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The Burden of Control – Chapter 16
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Bette: That’s fucking great, Kit. Spoken like a true
psychologistdid you go to a seminar for that enlightening insight or did you
read it in a book?
Kit: Look you can criticize me all you want, Baby Girl.
(pauses) But the truth of it comes down to thisyou can try to hide it from Tina,
from your job and anyone else you see fit.
But you won’t be able to do that forever. (pauses) For once, give that girl
the benefit of your doubt and tell her.
I saw the way she looked at you when you had lunch here a few weeks ago.
Yes, she was wary and distant. But I could she it, Bette. There was love there.
Bette: For
Kit: No Bettefor you. I thinkI think she’s trying to
protect herself. Maybe she’s just not
ready to face her feelings. She’s just
afraid that you’ll hurt her again.
Bette: (softly) I wouldn’t
Kit: Then tell her.
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Bette: (whisper) Tell her.
Bette’s internal struggle was
broken up as the front door opened and a familiar figure entered the room. Tina made her was over to the table, all the
while avoiding eye contact with the person sitting there, waiting for her. Bette rose from her seat as Tina drew close
and for a long, awkward moment the two stood next to one another in silent
confusion. Tina finally moved to sit
down and Bette followed suit, settling across from her estranged wife.
Bette: It’s nice to see you
again, Tina.
Tina: (smiles) It’s nice to
see you too, Bette.
Tina glances at the paper
mess that litters the table.
Bette: (shrugs) I got bored.
Tina: I’m sorry for making
you wait.
Bette: It’s okay. No harm
donewell the napkins may feel differently.
Tina laughs then quickly
sobers.
Tina: I’m afraid I can’t
stay.
Bette: (disappointed)
Oh. It’s okay.
Tina: Oscar called.
Apparently there was a mix up with the bookkeeping logs and nobody there seems
to know where the problem is. And I have
an appointment tomorrow, so
Bette: You have to go now.
It’s okay, I understand. You didn’t have to come all the way here to tell me.
You could have called my cell phone.
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Aw, it’s beautiful and sad. Please post soooOOOOOoon!!!!!!
This is my favorite story on the boards. So touching and heartbreaking and yet full of hope. Please let Bette tell Tina soon. The sooner the better. Bette has to let Tina help her….she’s going to need her. They’ll need each other.
Telling Tina then would have been inappropriate since she was needed back at the center; she wouldn’t have had any time to process the news with Bette. Plus, why ruin a happy moment with depressing news. Bette wasn’t just thinking of herself here, she wanted to be there for Tina’s joyous declaration. There’ll be other opportunities to tell her, say, Friday after the appointment. I do agree that the news should come from Bette’s mouth and not from anyone else’s, like Helena’s (you know the girls wouldn’t say anything).
Let Tina find out, don’t have Bette tell her per se. Also could be a double meaning in letting go of the past. Bette is part of her past, hmmm.
ok bette has to tell tina if for4 no other reason then because of the baby—i had expected last nights show to be a heart breaker but guess what i didn’t feel bad — i found a gap in the show i hadn;’t seen before–tina’s always been selfish she expected bette to take care of everything and do things her way–i can’t think of a plot where tina bought or did for bette just out of pure love in any season and most fan fic goes this way too the ones that don’t worked it out–bette should leave she’s the one who sought help proffessionally why didn’t tina think couple therapy wouldn’t now she sure pushed before everything was on the line???????? questions i hadn’t thought of until last night bette knows she loves tina and feels it–its a risk but leave her and the baby see how shes fairs bet she’ll start seeing things different and try to win bette back because she ‘ll know if she really loves her bette did all the chasing and seems to take all the s— too this season lets see who would like our girl (helena??) pure poetry?? great story your writing can’t wait for next chapters
Great story. I have a feeling that Bette did not want to put a damper on Tina’s news about the baby. I can remember when my mom told us about her breast cancer. It happened in ’78 when they removed the entire breast. For the longest time she did not want anybody to know that she survived the cancer. Only recently with the help of Relay For Life has she come to terms with what has happened to her. Now when she gets a chance she wears the yellow shirt signifing that she is a survior. She has mentioned that even with all the love from her family that she felt totally alone. I hope that soom Bette will be able to allow Tina to be there for her.
Damn hope Bette will tell Tina soon!
You really know how to keeps at the edge of anticipation..lol.. I love it though. Bette should tell Tina escpecially now that she wants her to be apart of the Baby’s life. Looking forward to the next chpater!
ohhhh,,,pls don’t wait too long to post again, I’m addicted to this story
tell her now please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bette just didnt want to put any stress on Tina now. She wants Tina to be happy. Tina will finf out soon enough
oh, this was beautiful and sad…tina happy because she’s closer to bette now, but she still doesn’t know about bette…maybe after the ultrasound she will tell her
I’ll just have to wait and see what you come up with other than the umbilical cord stem cells. Of course Bette has to survive until then anyway.
Perhaps I’ve been in some sort of a coma induced by S3, but I really don’t know how I’ve missed your story. I should have been sleeping a looooooooong time ago but here I am at 4:35 am and I’ve just finished reading through this entire story…thank God I don’t have to work today. I suck for missing it all this time! Anyway, your writing is amazing and I’ll definitely continue to follow your story. I can relate to the medical stuff as my dad has cancer. I trust any decision you make re: the direction of the story. I look forward to the next chapter.
bette has to tell her and please post soon the writers are what give us hope
bette has to tell her and please post soon the writers are what give us hope
What a beautiful chapter! I love your story and look forward to your posts a heck of a lot more than I look forward to Sunday nights. Thanks so much for sharing your talent.
Keep going, I know Bette didn’t tell Tina yet because of Tina’s pregnancy and wanted this to be a happy occasion, but I think Bette is a bit of a coward. And I’m just at the edge of my seat waiting for more.
The more Bette waits to tell Tina worst will get..she is gonna start to get really sick and it will be even more shocking for Tina…if she tells now at least Tina will have some time to get prepared for when Bettes get worse. Post soon!.
Yeah, Bette has to tell her. Great chapter, please post soon.