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    Show Me Where It Hurts Baby

     

    Tears formed in athlete’s eyes because of both the agony and pleasure somehow existed together. When Alice actually pulled the nipple with enough pressure, a tear dropped right onto her pillow.

    Dana’s hands were not moving but her hips thrust gently, unable to deny the tension. Alice freed her right hand in one quick motion while her left still rested under the clothing. “You’re still in pain, baby…” she said and dipped her fingers along and under Dana’s arms, reaching right under her pants. Barely touching her ***** she asked innocently: “Is this where it hurts baby?” When no answer came but more heavy breathings she continued, “I’m afraid it’s bad Dana, it’s swollen.”

     

    Expert fingers teased the ***** with circular movements. “Maybe I should massage it to ease the pain…” Alice suggested, watching Dana in such a delicious pain. “…or rub it a little?”

     

    “Does it hurt, now?” she asked when she pressed two of her fingers really hard into the tennis player’s core, invoking a loud moan  of pleasure from Dana.

     

    Alice started to pull off her fingers out of the pants, “I guess it does, sorry…” She reasoned while starting to lose her player face. Dana grabbed her hand, obviously she wouldn’t let go, so close to the ultimate release. She guided Alice’s hand back to where it was and made sure to keep it there by covering it and moving it with both of her hands.

     

    Alice started to work her fingers once again, this time merciless. “My God! Alice!!!” Dana cried out.Alice’s other hand assaulted Dana’s *****, belly, neck… Rubbing and grabbing and pinching…

     

    “Alice!!!” Dana whispered melodically when she came. And did she came hard! The person who did this to her was her secret crush Alice! And it happened so out of nowhere!

     

    Alice watched Dana all the time, she almost literally had more pleasure by watching her than the pleasure she gave Dana herself. As if…

     

    Feeling Dana’s juices around her fingers she plastered a magnificent smile and met her best friend’s eyes with her own. “Baby…” she started jokingly. “If it was a pimple, I think I just made it explode!”

     

    “Shut up smart ***** and kiss me already!!!!”

    THE END

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    Comments

    1. That’s not fair, you guys are giving me a bad reputation here. I merely suggest and you guys carries out the suggestion ;). Ben, you’re so pervy and it shows in this PWP. LOL I love it! Hot as hell, what more can we ask for? Hmm…maybe followup with aggressive Dana?

    2. LOL I totally know where you’re coming from, layla’s such an instigator. She gets me to do some of the oddest things. She gives you some of the best ideas and you can’t help but write them. Maybe she’s brain washing us? But at least caring out her brain washing pays off because this was a nice little fic Good Job!

    3. that was great but I do feel that you could of had a bit more in this story like dana could have then done alice just a though I loved it please post soon

    4. That was great! Remember, our conversation…this isn’t really a PWP. :) There is a plot – sex! I loved the teasingness showed by Alice. It played perfectly along with Dana’s embarassment. I’m working on my own Danish PWP. Perhaps I’ll try to get it done sooner as a reward for your having written such a good PWP. ;)

    5. I’m starting to worry about us Danish writers. We gone from fluff, to PWP and torture fics, maybe it’s the previews of Alice in handcuffs(?) that has us all in this mood(you know what kind of mood). Well you know the rule dont you? If Jac requests something we have to do it, so I look forward to the next installment of this story. LOL

    6. OMG, I really could get used to reading Porn without Plot! It’s so hot that my screen has fogged up, which is good but it could also mean I’ve got to stop putting my coffee below it. Either way, that was a fast recovery for me and I loved it! Hoping there’s more! Kathy loved it more so than me, which I thought was impossible. Obviously, it isn’t.

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