak myself… These two are so adorable. Can’t imagine Bette seriously considering Jodie after experiencing the lovely Tina.
I’m so loving this story. Thank you for sharing. Short of sounding greedy, another post tomorrow or better later today. PPS.
Jodie is the one that mad the mistake. Bette should just tell her to go—–fly a kite. thanks
Yaaaay!! U posted! And whatta marvellous post!…so ummm can I have another please? I’ve worked up quite an appetite… for ur chappies :D
So addicted to your story I check twice a day for updates – LOL
Oh just go away Jodi…aren’t you supposed to be getting married?? Bette is finally happy now! I freakin love this story..PPS:)
Fantastic! Like all of your chapters, this was a delight to read. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
I always look for an update to this story. I love the interaction between Tina and Bette. Bring on the wooing!
I understand Tina’s motivation, but Alice makes sense (odd as that comment seems, LOL). Time to pull out the big guns and put Jodi in her place, THE PAST! I hope Bette will stand her ground and reach out to show Tina how ready she is to see where they are going.
Alice is lucky that she did not get banged upside the head for barging into the room. Alice does have a point about wooing Bette. What Alice and Tina don’t know is that it will not take much to woo Bette Porter. Is there away to get jodi away from Bette, like now?
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let the “wooing” begin…..move on over J because you don’t stand a chance!!!! PPS PPS
I am so addicted too this story…so bring on the wooing…great post…=)
I love this story. It’s great. Waiting for the next update.:)
yes Tina, woo Bette and let her know how you feel :)jodi – step off biatch! great update!
i love this story! i love the premise, and i enjoy how it was presented. tina’s done enough wooing (though i won’t mind if you did a little more), and bette needs to show her that she loves her more than jodi. and janet better humiliate jodi by refusing to marry her on the wedding day! janet doesn’t deserve jodi! PPS!
great update…can’t get enough of this story…waiting for the wooing
Oh yes Tina plz ‘woo’. Alice is so onto it!!!! Love this story. PPS.
Wow, i totally love this story, it’s awesome. LMAO at the spider in the coffee, that was a nice touch to the story :)
I like to ignore Jodi, so let’s go with Tina’s concern: what would it take to woo Bette Porter? Though I’m sure that with your creative mind, you’ll have just the right answer to that (and let Tina in on it)… while I look forward to reading all about it.
WOW !! Fantastic chapter, Sabina !!! This is becoming even more thrilling than it already was. I’m telling you I’m loving this stuff so much… !!! And I love everything about this story, the pace you chose to tell it, the way you “built” your characters’ personalities, the witty banter between said characters and the flow of the dialogue, … I just can’t wait for you next installment ! Thank you !
Sabina, I love this story and your writing is great! And I’m glad to see that Tina’s exquisitely shaped ears got noticed!!!
oh Sabina, please don’t break Tina’s heart. Thank your for this another wonderful chapter..what a great surprise in the middle week, it is like sunshine in this gloomy and damp spring in our city. Please post soon, pretty please. Have a great week, Sabina.
You are not just a good writer but an amaizing story teller. I can’t wait to see Tina in action and put Jodie to shame.
Tina wooing Bette, I can’t wait to read that chapter. never read a Fan Fic that has Tina doing the wooing..got to say I love this story. Fantastic!