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Rocks,Hard Places and Rehab Chapter II
Tina and Bette: so you two didn’t come together
Carmen: no, she is with her friends tonight
Helena: hey Carmen, I didn’t know you were here
Carmen: yeah, how are you (hugging Helena)
Helena: never better
Carmen: Oh, I have something for you. I had it for four years now and I want to give it to you. Are you going to be here tomorrow?
Helena: actually I will be at the planet?
Carmen: okay, meet you at the planet
Sloan finally found Carmen
Carmen: hey you found me, (smiling placing kiss on her cheek)
Alice notice what Carmen did
Sloan: hey everyone
Tasha: how do you like the club?
Sloan: it’s great.
Bette: want to sit, need a drink
Sloan: water please
Two girls walked passed Sloan blew a kiss and waived
Alice: are you a lothario?
Sloan: who?
Tina and Tasha: you have to excuse her she is rude
Sloan: no really, it’s Okay. It gives her personality
Sloan sat next to Carmen
Carmen: what time are you leaving?
Sloan: why?
Alice: she might need a ride home, because we are getting her smashed tonight.
Sloan: oh, really
Carmen smiled and winked
One of the girls came back to ask Sloan to dance
Carmen hesitated to put her hand on her arm as to say don’t go
Sloan: hold on BrB
Alice: okay, it’s killing me what is it with you and your roommate?
Carmen: nothing, that’s what we are roommates
Tasha: okay, I think you had too much to drink Alice
Shane was outside the club with jenny
Jenny was crossing her arms in front of her chest. “Why did you go to the bathroom Shane”?
Shane: (cold) because I had to
Jenny: Carmen
Shane: what? No, No (Lilting up a cigarette) what r u talking about.
Jenny: it’s Carmen, you wanted to see Carmen
Shane: it’s a bathroom jenny, people use it
Jenny: you want to fuck her don’t you, what am I not good enough now that you have seen her.
Shane: O, come on jenny. Lay off you. Fuck this… know what I am going home
Jenny: (cupping her face) okay, I …I am sorry Shane. But I know you still miss her
Shane: (shaking her head) No, No you are not going to go psychology on me not this time.
Pulling on her smoke
Jenny: I go with you
Shane: what ever just get the car I am saying goodnights to everyone
Shane walks back inside
Shane: I’m leaving, Carmen it was nice to see you but I have to leave, maybe one day we can get together.
Alice call me when I don’t have jenny
Alice: okay, shaney
Carmen: what was that all about?
Bette: that is another day,
Tina: it might take whole day to tell you that story
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(22 votes, average: 3.59 out of 5)
wow..i think this will be the 2nd Shane/Carmen centric story that I enjoy reading..thanks
Alice and Tasha are way cute. :) I liked Carmen’s reaction to Shane and Jenny: “I thought I and jenny were bad enough, but Shane and Jenny that was unbelievable.” Heh, yeah, Shane + Jenny = Disaster! Even Shane and Jenny know it’s a B.S. relationship. Wow, this Sloan is the perfect person. She has the job, the car, the look. . . the eye of a certain Carmen de la Pica Morales. *wink* But it seems like maybe Helena has Sloan’s eye? Okay, I’m off to read the third part. Again, thanks for posting. :)