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    The line begins to blur PT 1

    Story written on June 16, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Words: 4979
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=61334
    Author Notes:

    What if Shane and Carmen met under diffrent circumstances?

     

    I am at a loss for words the more I look at her. Time just stands still. She laughs a little. I asked her what’s so funny.

     

    ‘What’s so funny?”

     

    “You me this. Are you thinking what I am?”

     

    “You want to know what I am thinking.”

     

    “Yeah Shane, what are you thinking?”

     

    “I am thinking why you are here? I am thinking that I have broken the code by bringing you hear. I am thinking that if we don’t finish what we started at the party that I am gonna burst.”

     

    “I know what you mean, come here.”

     

    So I walk over to her. Dying to feel her skin on my skin. Dying to know what she tastes like. Dying to know what her favorite color was. We where standing nose to nose. We are sharing the same breath. You could feel sparks all around us. I don’t move, and she  doesn’t move.

     

    “I don’t care if you can’t take it, I need to touch you.” This is what she said to me. We moved closer if that was even possible. Our lips touching but no pressure was applied. ‘Well I can’t take it anymore or I’ll die if you don’t touch me, so go ahead Carmen make your move.”

     

    Her hands are hot when they touch my neck. She pulls me down to seal the kiss. Her tongue is there then it isn’t. Her lips are like sugar, you know that song, “lips like sugar, sugar kisses.” Her hands roam all over, my hair, my tits my ass. I never had a girl give me this kind of attention before. My insides are liquid; I will love this girl forever.

     

    I pull away from her. I can’t breathe.

     

    “You need to go.”

     

    “Wait, what, why?”

     

    “Carmen I can’t figure out for the life of me, why you’re here, or why you want this.”

     

    “You can’t understand why I want you?”

     

    “No I can’t.”

     

    “What they say about you is it true?”

     

    That’s a loaded question. There’s a lot of stuff said about me.

     

    “Your gonna have to be more specific.”

     

    “About the hookers, the new girls, is it true that you find them and get them ready?”

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    5. Baby-girl, this is priceless!! Seriously, you have gotta’ continue . . . I mean finally something different, I really like this, If you don’t continue soon, I will die . . . So unless you want to be put down for 1st degree, I suggest you continue and SOON!!!! LMFAO!!! LYLAS ;-p

    8. Hey, hello . . . is this thing workin’ . . . . YOU NEED TO UPDATE NOW, LIKE NOW, AS IN NOW, WHICH MEANS RIGHT NOW!!! LMFAO!!! PLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEE!!!!!!!!! DO IT BEFORE I GO INSANE!!! LYLAS ;-p

    9. ‘West Side Story’ meets the ‘L Word’. Perfect. Love how you’ve written the characters & Shane & Carmens instant attraction to one another. Amazing start, plz post soon.

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