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Original of the Species
Each of them took a side of the king sized bed and stared intensely at the other while they slowly undressed themselves. Once their clothes were discarded, except the underwear, they stood there for a few minutes admiring each other bodies and anticipating what was yet to come.
Bette was the first to crawl on the bed towards the centre of bed like a hungry predator, where she was quickly intercepted by her prey. They started kissing each other with a passion neither had ever experienced before. The blonde’s hands quickly found a way of undoing Bette’s bra and something similar happened to her own.
Two very audible moans were heard as the naked skin of their bellies and breasts came into contact. Bette’s hands started roaming up and down Tina’s back, trying to touch as much skin as possible. The blonde’s hands were trapped in Bette’s curls, messing them up.
Soon Bette was lying on top of Tina and each of their thighs was into full contact with the other’s centre, still covered by underwear.
“You are so beautiful” Bette softly whispered and the blonde sweetly smiled at her.
“You are the most beautiful woman I have ever met” Tina replied blushing, although her face was already red with arousal so it didn’t really show. “And the best kisser” The blonde quickly added and Bette’s mouth started devouring her own again.
After a while of excruciatingly slow kisses, while the brunette’s right hand took its time to explore and play with both of Tina’s breasts, the blonde decided there was only so much teasing she could take at this point. So in one quick motion she was now laying on top of the chef.
“I’ve never wanted anyone like I want you” Tina said surprised at her boldness.
“Oh… Tina” Bette said clearly in sexual agony, lifting herself enough to reach for the blonde’s lips. Tina welcomed the kiss and made it deeper and more passionate if that was at all possible.
Then the blonde decided to start her descent on Bette’s body covering with her hands and tongue as much skin as possible. She licked and kissed and caressed the brunette’s neck, chest, breasts and flat stomach. Once she reached the waistband of Bette’s underwear she started to softly kiss and play with it.
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“I think…” that was HOT!!!
YES!! That was amazing! Great job, as always. :)
yeah bette… cone on tell us what you are thinking… i can fill in the blanks… love this story… pps
You were kidding about NC-17 because I need to get myself together, that was incredible.Very HOT HOT HOT. Hahahaha
Wow! That was just simply absolutely amazing. Thank you. Wonderful chapter. Love this story
You did an amazing job with the NC-17. That was reeeally hot.Please post again soon. I can’t wait to hear Bette explain to Tina what she’s thinking.
After a hard day at work it was lovely to come home to a new chapter. excellent chapter by the way
Good grief! Don’t EVER doubt your NC-17s again, ya hear?!? That was HOT! PPS!
Ummm…your NC-17s are the bomb!!! What is Bette thinking? The cliffhangers are killing me! GREAT job!!!
Holy hotness! I love it! PPS!
HOT HOT HOT… i like :) pps
Just simply perfect. Can´t wait for Bette to express her thoughts.
I just read your fic in one sitting and it’s great and very well written so I hope you’ll continue it.
Im just re reading some stories and i love all of yours i hope you continue.
PPS .. love the stories.. porfavor
Great chapter, believe me you can write a N-17 chapter very well. HOT!
Oh damn that was fucking hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Well…, that was worth all the waiting!!
Oh so yummy and tasty! You did awesome for your NC-17…HOT!!!
…ehm…How soon can you post?! :D
My stars, why in the world would you think you are not good at writing NC-17’s, if you were any better, I don’t think I could stand it. Fantastic job!! They are so good together in every way. Surely you will tell us what Bette was thinking and this NC-17 will continue for a little bit. Awesome post. Thanks for posting.
I think you did great, but you did not just leave it there? I want to know what Bette is thinking too. pps
That you are HOT one Tina Kennard and I am not letting you go.And you are not good at NC-17? then we might pass out when you get good lol. PPVS
now that was freaking fantastic!!
I cosidered that to be pretty awesome writing!
love ,love,love it.
That was SMOKING HOT!!!! Very Amazing!!!! We so need to know what Bette is thinking. Thank you PPVS
I cosidered that to be pretty awesome writing!
wow! yes Anne cmon on what is bette thinking, 2 great chapters more please xxx
Wonderful post anne83… now please post soon cause we want to know what is Bette thinking!!! ;) PPS
Totally love this story. Looking forward to more.
Wow, who else needs a cold shower? I was totally hoping that you would have Bette carry Tina to the bedroom. And alas, you made my day! It is so incredibly sexy being carried to the bed. Ugh, I can’t describe it! This chapter was too sexy for words! PPS!
Now that was hot. PPS
Well that ws hot… interested in knowing what Bette is thinking..PPVS and thanks !!!
Ummmm, Wow, that was incredible. I think that Bette has fallen head over heels in love with Tina. I also think that Tina is in that same boat.
Wow what a beautiful word you used.. Intense and hot but very amazingly gorgeous! can’t find the proper word to discribe how beautiful the word is.
hey, just read ur story but i love it!! you should absolutly continue it!!
Oh my god that was hot and intense. I had a moment, your writing is so descriptive.