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    Story written on July 15, 2005 by ilovekc.
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    Number of Comments: 35
    Words: 8236
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55411
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    The gang faces a tragedy and must deal with pulling the pieces together.

     

    Okay, Im off.  After she swooped in for one last kiss, Dana managed to break away and get out of the apartment, shutting the door in the process.

     

    For a moment Alice looked at the door with a goofy grin on her face, her fingers unconsciously brushing her own lips in remembrance of Dans kiss.

     

    God, Alwhy dont you ***** the door already?  Picking up another pillow, her friend once again threw it at Alices head, only to have the blonde pounce on her in return.  The two girls wrestled drunkenly, before settling down on the floor with their heads touching.

     

    While moms gone lets have some real fun.  Al stood and retrieved her stash; carefully she rolled a joint for the two friends to share.  After taking a hit she passed it to Shane who smiled and took it willingly.


     

     

    Dana drove the three blocks to the liquor store.  It was only one a.m., but most of the city was sleeping and the street seemed uncharacteristically dark.  As she was pulling in to park she heard a loud voice shouting from the corner.  She turned her head to look and witnessed a young man weeping and begging on his knees.  The light from the street lamp splayed across the young mans face full of fear, causing her hair to stand up on the back of her neck.  She watched as a second man behind the crouching figure stepped into the light.  The mans face had a large scar running the length of it and his eyes seemed as dark as coals.  She held her breath when she saw the man raise a gun to the begging mans chest, she didnt even here the gun go off.  Gasping she watched as the kneeling man fell to the ground blood staining the cold sidewalk.  She set in her car numb, until the killer walked off as if nothing happened, in to the dark of night.

     

    Regaining her composure, Dana ran to the body and dropped to her knees.  The young man stared up at her, his mouth choking on his own blood.  Im gonna call for help!  She reached into her pocket for her cell when the bleeding man grabbed her arm, and motioned for her to bend in.  Tears falling freely down her fans, she scooted closer to the dying figure, the blood staining her pants. 

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    2. great story. and yes you had me in tears also. I sure hope you’re a fast writer, looking foward to the next chapter. And I will be checking daily, no make that several times a day.

    8. oh my god, it would definetly be a crime to not continue this story! You’ve got me totally hooked. Im so glad Dana is alive. Great idea for a new and very different story. Can’t wait for the next part! :)

    14. OH my god this is brilliant and I can’t wait to read to rest please post soon I love it and I hope all goes well for everyone and I hope that they all can forgive her for having to do it

    15. hey thats was soo good but sad! plz post the next bit 2 it would love 2 see how is all ends! Will Al be with Dana agen i really hope they do! keep up the good work! xx

    16. I was crying my eyes out and then.. it was quite a shock that Dana was alive. I never thought that something like this would be found in TLW fanfic section :) I’m totally loving this, continue, please!

    17. First i want to say i live you to (my name is Kc) and this story ROCKS!! I was yelling at the computer for Dana’s “death” awesome twist keep it up

    22. wow that was fvcking good! you got to continue this…its really awesome and i know you gonna do great with this story just as your other one. Excellent start! i cant wait to read more about it :)

    25. This is my first time ever commenting on anyone’s story but I have to say this this story is absolutly phenominal. I really like the aspect that everyone is so emotionally distrought over Dana’s death. Trully great writting. Keep it up and post soon I really want to know what happens next.

    26. Ok.Ok.Ok… my girls AND a murder mystery?!! I’m hooked! Please, continue. Great start, BTW! I love the twists and the turmoil that they are going through. I can actually visualize them all… very touching. I’m loving this story! Keep up the wonderful writing!

    29. Wauw, what a beginning!. You definitely got my attention 100 %. I just hope that everything will be good in the end for Alice and Dana. Please don´t keep us in suspense too long before the continuation of the story. So Please post soon!

    35. i definately like this story! I like the way thet all take care of each other. And then the end, well, i’m looking forward to whats gonna happen next! post soon please!

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