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MTSs Version of the Season 2 Finale – Part IV
Tina nodded, Okay. So, what about my surprise?
Bette grinned. Oh, thats still coming. Ill give it to you both after we talk.
Both?, asked Tina.
You and the little you., said Bette, gesturing to the baby.
Tina still looked confused, but simply nodded in response.
Dont worry, baby. Well be home in a little while., said Bette, rubbing Tinas thigh reassuringly before starting the engine and heading for home.
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When Bette was gone, Franklin walked back to his office, his head hanging low. He slid down into his chair and called Helena Peabody.
Franklin, so nice of you to call, she said.
Franklin spoke simply, Its done.
He could feel her smiling over the phone. Excellent. Ill have those funds transferred tomorrow. Its been a pleasure doing business with you.
Franklin smiled weakly, his stomach churning at his own traitorous behavior. Yeah. Its been a pleasure.
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Alice stared at her cell phone, refusing to call her girlfriend. Dana wanted space and space was what she was going to get. However, this didnt stop the blonde reporter from staring at her phone and willing it ring. She sighed at its silence and resettled herself on her couch, grabbing the half-gallon of ice-cream she was using to drown her sorrows and flicking through the cable stations looking for something to distract her restless mind. As she lay there, clad in her pajamas, she wondered, Is she really breaking up with me? Why do I feel this way about her? Why doesnt she seem to feel the same way about me? I dont know if shes ever loved me at all. We have great *****.but thats not enough. I love Dana. Id do anything for her. I dont really think she feels the same way about me.
Alice sighed deeply and guided another scoop of chocolate cookie chip dough ice cream to her mouth.
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Jenny heard Shane leave for her date with Carmen and tried in vain to stop the cloak of inadequacy that began to cover her soul. She was happy for Shane. After all, the soft-spoken and warm-hearted brunette was her best friend and Jenny knew that with Shanes troubled past, happiness and peace was long overdue for her best friend. This knowledge didnt stop the pain which began in the pit of her soul and radiated out to all parts of her small body.
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(59 votes, average: 3.85 out of 5)
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Excellent as always. Love your stories.
MTS, you really are a beautiful writer! Please continue. Oh, and how interesting that an MD would prescribe sleeping pills to an individual who is so self-destructive??
Damn Helena is a fucking bitch man I just want to kick her fucking ass. Anyway glad Bette is out off the CAC, and is Jenny gonna be ok, can’t wait to see what’s happen next. Post soon, thanks!
Helena you f$#$&Ng dwarf!
Helena that bitch, well at least Bette knows what’s most important and that should be enough to stick it too her! Post soon
more, more, more. Bette can see a positive future even without the CAC – yay!!!
So what tina reaction going to be, I wonder if she knew it was coming. I still really want to know what the deal is?
Great chapter! Bette’s right. She’s got Tina and her soon to be family, she doesn’t need anything else!
Even in other people’s stories, the very little mentio of Helena makes me sick…. I’ve like soooo got an idea for a short story i just have to write! Let’s just say Helena will be taken care of… (Insert Evil Laugh) Ha Ha Ha Ha! Meanwhile, Great story! Continue your great work!!
Love the story, what a bitch Helena is and what a slime Franklin is, hopefully Bette and Tina can over come this obstacle together, post your new chapter soon. Hope you enjoy you break.
This is more detailed and quite a wonderful alternative to the finale
i fucking hate that bitch…. and franklyn is a spineless ass…i do like your story much better then the show…please continue
someone please “kill hell”..lol..i´m glad Bette is no longer in the CAC they dont deserve her…i love it and post soon
OMG! I’m fully awake now. What the hell happened to the deal Tina made with the devil? It’s gonna come back and bite her in the ass isn’t it??????
Still enjoying this. I want to see 9-month pregnant Tina go all medieval on Helena, but that’s just me.
Hey, MTS, is there anyway you could lure the entire cast away from the set of TLW and reshoot the whole 2nd half of S2 with your kickasscreenplay? Just wondering… This is so much more satisfying! Thanks
You were great! Simply fabulous!
Great,simply Great! everything that you write leaves your readers wanting more. AH the power of money, let us remember that “money CAN’T buy you LOVE”. I’m waiting!!!
Man poor Jenny, i wish she didn’t have to suffer so much…great writing, great use of words, great everything, pls continue.
Great chapter…I like the ending for Jenny…That Helena Bitch……………..thank you..please post soon