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Meet Bette Porter: The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(33)
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Previously…
Tina looked around and saw Sam on one table sitting with Dana and Lara, seemed to be enjoying herself. Her eyes wandered again and her heart skipped a beat when she saw Bette and Kit talking to her mom giving their gifts.
From where she was standing, Tina could clearly see what Bette was wearing. The brunette wore a white long sleeves, a fitted Levis jeans and a pair of black boots and she thought that Bette was still the most beautiful woman she had ever laid her eyes on.
A moment after her heart drummed against her chest when the caramel skinned beauty turned to her direction and gave her a small smile…
Chapter 33
It was just a simple smile coming from the brunette yet spoke volumes. It was as if time had stopped when their eyes met once again and both women could still feel the undeniable attraction and the unique connection between them.
Tina returned a smile.
If Bette was honest with herself, prior to coming to the party, she was worried, anxious and a little bit scared on seeing Tina again for she wasn’t sure on what the blonde’s reaction going to be and her own reaction too once their paths crossed once more.
Tina on the other hand was nervous on seeing the brunette. Yes, she’s with Sam now and she’s firm with her commitment with the resident doctor but she wasn’t sure if she could stop the overwhelming emotions that Bette’s presence could bring. She was afraid that the life that she’d created, peaceful and uncomplicated, would all be ruined just because of the caramel skinned beauty.
Now as they were both standing at the same place where they first made love, the place, which forever would hold a very special spot in their hearts surprisingly both women felt a sense of calmness washing over them
Maybe the time being away from each other and the fact that they both had different lives now were the reasons why. Whatever it was that was making Bette calm right now, as she looked at those amazing hazel eyes she thought it was a good start to create that bridge for them to be friends and thinking about it already made her feel good.
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oh… nice update..i think tina will say “you don’t say” hahaha
Yes she needs a lot of help lol…..I am anxious for kit to meet her son
Wonderful update, thanks
Phacey, you’re doing such a good job with this story.
Hey phacey … I haven’t commented on the last several chapters of this story so I’m going to make up for lost time by leaving you one of my ‘famous’ diatribes. I hope you don’t mind, but if you do just ignore me. I won’t be offended and I hope I don’t offend. You have added so many twists and turns to this story that the emotional rollercoaster is almost too overwhelming to care if TiBette ever happens. I’ve no interest in them being a couple and the longer the journey drags on the less it matters. I was never convinced that they have anything more between them than the shared experience of Bette’s first time. Their reaction to each other tells me they are still so far away from this supposed ‘greatest love of all’. I would really love to see a ‘real relationship’ develop between them based on trust, and values, and honesty, and integrity, and all the things that bring two people together in a meaningful everlasting love that goes beyond sexual attraction. To me these two are in ‘lust’. I am not convinced by any of their actions (past or present) that they fell ‘in love’ in the few days they were together. As for Sam she may be hurt but I have a feeling she’s already seeing the writing on the wall. If she’s smart she’ll make the first move just like Sarah did and get out of a relationship that isn’t going anywhere. She went into it knowing Tina’s heart would never be hers, and no matter how long they’ve been dating that hasn’t changed. Sam is already showing the insecurity and the frailty of the relationship if she felt the need to act differently around Bette than she normally would in public with Tina and Tina’s irritation of her being affectionate in front of Bette proves that her feelings are justified. I think Sam needs to voice her concerns, Tina needs to be honest and they should agree to end it as friends before things get ugly. Don’t drag out the break-up, just get rid of Sam and allow her to move on. She’s better off alone than with someone who is just biding time. You also hinted in a previous chapter about Helena still having feelings for Tina and knowing your penchant for DRAMA I imagine Helena is behind the grant and will come wanting Tina back just when Sam is out of the picture. Have your fun, but what I’m really interested in is how Tina could possibly know that Peter is Kit’s son, not say anything to her, and keep the child hidden from his mother after hearing both their stories. It’s almost cruel to think that she would prolong a reunion between them. It really boggles my mind, but then Tina never was affected by anything outside of herself. Even when Bette first told her the events of finding Kit she showed little interest or compassion. If she was paying attention she would have made the connection immediately when she first met Kit. Now that she knows Kit is Bette’s sister is her plan to use Peter and Kit as the lure to get Bette back into her life? Is Peter the ‘Angie card’ that most TiBette stories play? I anxiously await how you play out your hand. Thank you for keeping this interesting, so that even the long wait between posts is forgiven. Hope to see another soon.
Yeah, I know your predicament…. how do you “write it off” a good character. Hirap ng situation mo?.. ..But still trust your judgement… I know in the and of the day… You know what’s a “good story”.. thanks phacey!
Phacey sweetie thanks for another update! I have been following this story from the very beginning and enjoyed every post. I can understand if ur having difficulty getting our favorite couple together and removing Sam in the picture but please take ur time and allow the flow of the story to guide u. I trust that a time will come when u’ll see the whole picture much clearer and im sure its worth the wait. Talk to you soon my friend(;
Oh no, not the cake….geez! Bette Porter to the rescue :-) thanks for another great post!
Thank for another great update. Getting rid of characters isn’t easy, welcome to the world of writers. You do an amazing job if English isn’t your primary language. Your writing flows so smoothly. It will be interesting to see how a TiBette comes about in your story. I look forward to the adventure.
Great update thank you
looking forward to more, sooner rather than later
Great update.It´s good to know,that you are a Tibetter too.PPS
YES TINA LET BETTE HELP YOU