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    The Fast and Fevered Fall- Chapter Three

    Story written on November 4, 2006 by citygirl75.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=63094
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    A noise shattered her peace.

    Bette looked up to find Tina watching her, like she had done so many times before. She managed a weak smile that Tina returned. What was left to say that could undo the mess that they found themselves in now? The links between them becoming weaker and weaker with every passing day. Tina inched forward, getting closer and closer to Bette. She so desperately wanted to hold Bette in her arms one last time. As she got nearer she could see Bette’s resolve weakening and when they were within touching distance Bette crumbled.

    The tears poured from both of their eyes. This really was the final goodbye, no going back this time. Tina held on so tight, squeezing all the breath from Bette’s body but there were no complaints from the woman that she held. She just replied in kind, holding Tina so close there was nothing between them. The honesty in their movements betrayed the depth of feeling that there still was between these two women. While they stood there the thought that if it could be this good why did it all fall apart ran through both their minds. They stayed together like this for minutes, while time stood still. Eventually Tina pulled back and cradled Bette’s face in her hands. Her thumbs wiping away the tears. Then the moment was shattered by their daughter crying for her breakfast.

    “Sorry.” said Tina, slightly embarrassed at the closeness that she had felt with Bette.

    “It’s OK. I needed that, to know that you’re still here, in some way.”

    “Bette, I’m always going to be in your life. Right now you probably think that’s a bad thing, but we have a beautiful daughter to raise. She’s our joint venture, remember?”

    “Yeah, I remember, and right now she’s a hungry joint venture.” smiled Bette, breaking the tension of earlier.

    “I should feed her.” said Tina, but not moving.

    “Yeah, you should.”

    “But…”

    “I’m still going to be here when you get back.”

    “Are you?”

    “I’m taking Angelica for the day. I can’t go anywhere until she’s ready to go and that will never happen unless you feed her.”

    “You should keep her tonight as well. Spend some quality time together.”

    “Thank you. That means a lot to me.”

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    1. Geezus wept, Tina leaves Bette for Henry??? that Henry who was in L Word…wtf??? is up with Tina’s brain, her heart is breaking as is Bette’s and Tina’s gonna go thru much more heartache just for a penis??!!! I don’t get it, I never got it and you make it so damned poignant that I AM FURIOUS RIGHT NOW THAT IT EVER CAME TO THIS!!!! I wish I understood the Henry-Tina thing but I just can’t get there…this is so sad…does Tina end up losing Angelica as well??? I think she does…to end up in a bar, a slush, going home with the bartender…hey if I was Angel and had a choice I know which mama I would go to…and I suspect that Angel might be a teenager by now???? oh hell…you bring up such anger and frustration over s3 again!!!

    2. Tina reminds me of a woman I once knew (interesting I used ‘knew’/should be was in-love with so that just shows you do move on after a great love and Bette will/or that’s my experience and opinion)…no matter how much love you give ’em they are just kinda self-destructive, they throw it back in your face, move from partner to partner, breaking everyone’s heart along the way…and eventually do end up alone with nothing and no-one…maybe it’s karmic, I dunno…but it’s terribly painful to love such a person…

    3. my my my…you’ve really got me going…final comment I swear…Just a thought…the whole Tina-Eric scenario with Tina falling for Bette in 5 minutes was an indicator of the character of the woman…we never got to see on the show the ‘7 years’…maybe it was a struggle all the way for Bette to hold onto Tina?…maybe the baby was the last ditch effort to keep them together? Maybe Bette was always more ready for the commited relationship than Tina? after all didn’t Bette propose marriage and Tina turn her down? Maybe Tina’s character was underlying all their ups and downs? and Bette’s infidelity was simply her break-out from always trying to keep things/them glued together and a part of Bette, her subconscious, really knew that it wasn’t a happening thing so she gave Tina justification to actually depart??? and only looking back as in your story does Tina see her own character and therefore own part in the demise of their relationship…oh shit…shut me up!!!!!!anywayz that sort always wakes up far too late….

    5. CG I don’t know how you manage to make me so incredibly happy in one fic, and then extremely sad in the next. Your writing is amazing, and my heart is breaking for the both of them.I think they both tried to work things out, and just couldn’t. They failed eachother,and both are to blame. I can’t even beg you for a happy ending..I don’t really know what to think at this point. PLease post soon.

    7. This was really sad…If it is killing them this much why are they parting ways? The love is there…the attraction is there…the kid is there…what gives? Rau was right in her last comment…we don’t know much about Tina’s past…she did leave Eric in a heartbeat…was this her M.O. in other relationships? Yes Bette cheated but was this the excuse Tina needed to assist in her cut and run? Keep posting.

    9. Citygirl there you go again, breaking my Tibette heart. Does it have to be this way? Is there away that they can work it out, and does Henry have to be apart of their lives?

    13. OMG! Heart breaking! I am so in pain right now. CMAO! Is there any hope for Tibettes fans? I love the way you right, I always did, but you have a gift to make a lot of readers cry!Very good story!!! Post soon! Please, can you give me a clue about a happy ending?

    15. Bloody hell, that was a stinger, this chapter hurt, full of emotions, liking the flashbacks, really wanting to know what your time jump is, but this will be revealed in time I’m sure. Thank you.

    19. You have reached in thru my monitor and torn out my heart, I am a true romantic at heart. True love can last and be all that they need, someone pls stop this train wreck. My day is hooped now!!! But tks for posting, no really thanks

    21. this is soooooooo sad, so emotional…i agree with seahurst, sounds like tina is leaving not because she loves henry more…i want to believe that they will work it out one day and be together

    22. You wrote Bette and Tina with such love for the other in this chapter that it seemed out of place that Tina would be leaving to live with Henry. I mean, the emotions that Tina was feeling, as well as Bette, it just felt that if Tina believed the relationship was truly over, it was over because they couldn’t make it work, not because she loved someone else enough to leave Bette to be with them. Does that make sense? It was a powerful chapter…thank you.

    24. Excellent chapter. So well written. You fully captured their range of emotions. I actually felt everything through your words. I agree with Seahurst. Tina is leaving b/c she doesn’t think they can work things out not b/c she loves Henry more than Bette. She needs to be on her own and not be consumed by another person. I would hope that she would develop some true autonomy and hopefully reunite w/Bette. Even on TLW , Tina can’t be by herself.

    26. When I see one of these chapters, I am like a moth to a flame. I know it os going to heart. In fact, as I read, it does hurt. Yet I cannot resist!!! When I finished the first chapter, I thought that Angelica would not exist in your tale. Knowing now that she does, your first chapter is even sadder that I had thought. If Tina can be at a bar, drinking too much into the wee hours, has been doing so for along period of time, and can bring a woman home, then Angelica no longer lives with her, This means that your story likely set 16 years or so after the (second) break-up. So sad to think that Tina has been so unhappy for so long, and I am not a Tina fan. Thanks for this and for your other stories. (And, uh, inserting a little prayer here (sorry TiBetters) that Bette has not been unhappy all of that time.)

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