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Meet Bette Porter: The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(33)
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Tina’s heart was beating in a very familiar speed as she stared at those dark brown eyes. It was the same intensity as before but somehow different. The blonde felt again that same overwhelming feelings but only this time she knew she could handle it and for that, she was thankful and relieved.
Their gaze was only broken when one of the guests approached Tina
“Sweetie will you please tell me where the bathroom is? I have a weak gall bladder and I have to go and pee every so often”
Tina looked at the old woman standing besides her smiling
“Sure Mrs. Thompson I’ll walk you there myself” the blonde replied smiling too
“Oh that’s so nice of you darling, thank you!”
“You’re welcome” Tina held the woman on the elbow and guided her towards the house
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“This place is really beautiful”
There were about five tables outside the garden giving the guests a good view of the lake and the bright tablecloths and the string of lights created a very relaxing and intimate setting. A mixture of laughter, sound of people talking and soft music was in the air. Bette, Kit, Alice and Shane were now sitting on one table and were having fun while chatting nonstop
Aside from Jean’s guests, there were also a few people from the hospital where Sam was working at as a resident doctor, who came.
“I agree Shane and having the party here outside is such a great idea!” Kit said
“Yes and Tina really did a great job” Alice added
“Yes indeed” Bette seconded then took a sip on her wine her eyes wandering looking for the gorgeous blonde, which seemed to be out of sight
“Well Tina is basically good in everything in fact I heard that the Community Center received a grant of $100, 000 all because of her which is really a great help for the kids” Kit said proudly
“Wow that’s awesome!” Alice exclaimed
Shane whistled
Bette smiled, she agreed with Kit, no doubt, Tina was great and she was glad for the contribution that the blonde was giving to the Community Center
“Kit do you happen to know if the grant came from a government or private institution?” Alice asked
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oh… nice update..i think tina will say “you don’t say” hahaha
Yes she needs a lot of help lol…..I am anxious for kit to meet her son
Wonderful update, thanks
Phacey, you’re doing such a good job with this story.
Hey phacey … I haven’t commented on the last several chapters of this story so I’m going to make up for lost time by leaving you one of my ‘famous’ diatribes. I hope you don’t mind, but if you do just ignore me. I won’t be offended and I hope I don’t offend. You have added so many twists and turns to this story that the emotional rollercoaster is almost too overwhelming to care if TiBette ever happens. I’ve no interest in them being a couple and the longer the journey drags on the less it matters. I was never convinced that they have anything more between them than the shared experience of Bette’s first time. Their reaction to each other tells me they are still so far away from this supposed ‘greatest love of all’. I would really love to see a ‘real relationship’ develop between them based on trust, and values, and honesty, and integrity, and all the things that bring two people together in a meaningful everlasting love that goes beyond sexual attraction. To me these two are in ‘lust’. I am not convinced by any of their actions (past or present) that they fell ‘in love’ in the few days they were together. As for Sam she may be hurt but I have a feeling she’s already seeing the writing on the wall. If she’s smart she’ll make the first move just like Sarah did and get out of a relationship that isn’t going anywhere. She went into it knowing Tina’s heart would never be hers, and no matter how long they’ve been dating that hasn’t changed. Sam is already showing the insecurity and the frailty of the relationship if she felt the need to act differently around Bette than she normally would in public with Tina and Tina’s irritation of her being affectionate in front of Bette proves that her feelings are justified. I think Sam needs to voice her concerns, Tina needs to be honest and they should agree to end it as friends before things get ugly. Don’t drag out the break-up, just get rid of Sam and allow her to move on. She’s better off alone than with someone who is just biding time. You also hinted in a previous chapter about Helena still having feelings for Tina and knowing your penchant for DRAMA I imagine Helena is behind the grant and will come wanting Tina back just when Sam is out of the picture. Have your fun, but what I’m really interested in is how Tina could possibly know that Peter is Kit’s son, not say anything to her, and keep the child hidden from his mother after hearing both their stories. It’s almost cruel to think that she would prolong a reunion between them. It really boggles my mind, but then Tina never was affected by anything outside of herself. Even when Bette first told her the events of finding Kit she showed little interest or compassion. If she was paying attention she would have made the connection immediately when she first met Kit. Now that she knows Kit is Bette’s sister is her plan to use Peter and Kit as the lure to get Bette back into her life? Is Peter the ‘Angie card’ that most TiBette stories play? I anxiously await how you play out your hand. Thank you for keeping this interesting, so that even the long wait between posts is forgiven. Hope to see another soon.
Yeah, I know your predicament…. how do you “write it off” a good character. Hirap ng situation mo?.. ..But still trust your judgement… I know in the and of the day… You know what’s a “good story”.. thanks phacey!
Phacey sweetie thanks for another update! I have been following this story from the very beginning and enjoyed every post. I can understand if ur having difficulty getting our favorite couple together and removing Sam in the picture but please take ur time and allow the flow of the story to guide u. I trust that a time will come when u’ll see the whole picture much clearer and im sure its worth the wait. Talk to you soon my friend(;
Oh no, not the cake….geez! Bette Porter to the rescue :-) thanks for another great post!
Thank for another great update. Getting rid of characters isn’t easy, welcome to the world of writers. You do an amazing job if English isn’t your primary language. Your writing flows so smoothly. It will be interesting to see how a TiBette comes about in your story. I look forward to the adventure.
Great update thank you
looking forward to more, sooner rather than later
Great update.It´s good to know,that you are a Tibetter too.PPS
YES TINA LET BETTE HELP YOU