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Original of the Species
Bette never knew this level of intimacy in making out existed and she couldn’t help but to feel overwhelmed by it. After all she didn’t know Tina very well and yet it felt like they had been together for years. The blonde was experiencing something pretty similar but she knew that sooner or later this would have to develop into something else than just kisses, otherwise she was sure she would explode.
After another fifteen minutes of making out, they were again tangled up in a passionate and lustful kiss and Tina realized she had reached her limit so she broke the kiss and looked down at her right hand, which instinctively travelled from the brunette’s hand towards her now slightly swollen lips, gently caressing them. Tina looked up and locked eyes with Bette, unconsciously biting her lower lip.
“Spend the night with me” Bette said with a sultry voice and Tina just nodded unable to find her voice.
Bette lifted herself from the lounge chair carrying Tina with her. The blonde was both surprised and aroused by Bette’s action, so she moved her legs around the brunette’s waist as she sank her hands on Bette’s soft curls.
“I never thought you would be so strong” Tina seductively said on Bette’s ear right before sucking on her earlobe and neck.
“Oh god Tina” Bette muttered as they were entering the house. Tina’s actions had made her lost some of that strength, so she pinned the blonde’s torso against one of the walls and placed her hands right under Tina’s ass in order to regain balance and composure.
Tina was incredibly aroused by these actions so she started hungrily kissing Bette. She captured Bette’s tongue and started sucking on it, as the brunette also engaged in this little war over control.
“Take me to your bedroom” Tina huskily said as she broke the kiss only to recapture the brunette’s lips once her request was over. Bette did as told and slowly and carefully guided them upstairs towards the bedroom.
Once inside she put Tina down and proceeded to light a few candles that were part of the decoration of the room. The dim lights provided them enough visibility of their lustful and hungry eyes. They were devouring each other with their eyes and their kisses, now it was time to do it with the rest of their bodies.
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“I think…” that was HOT!!!
YES!! That was amazing! Great job, as always. :)
yeah bette… cone on tell us what you are thinking… i can fill in the blanks… love this story… pps
You were kidding about NC-17 because I need to get myself together, that was incredible.Very HOT HOT HOT. Hahahaha
Wow! That was just simply absolutely amazing. Thank you. Wonderful chapter. Love this story
You did an amazing job with the NC-17. That was reeeally hot.Please post again soon. I can’t wait to hear Bette explain to Tina what she’s thinking.
After a hard day at work it was lovely to come home to a new chapter. excellent chapter by the way
Good grief! Don’t EVER doubt your NC-17s again, ya hear?!? That was HOT! PPS!
Ummm…your NC-17s are the bomb!!! What is Bette thinking? The cliffhangers are killing me! GREAT job!!!
Holy hotness! I love it! PPS!
HOT HOT HOT… i like :) pps
Just simply perfect. Can´t wait for Bette to express her thoughts.
I just read your fic in one sitting and it’s great and very well written so I hope you’ll continue it.
Im just re reading some stories and i love all of yours i hope you continue.
PPS .. love the stories.. porfavor
Great chapter, believe me you can write a N-17 chapter very well. HOT!
Oh damn that was fucking hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Well…, that was worth all the waiting!!
Oh so yummy and tasty! You did awesome for your NC-17…HOT!!!
…ehm…How soon can you post?! :D
My stars, why in the world would you think you are not good at writing NC-17’s, if you were any better, I don’t think I could stand it. Fantastic job!! They are so good together in every way. Surely you will tell us what Bette was thinking and this NC-17 will continue for a little bit. Awesome post. Thanks for posting.
I think you did great, but you did not just leave it there? I want to know what Bette is thinking too. pps
That you are HOT one Tina Kennard and I am not letting you go.And you are not good at NC-17? then we might pass out when you get good lol. PPVS
now that was freaking fantastic!!
I cosidered that to be pretty awesome writing!
love ,love,love it.
That was SMOKING HOT!!!! Very Amazing!!!! We so need to know what Bette is thinking. Thank you PPVS
I cosidered that to be pretty awesome writing!
wow! yes Anne cmon on what is bette thinking, 2 great chapters more please xxx
Wonderful post anne83… now please post soon cause we want to know what is Bette thinking!!! ;) PPS
Totally love this story. Looking forward to more.
Wow, who else needs a cold shower? I was totally hoping that you would have Bette carry Tina to the bedroom. And alas, you made my day! It is so incredibly sexy being carried to the bed. Ugh, I can’t describe it! This chapter was too sexy for words! PPS!
Now that was hot. PPS
Well that ws hot… interested in knowing what Bette is thinking..PPVS and thanks !!!
Ummmm, Wow, that was incredible. I think that Bette has fallen head over heels in love with Tina. I also think that Tina is in that same boat.
Wow what a beautiful word you used.. Intense and hot but very amazingly gorgeous! can’t find the proper word to discribe how beautiful the word is.
hey, just read ur story but i love it!! you should absolutly continue it!!
Oh my god that was hot and intense. I had a moment, your writing is so descriptive.