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Music to my Ears (chap 6)
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“No problem” Bette answered turning back to the sink and washing up the last couple of plates before walking into the livingroom to give Tina some privacy.
“Hey baby sis” Kit acknowledged as Bette came and sat on the arm beside Kit.
“Been a long day for her” Bette smiled nodding towards Meghan.
“Yeah, she pretty much passed out the minute she sat down” laughed Kit.
Just then Tina came into the livingroom.
“Everything ok?” Bette asked automatically.
Tina couldn’t help but feel her heart jump with excitement a second as she heard the brunette’s words of concern. “Yeah, everything is fine. I just have a client coming in for an emergency filling, I hope you all don’t mind…” Tina began.
“Of course not” Kit said easing herself up from under Meghan, “it’s time we get going anyways.”
“You really don’t have to leave” Tina began to protest.
“No, it’s quite alright” Bette reassured, “we maybe be famous rock stars, but we definitely don’t live the typical rock star life, I need my 8 hours sleep” she smiled.
“It was very kind of you to have us over though” Shane added as she stood up and walked towards the door.
“Well it was our pleasure” Alice said which received a glare from Tina. Alice shrugged her shoulders and mouthed ‘what’ at Tina.
“Let me show you out” Tina said with a roll of her eyes and opening the door gesturing down the stairs.
They all walked down to the front doors of the dental office and proceeded to say their goodbyes.
“We will have to do this again sometime” Tina said looking directly at Bette.
“Yeah, we’d really like that” Bette said not taking her eyes off of Tina.
Alice, Kit and Shane could only roll their eyes at the two women.
“Ok baby sis, let’s get going” Kit laughed as she put her hands on Bette’s shoulders and guided her towards the door.
Just then someone walked into the dental office causing all the women to turn to see who it was.
“YOU!” both Alice and Bette said pointing towards the woman.
“What?” both Alice and Bette said pointing towards each other.
“What?” they repeated again.
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Dana was probably too busy staring at Bette’s feet earlier and walked into something which knocked out a filling. I must say that London really works as the setting here since this reminds me of a British comedy.
Ha Ha Ha Dana is wierd enough without having a foot fetish. Poor Alice she always thinks the world revolves around her. Hopefully Bette and Tina will get to see each other without the gang soon. PPS.
ROFLMAOOOO!!!!! This was hysterical. You really capture the humor K. Thanks for the PM. Ness said she not only would pay for the dinner, but also a few canoli’s at one of the best in Boston’s North End! Whatever you do….post soon.
So cute…loving the foot fetish! Oh, to be ‘stalker worthy’… Alice is too funny. How can you state that your story is nothing impressive?? It’s always a wonderful read. And by the way, you should have earned that supper chapters ago. Thanks for the fun post!
This is so funny and love it, and now the whole gang are here and let the fun began. Please post soon, thanks!
Thanks for the PM! It’s a pleasure to read a well written story, and I think you’ve succeeded in giving us a surprising twist at the conclusion of this post. I’m looking forward to hearing more of Dana’s explanation. Thanks for writing!
wtf Dana u’u like her feet’????? too rare…and so Danaerish…. really enjoyed their dinner…big smile…pps
You’re a nut, ya know that K!! LOL! I’m assuming the feet business is another part of the bet. You shoul at least tell us who put you up to this madness so that we can thank them!! I hope you’ll start another story if this one is ending, love your writing!
Oh man that was funny. Liked her feet, I really did not see that one coming. Does Tina and Megan get to go to the concert on Friday? I would really like to take you to dinner but I can’t swim that far yet. Maybe in another 200 years I will have mastered that distance.
i had a feeling it was dana… god i miss her… so what about her feet… can’t wait till the next chapter
i really miss this story, do you plan on finishing it. this was one of my favorites pps.
Now that is too strange. I’m glad to see Dana, but she is funny weird. Alice is a hoot. Of course, she’s stalker worthy.
LMFAO….I like her feet…too funny. Wonderful story btw. PPS.
RFLMFAO……I LIKE HER FEET…..THATS ORIGINAL TO SAY THE LEAST……IM STILL LMAO……
Whose feet does she like? This is too funny
LMAO…How can you not comment after a statement like that? That was freaking funny as hell. Is Dana some kind of foot doctor or just a freak?Love the banter between all the girls. Alice is freaking funny.
( wiping away the tears of laughing )… Sorry for being so late to comment but LMAO indeed !! I looooved the ending of the chapter. And what about this line : ” I just don’t understand why I’m not stalker worthy ” ?? This was just hysterical, K. HYSTERICAL I’m telling you ! In fact, can I quote Miss Peabody here ? ” You brought tears to my eyes ” Kanaf… I swear you did. Man, this is one hell of a ride !! I have a feeling Dana is going one funny lady too !! LOL ! So let’s see… What else did I love about this chapter ?… : well, the witty banter between all the girls is always VERY enjoyable when written by you, but I guess this goes without saying…Oh, and by the way, I’m sorry that you got called a nutcase because of me ( and it’s OK if you want to turn me in ! LOL !!! ), but you gotta look at the bright side of this : you got countless dinner invitations ( not to mention an offer for delightful cannoli ) AND your story and writing style got compared to British comedy !!! I mean, what else could you possibly want ? … This was great stuff, K. Thank you so much !
Yeah…. who the hell put you up to this madness??? … Turn them in!!! Hysterical chapter K! Love this, but please don’t end this anytime soon… They DO have computers and Wifi ‘there’ too you know!… Thanks mate, and talk soon!
You have a wonderful imagination and sense of humour K. I would say by the comments that have been made that it was claricestarling that put you up to this. I am so glad she did because this is just great. I think you can just about be guaranteed to get a dinner from any of your readers. More Please!