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    Show Me Where It Hurts Baby

    Story written on November 15, 2005 by Bconfused.
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    Words: 1911
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=57666
    Author Notes:

    Danish Story – Sharing a room with your secret crush?

    – Introduction –


    ( Alice and Dana were still friends although they both started to feel love and lust towards each other. The whole group went to Barbados to spend some time together and enjoy the sea and the sun. Alice and Dana shared a bedroom with two beds. )

     

    On the third night…


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    Alice woke up suddenly when she heard some low moaning and rushed breathing from Dana’s bed. Knowing what Dana was doing secretly, her smiled got bigger. With a quick move; she stood up, turn on the lamp on the table between both beds and sat over Dana’s bed.

     

    Dana’s face was blank although blushed with a very dark shade of red, her hands still lying under white covers between her legs. She was caught, right before the mind exploding release; the situation and embarrasment speeded her breathing.

     

    “Dana what’s wrong? Are you OK?” Alice asked with a concerned face even though she was ready to burst out laughing. Or more deliciously, ready to join the game.

     

    She leaned over Dana, put her left hand open wide on Dana’s chest  between her ***** while the other was supporting her on Dana’s far side. “Something is wrong Dana, with your breathing. Is it your heart?” the blonde caressed Dana’s chest, barely touching  her *****, as if to feel her heartbeats

     

    Dana protested by shaking her head, unable to say anything. All she wanted was to die right that moment to get over the embarrasment. But then again, Alice’s long desired touches would definitely do that in minutes.

     

    “I can’t feel your heartbeat. Is it OK if  I-” she smoothly slipped the same hand under Dana’s white tanktop, again decently between her *****. “-try that under your shirt?” she continued disabling Dana’s answer. Dana’s body quivered with this unexpected touch.

     

    All Alice wanted to do was to take Dana and kiss every inch of her but she wanted to do more teasing before the final give-in.

     

    Dana’s tanktop was tight, so tight that in fact Dana’s nipples almost threatened to pop out of the cotton material. Alice’s mouth watered with this sight and she frowned, “Oh my God! Dana, are you cold? Look at your nipples. They’re so sensitive and hard. Are you freezing? Do they hurt?” Alice had to bit her tongue to keep a serious face, “They look almost unnatural. It’s probably inappropirate to ask but can I feel them?” she asked and as soon as she did, she imprisoned one hard nipple between her two fingers. Then continued casually “…you know, I’m curious about human body.”

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    1. That’s not fair, you guys are giving me a bad reputation here. I merely suggest and you guys carries out the suggestion ;). Ben, you’re so pervy and it shows in this PWP. LOL I love it! Hot as hell, what more can we ask for? Hmm…maybe followup with aggressive Dana?

    8. LOL I totally know where you’re coming from, layla’s such an instigator. She gets me to do some of the oddest things. She gives you some of the best ideas and you can’t help but write them. Maybe she’s brain washing us? But at least caring out her brain washing pays off because this was a nice little fic Good Job!

    10. that was great but I do feel that you could of had a bit more in this story like dana could have then done alice just a though I loved it please post soon

    11. That was great! Remember, our conversation…this isn’t really a PWP. :) There is a plot – sex! I loved the teasingness showed by Alice. It played perfectly along with Dana’s embarassment. I’m working on my own Danish PWP. Perhaps I’ll try to get it done sooner as a reward for your having written such a good PWP. ;)

    13. I’m starting to worry about us Danish writers. We gone from fluff, to PWP and torture fics, maybe it’s the previews of Alice in handcuffs(?) that has us all in this mood(you know what kind of mood). Well you know the rule dont you? If Jac requests something we have to do it, so I look forward to the next installment of this story. LOL

    14. OMG, I really could get used to reading Porn without Plot! It’s so hot that my screen has fogged up, which is good but it could also mean I’ve got to stop putting my coffee below it. Either way, that was a fast recovery for me and I loved it! Hoping there’s more! Kathy loved it more so than me, which I thought was impossible. Obviously, it isn’t.

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