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Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(19)
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Chapter Nineteen
Bette was at the arrival area of the Kansas City International Airport and had been waiting patiently for over an hour when a smile tugged in the corner of her mouth as she saw the joy evident on the faces of the other people also waiting for their loved ones. But one particular sight that really warmed her heart was when she saw how a little boy’s face lit up when he saw a woman walking towards him whom Bette assumed to be the mother. The boy immediately removed his hand from his dad’s grip and hurriedly ran to his mother’s eager arms.
The mother had tears in her eyes as she kissed her son’s beautiful face and her smile got even bigger when she saw that the boy’s dad was standing inches away from them. The man wrapped his arms around his family and gave the woman a loving kiss.
Bette was never the type of person who would stare at other people but the scene was so beautiful that she couldn’t keep her eyes off of them. The love that those people had for each other was simply breathtaking that she silently hoped that she would have her own family someday.
“Someday…” the brunette whispered. A few minutes after Bette felt a tap on her right shoulder
“I hope you’re not yet pissed for the long wait…”
The brunette turned around and saw a middle aged woman standing behind her and wearing a worried look on her face
“Kit!”
Bette immediately gave her older half-sister a big and tight hug. Kit had been worried because her flight was supposed to land forty five minutes earlier but because of some air traffic issues her flight became delayed. She disappointed a lot of people in her life and although it was beyond her control she still didn’t want her younger sister to feel disappointed by waiting for her for a long time. Bette’s warm embrace erased all the worries in her head and slowly a smile graced her face and tears started rolling on her cheeks for the happiness that she felt at the moment was so high she could feel like she’s being lifted off from the ground.
Life had never been easy for Katherine Porter; it all started when her father Melvin divorced her mom Leonora and abandoned her to marry a white woman. Leonora didn’t go to college and so she solely raised Kit by doing odd jobs just to make ends meet. She didn’t remarry anymore because her life only revolved around her beloved daughter.
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Wrong direction.Thank you for the upDATE
Thank you, I continue to enjoy
It’s great to see a chapter from you, hope there’s more to come
i like it very mutch this update please post more thank you
please, please next chapter saspo. Thank you
I forgot to tell you that will be very interesting to know how you will twist, in the nexts chapters, the lack of interest of Bette to Tina, because looks that Bette is much in love with grrr Sara.. I cant wait!!!!
first of all let me say one thing… if i had listened to some comments about mt stories, i think i would of stopped writing years ago… i heard it all, trust me… and other writers/friends told me to keep writing for one person… “MYSELF”… now don’t get me wrong i love writing and have made a lot of friends through my story, and this and another site… and i love the comments… but as writers we have to take the good and the bad… and hopefully the good out weighs the bad 1,000,000 to 1… so plase write your story YOUR way… we will read it… and everyone who knows me… knows i am a TIBETTER.and i promice i will keep reading.. you please promice to keep writing… now a comment about your story… i’m hoping Kit doesn’t like miss dish sara… lol… pps
you know i love your writing, and i will read your stories,but i`m going to wait till you have written a few more chapters,till you get our girls together, then i will appreciate where your coming from,,,without the [i so want to kill you phacey point lol] i so hope you know what i mean xxx. but i will still be checking in on your authour notes, so i don`t miss anything……..luv x j
Good update. Thank you for this story.
Write it how you want to write it!! Love it either way!
Omg….but you gave us your word Phacey And I’m ok with that.. [Little scream..Is that ok?] WHY!!…..Bette!…No,Tina noooooo! [I’m ok now]..thank you for the update.
Hi phacey. I hope you realize that people are actually reading your work and if a few got a little too personal in their attack I\’m sure they didn\’t really mean it. Nadala lang sa silakbo ng damdamin. Subalit. Datapwat. Alam mo naman may pagka-warla ang mga L Word fans gurl, so keri na lang, hayaan mo lang mga ka-etchosan. Tina was right in cutting off all contact with Bette. Now she can throw herself completely in her grief. Tina just has to realize that sometimes insanity gets mislabeled as \”love\” or \”destiny\” when it is clear to everybody else that Tina actually belongs with Sara. I mean Sam. If you are still going the tibette route let it be on their deathbeds when both are delirious and unable to form a rational judgment. Wehehe.
Great update. Glad that Kit and Bette are getting along better and that Kit will hopefully live in the same town with Bette, and that Kit can get her feet on the ground and do very well. As evil as I am, I wish that Tina had just said good evening and kept walking and not said anything else to Bette. Bette didn’t deserve anything more than a cordial salutation. Tina should have just gone into a stall and closed the door in her face. I’m also glad that Tina held her head high and accepted Sam’s invitation to go to Milk for the evening. Now that know thru your author’s notes that they will eventually get together, I can live with everything that happens in between. Hopefully Kit can help Bette get over herself and see what is in her best interest. I don’t know how long it takes to work a crush out of your system butI hope it is soon that Bette gets sarah out of her system and really understands that she has missed the best thing in her life. Pay attention to what Amanda said about writing just for you and understand that this is a free society and everyone can have thei own opinions about what you do. As a super TiBette fan and opinionated reader and also a writer you have to write what comes to you when you are writing another chapter. Sometimes the characters take over and won’t let you write what you want to write, and you just have to go with it. Sometimes you just don’t have a choice, the characters will lead you where they want to go. Thanks for posting.
I really agree with the direction you’re going with this story because its important that they both know whats out there. But I hope that if/when bette and sarah split that its because bette has re-evaluated her feelings and realizes she wants tina and not because Sarah cheats or something. Because if Better runs to tina because sarah cheated or left her then it makes tina seem like shes second best and she shouldnt be put in that position
Love the story. Keep writhing.
argh sarah! (pulling my hair). great chapter. i hope the next chapter is here already
It’s really nice what Bette’s doing for Kit, that’s what family’s for. I hope they find Kit’s son sometime. As for the other angle of the story, I’ll just wait and see how it all goes. But already knowing what’s going to happen (from your author’s notes) is going to make it less of a surprise… I’ll still read as long as you’re posting, though. Thanks for the chapter. :)
Great update as always! Can’t wait for more!!!
So sad. Can’t read this anymore. Why is so hard?
OMG WHY WHY WHY???????? this is bad and sad, Bette and Tina need to be together and please fix this.
let the drama rolling Phacey,pps!
When i see Tina cut the realation from Bette. I fell so sad and hard. But I believe that someone will cherish the person more if she passes all kinds of hard situation.Look forward to reading more stories.
Phacey – thank you for the update on this story. It’s one of the few that I really look forward to reading so I appreciate whenever you have the time to post. As a writer I would encourage you to continue writing this story the way you envisioned it and let the characters (not the comments) lead you because they will. If you get too wrapped up in the opinions of the readers you will lose focus and the story will suffer. As a reader and a very ‘vocal commenter’ I think the fact that you are eliciting so many deeply personal responses is a credit to your writing. You are not just giving us fluff and implausible scenarios just to bring Bette and Tina together when everything about the characters say they are not ready to be a couple in anything other than a sexual way. That’s enough for some readers but for me I need more. I look forward to seeing how you bring that about. I’m sad for Sarah knowing the outcome but at least she had Bette for a while and hopefully they will end it amicably. As for Tina and Sam I hope they keep their relationship platonic and form a real bond of friendship and not just a substitute for an emotional/physical emptiness. Also wouldn’t want to see Tina whoring herself in the clubs as she perceives that she’s moving on. It’s sad that Bette and Tina were not mature enough to get past the personal bullsh*t to be able to have a professional relationship, but it appears Tina’s new job is working out. It’s probably better for everyone especially her students because they would have suffered most from her lack of concentration on the job. It’s nice that Bette and Kit have grown closer as a family. I hope you will see fit to give us a view of Bette and Sarah’s life together because I for one would like to know WHY Sarah is not good enough for Bette. The only thing Sarah has done in this story is love Bette for who she is as a person. Tina loves her as ‘an object of affection’. If Sarah’s name was Tina it would fix everything but it’s not so she has to be the enemy to justify TiBette. I’m enjoying the story so far, even if it’s frustrating at times. I hope my comments aren’t ones that have hurt you as my intent is never a personal attack on the writer just an emotional response to the characters/stories. There are just a few stories that touch me in that way, and as I said it’s a credit to your writing so keep it coming.
On a another note don’t take a reader’s decision to quit your story as a personal affront. For the most part it usually has nothing to do with your talent as a writer or your ability to tell the story. I try to be open minded with most stories but I don’t read many of them of certain styles, genre, or subject matter mostly as a matter of personal choice, principles, and comfort level. There are several authors and/or storylines that I don’t read or else I quit reading if they take a turn that offends my sensibilities. We all know it’s just fiction but the emotional response is real and it can really mess with your mind if you allow that sort of thing to seep in. Sometimes it’s best to just not read it. There are a lot of offerings so people can pick and choose.
Hello phacey! first off let me say thanks for bringing us another chapter, you know i agree with some of the messages above, write this story however you want to write this. You are a great writer and the reason why i registered in this site. so if other people don’t like your work then don’t mind them, i’m telling you there are a lot of us who like reading your stories especially this one. although im a huge tibette fan i agree with what you said, if exploring their options is the only way for them to have a better loving relationship in the future then i’m okay with it and since you assured us that they will end up together in the future well then now i can breathe lol!.. thanks so much for giving us this amazing story and i’ll be waiting for the next chap so PPS!
Can I just state I dislike Sarah with a passion. Why can’t Bette wake up and smell the coffee I bet she does when Tina starts to kind of fall for Sam.