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The line begins to blur PT 1
She kissed like it was going to be the end of the world or something. I had to push her away just to catch my breath. She grabs my hand and sucks on two fingers and lifts the skirt she’s wearing. She guides my fingers drying fast till I feel her wetness thru her panties. Over then under then in. she’s hot and tight, really tight. I never thought I would have been turned on by it but I pushed in her harder as a result. I am finger fucking the queen of the Outsiders is all I think. I bite her neck and she pushes me away and then she smacks the shit out of me.
“What the fuck?’
“No marks, no bites Havoc can’t see me like this!”
“Fuck him and fuck you, I don’t have time for this.”
And I walk out of the bathroom.
Fucking bitch is all I think while I look for Mark. I needed to get the fuck out there before the princess got all bitter and I got my ass shot because of it. Fucking Mark was nowhere to be seen so I left the party. I am outside revving up my bike when I see Carmen . Walking out alone. I hoped she wouldn’t see me but the engine was revving and she reacted to the sound.
“Shane…..wait.”
“What. Look it’s not a big deal. You changed you mind right, your fucking drunk, or bored or a fucking psycho whatever I am leaving.”
“Take me with you.”
I looked at her trying to gage whether this was a joke or not. She had that intense look again. So against logic reason and the belief in saving my ass; I took her hand and she got on the back seat of my bike. “Is this a Ducati?” “Yeah.” I said, “You know bikes?”
“I know a lot of things.”
The more I stay in here, the more it’s not so clear.
The more I stay in here the more I disappear.
The line begins to blur CH 2
We are riding to my place. My place it sucks. Bakersfield sucks. There is nothing around. It’s a dead town. Strip malls, gigantic movie theater, taco bell everywhere you look. A person could die of boredom in this town. All Bakersfield was good for is drag racing and striping down tuners.
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(38 votes, average: 4.13 out of 5)
WOW! All I can say is: I LOVE IT!!!!So original, exciting, so perfect! The best I’ve read in a while..Please, update soon,please..
I enjoyed every word of it. Simply amazing.You are a great writer, I love how you potray Shane and Carmen.Looking forward to reading more:)
I love it…great story, very original.Update soon; please.
Simply the best!
Baby-girl, this is priceless!! Seriously, you have gotta’ continue . . . I mean finally something different, I really like this, If you don’t continue soon, I will die . . . So unless you want to be put down for 1st degree, I suggest you continue and SOON!!!! LMFAO!!! LYLAS ;-p
Wow! I love this story, the two of them are just so freaking hot! I hope you update soon!
LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!
Hey, hello . . . is this thing workin’ . . . . YOU NEED TO UPDATE NOW, LIKE NOW, AS IN NOW, WHICH MEANS RIGHT NOW!!! LMFAO!!! PLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSEEE!!!!!!!!! DO IT BEFORE I GO INSANE!!! LYLAS ;-p
‘West Side Story’ meets the ‘L Word’. Perfect. Love how you’ve written the characters & Shane & Carmens instant attraction to one another. Amazing start, plz post soon.
hey i’m first right on!!!!! LOL……babe i love the story. cant wait for the next post
Hey, very good story! Love it! Please continue!!!
this is so f*cking cool. Update soon please!
Wow another great story. I love it. Can’t wait for the next chapter.