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Never Been Kissed – A Tibette Story – MyStyle ;) ~ Chapter 14 ~
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‘TINA! Give it up. You lost the only story you were ever able to do….just get out….’
‘Max…’
‘OUTTTTT!’ he yelled, pointing to the door.
With that, Tina jumped to her feet and made for the door. Once safely out in the hall the tears began to flow.
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Chapter 14
Monday morning arrived and Tina walked into school, bags under her eye’s, thanks to the lack of sleep she had over the weekend. Since leaving Max’s office on Saturday afternoon, she’d locked herself in her apartment and hadn’t spoken to anyone. That wasn’t through lack of trying on other peoples part either.
Helena had over heard some girls talking in the office canteen about how Tina had been seen running from the building crying. As soon as she’d heard that she’s rushed back to her office to call her. After leaving 3 messages she’d given up and gone around to her place. Tina, of course hadn’t felt like seeing anyone so hadn’t answered the door.
Bette had also rang on the Sunday lunctime, asking how her meeting with Max had went. Tina wanted to tell her, but at the same time it was her problem and she didn’t want to burden Bette with it. Scaring her off so soon wouldn’t be the best plan.
Now, as she walked into her registration class, Kate was waving at her excitedly.
‘Tina! You’ll never guess what!!’
‘Hey, what’s up?’ Tina asked.
‘Sophie, Megan and Kirsty have been put on kitchen duty for the week. It’s their punishment for that photo they put in the paper…’
*Good going Bette* Tina thought, knowing she’d of had something to do with it.
‘They have to wear hair nets and everything’ Kate continued, a satisfied grin spread across her face.
‘That’s great Kate’ she replied, trying to act enthused.
Kate noticed her depressive response.
‘Are you Ok, Tina? How’s things with Bette?’
‘Yea….well, everythings great with Bette’ she whispered. ‘It’s work. My boss is royally pissed and it looks like I’ve lost him his job aswell as mine..’
‘Hows that?’ Kate asked, furrowing her eyebrows.
Tina realised the class was becoming crowded so decided not to continue.
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I can see Jenny pulling this shit, but Max? WTF????? They should’ve just stopped this Mickey Mouse shit before it got out of hand. It’s not that fucking hard to figure out. Actually, if I was Tina, I would’ve just quit as soon as Max made it clear he wanted the Bette story.
I had the strangest feeling that he was not really a friend after all to Tina. I knew that snake would do the story but I always thought that he would physically do the story not someone else. Get them back together hurry..Please, Pretty Please *on my knees begging*
Hey, I have been loving this story! it is great. I am not opposed to having the chapter in 2 sections if it means that we get another update soon ;) Anyways, I hope that everything can work out for Bette and Tina and I hope Tina’s story kicks jenny’s ass!!
I’s ON now. Look out Jenny, here comes Tina. An engraged Tina is not something Jenny wants to see. PPS
Please tell me that Tina had the presents of mind to wear the necklace camera and film every word. She can get back at Max and Jenny at the same time and maybe be promoted to his job in the process. They both sooo deserve what ever happens to them.
i again read this at work last night and babe you didn’t disapoint… i love the banter between bette and tina and the ending… well you just reinforced why i hate max and jenny even more… i hope tina has something good up her sleve to get them back… remember my words from a lot of chapters ago… “PAYBACK IS A BITCH AND THE BITCH IS NAMED BETTE PORTER AND TINA KENNARD” PPS
wow another amazing chapter im loving your story i cant get enough thanks for sharing pps
Ahem, YOU DON’T MESS WITH TINA KENNARD WHEN SHE IS PISSED. I hope that Jenny pays for her actions when the truth comes out. Poor Bette, she did nothing wrong but is getting the raw end of the deal. I hope that Tina can get Bette to understand that it was not her but Jenny. I knew I hated Jenny but I definitely HATE her more now.
OMG!!! I am soooooooo Fucking Pissed!! How can that dumb ass B*tch do that!!! And how could Max allow her to do it!!!! OMG! I hope that Tina and Bette stay together…Please don’t let them be apart!! I need them to be together! I hope that Max and Jenny BURN IN HELL!!!
^I just read the story and I was just a little over excited.
Ten pages and I’m still looking for more. What a great chapter! I have no doubt that you will allow karma to bite Max and Jenny in their asses… Hate to hear that the story is coming to an end, but have certainly enjoyed every word!
Tina needs to get to Bette, not that she’s going to listen to her right now.Alice needs to not jump to conclusions. Jenny, I can’t even write what I would do to her.
Don’t have time to read so I skipped to the end. All I have to say right now is, “Duh oh!” :O Will read later. :D
How can anyone play with someone’s life like that just for a sake of some cheap paper, as Max and Jenny did to Bette, who had caused them no harm in anyway! God I hope they remember that Karma’s a Bitch and its gonna come back and bite hard their Cheating Insensitive Asses!!!! Fucking B*****s!!! I hate them!! Please make it all right for TiBette. Can’t wait to read next Hurryy :)
Tina needs to go to Kit. PPS
I gotta say… I’m not much of a TiBette shipper, but, your story has me hooked. Keep up the great writing. PPS!
Okay you cannot leave this story until next friday, you must post like now! Now I can say that Max is an asshole, but money talks! Wow, the shit has really hit the fan!
Oh OH – I hope Tina can kick Jenny’s and Max’ a**. And I hope Tina succeeds in producing Bette’s reputation with the help of Helena, Alice and Kit again. I also hope that Tina can save her love to Bette. I would proceed against the newspaper. Please post very soon. Can’t wait!!!
Oh God, this is really bad. I hope Tina kicks Jenny’s ass. I hope everything will be ok with Bette, Tina needs to find her and soon! PPS!!
oh man i so hate jenny and max right now. i hope that tina writes a good story and destroys jennys carrier and maybe even maxs…and with bette, well she has to listen to tina and trust her..
Ouch. No way in hell I’d stay with that job with people fucking me over like that… I’d sell the real story to their biggest competitor. Then everyone involved in the fabricating would get fucked. Hope there is some happiness soon. I feel really bad for Bette thinking that Tina never cared about her. PPS.
Yay !!! Way to go Tina !! Excellent twist, Kelloggs ! I love this kind of drama !!! Well, of course I’m only saying this because no matter wat happens I know there will be a happy ending ( or at least, I hope so… You wouldn’t have set us up, right ? That would be so mean of you. LOL ! ). Anyway, I absolutely loved this “intense” chapter. How enthralling !! And indeed, I think you have no right to deprive us of your tremendous talent, therefore you MUST continue this story ( LOL ! OK, sorry, I’m getting slightly carried away… ), a sequel would be truly appreciated.
WOW!!! To play with a person’s life like that is just so wrong. I really do Hate Max and Jenny. Tina needs to write a atory a expose the truth. I do hope Alice and Kit will here Tina out, and tell her where Bette is. Thanks PPS
Jeezz…. instead of writing the story to her supposedly company, she should just sell the story to another publisher so that Max won’t get a dime or credit over it.. I’m pissed to see how people could utterly destroy someone’s life just to save their own selfish small benefit. Sigh… hopefully since fate brought B&T together… it would be reuniting them too? ;) I love the chapter… how it brought me through emotional roller coaster ride. And really hoping that you wont’ be ending this story so soon :(
Sure tina can sue or Bette can, but at the end of the day you said it yourself. This false story will follow her for life, she will never ever be truly believed again. Tina should have stopped long before this happened, at the first moment that she realized that Bette was not the predator that a few teachers can be. I can’t see Bette every really trusting Tina again.
Fantastic writing there kellog, plz post soon; and someone strangle jenny, max and miss sophie 4 me!!
You said I’d be angry after this post.. Understatement or what?! As if I didn’t hate Jenny enough! And Max.. What the hell was he thinkning? You never abandon your friend’s best interests like that! Slimeball! Grr. B&T were so cute beforehand! I hope you discover a way to continue this beyond next week.. I love this story and it’s a shame to see it end. However, if that’s what you want, then so be it :) Ideas for continuing: Getting them back together, getting Jenny/Max back.. I don’t think they can legally put her name on that document.. And it’s slander against Bette because she KNEW.. Sue them! Tina / Bette / Kate can testify that Tina told her at the hotel! You could have the story extend to clearing Bette’s reputation, the outcome of the basketball tournament, Tina’s job, the firing of Jenny and Max for misconduct.. erm, how the couple progress from their misunderstanding, etc? I don’t intend to beg this week for an earlier post because that would merely bring the end closer :( But do what you wish regarding the split post.. it’s your story :) And I look forward to your future stories after this. Thanks, ADx :)
WOW!
Damn poor B&T and can’t wait to see Tina kick their ass!