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Meet Bette Porter The 30 Yr OLd Virgin(18)
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Previously…
Monday afternoon Tina was inside in the history faculty room getting ready to go home when she heard the door opened. She thought that maybe it was just one of her colleagues so she didn’t bother to look and just continued fixing her things.
“Tina…”
For so many times hearing that voice never failed to make her heartbeat race so fast. She slowly turned to the direction where the voice was coming from
“Can we please talk?”
“About what Bette?”
“About us…”
Chapter Eighteen
The drive from the school to Isabella’s seemed an eternity as Tina’s mind was full of thoughts about the reason why Bette had asked for this meeting. She parked her car in front of the establishment then killed the car engine off and looked at the big signage of the same restaurant where she made the sex proposal to Bette.
It was a two-storey restaurant and a favourite destination among the locals and tourists not only because of its splendid food but also because of how beautiful the place was. It was located near the Ambrosia Lake giving a romantic vibe to its patrons. She remembered their conversation that fateful day very clearly as if it just happened yesterday, she was nervous as hell because she didn’t know if Bette would agree to her crazy proposal but at that time her desire to be with the brunette was so strong that it overpowered all the negativities that she had in her.
And now she’s there once more with the same woman wanting to talk about “them”. Her heart began to pound when she saw Bette’s car pulled over to the other side of the parking lot. She carefully looked at the brunette as she got out of the car, the Bette that she was seeing now was so different from the woman from before yet she’s still the same woman she fell in love with.
As she remained seated inside her car the brunette’s words echoed in her head
“I just have one condition… promise me that you won’t fall in love with me…”
That was Bette’s words before the brunette agreed to sleep with her but even though she said yes, Tina knew in her heart and mind that she wouldn’t be able to keep that promise, she just simply couldn’t.
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Tina needs to change jobs, It will be to painful for her seeing Bette and Sarah together everyday. I don’t think Sarah is the one for Bette.
well can`t wait till bette`s brain catches up with her heart,,,,,,,,x
i knew bette was going to do what she did… i still can’t get over the fact that sarah and betee knew each other for a few years and sarah NEVER even bothered… and now bette changed her appearence and she now wants something with her… i no she had her feeling for bete and what ever… but come on… all that time passed and nothing… to me tina did what she had to do… i would of added FUCK YOU BETTE to the ending… but thats just me… lol… well bette you made your bed… now go and lay it in… don’t think tina should go to sam as a rebound… sam will only get hurt… just like tina is now… to bad sarah didn’t have a “friend” over… oh well can’t wait for more… pps
Two things comes to mind, Bette is stupid and doesn’t deserve Tina. As the writer you have the power to help Tina move on but I have this feeling that you’re a sadist and enjoy seeing Tina hurt by Bette’s lack of brass. For lack of a better term. So I will stop reading here and let my imagination finish this story, because Bette is a 30 year old loser, it’s no wonder she waited so long to lose her V card. Here’s my ending. Part of Tina’s story will be soundtracked by Adele’s sophomore album, only the recovery part. Tina becomes close friends with Sam. Getting to know Sam is easy because they have history. Tina discovers the woman Sam has become, and realizes that Bette is still a scared little girl potty training in pull-ups. She wonders what she ever saw in Bette. Tina falls in love with Sam while Bette moves in with Sara. Bette can’t seem to get memories of V the final battle out of the house. Oh well. Tina receives her PhD and is teaching at a university while Sam continues her work at the hospital. They live happily with their 2 girls, Angie and Grace. The end, my end. Thanks ; )
Thanks for the update. I would like to know what Bette was going to say to Tina, and I think I know but Tina did not give her a chance to say it. She assumed she knew what Bette would say. I understand how Tina feels and she should have known this was coming. She set herself up. Now Bette needs to go back to her and complete what she was saying and that gives tem a placce to work from. The way it is now neither of them has any idea how the other feels except what Tina told her that she did not want to hear. They need to try again and have that conversation. Tina only has herself to blame for the way she is feeling she should have kept her mouth shut and let Bette finish what she was saying. Then both will know what they have to contend with. Thanks for posting.
So now Bette has made a decision but she knows its the wrong one. Love this story so different I can’t help but dislike Bette for not being honest not Tina for letting this go on for so long without explaining how she truly felt. I find it hard to believe Sarah didn’t make a move on Bette in two years. There seems to be something not quite right with that scenario.
Oh that was so very sad. What are you trying to do to us? Please make it better! Thank you again for this story.
omgeeeeee PPS!
Well, Bette’s made her decision. I guess the question now is, can she live with it? And Tina… I do feel bad for her. Since she can’t be Bette’s friend, she’ll have to try and move on, I suppose. We’ll see how she copes with being in the same building as Bette 5 days a week. Frankly, I think a lot of tortured glances are going to be exchanged between the two for the next however long. I suspect that Sarah, if she wants to make Bette happy, has got her work cut out for her. Thanks for the post! :)
First, thanks for this!…don’t think I’ve commented before, sorry it’s probably gonna contain a lot of questions…ok, so YEAH that T finally fessed up to her feelings, but when she said “from the first time I saw you,” was she referring to “Ugly” Bette or “new” Bette. Second, I assume that B thinks she is indeed referring to her post makeover appearance. I know you gave some insight to Sarah, and I confess I’m too lazy to go back and try to find if the answer is there..I know that Sarah wasn’t unkind or anything to her, but I don’t recall that she REALLY made an effort with B until post makeover? Having said all that, I hope the next post will be soon and that we’ll find out that B’s words to Sarah were “I can only be friends with you.”
Heartbraking! But I understand Bette’s need to see, explore to get decision, just hope it won’t be too long. Now I can’t wait for next chapter! And wonder how Sarah will respond to it all, because if B decides she wants T she’ll get heartbroken. Drama drama:) Greta update, tnx for posting!
AHHH NEED MORE!!!! PPS! Great story!
mmmmmooooorrrrrrr please thank you for the update!!!
Phacey – glad to know you are feeling better and thanks for not letting us wait too long for the update. First I have to say I’m not sure what Bette’s DECISION actually was since Tina didn’t give her a chance to express it. Tina’s declaration threw Bette for a curve and we all know Bette can’t think clearly on her feet. She always needs time to process so I don’t consider much of what she says to have any weight. It also explains all the emotional turmoil and doubt that she’s experiencing. I haven’t written a ‘sermon’ on this story for a while so here’s my drivel for your entertainment. First of all these two are so twisted that I’m not sure what to think. Tina is still being manipulative even through her pain. I’m glad she decided to be honest but her timing just made Bette run scared. Bette is using Sarah not only as a safe harbor to avoid dealing with the physical intensity of Tina but also to keep her emotional distance. *** Tina was too intense and overpowering; almost predatory in her pursuit of Bette to get her into her bed. Once that was accomplished she turned into this emotional cripple that is burdensome and confusing for Bette. I think Bette could easily deal with the Tina she met at the club because it was a purely animal sexual attraction and a means to an end … Tina gave her body freely and Bette wanted to lose her virginity thus the arrangement. However I think Bette saw how desperate and dangerous Tina was on an emotional level which is why she admonished her ‘not to fall in love’. Bette wasn’t protecting Tina she was protecting herself with that statement. Tina changed the game rules midstream by supposedly ‘falling in love’. She says she fell in love at first site – so Tina’s love came out of a drunken encounter with a stranger in a bar where they were about to have sex in the bathroom? I can see how and why Bette would doubt it was anything more than lust and a physical attraction. Bette is smart to protect her heart especially since Tina only knows Bette from reading her journal and hasn’t taken the time to have a conversation to get to know her at an emotional level. She had that chance when Bette offered friendship but instead she got all twisted up in her sexual fantasies and uncontrollable reaction to Bette being with Sarah. Tina is not used to losing and I think a lot of her problems stem from her unresolved issues over her brother’s death. If Tina could think past her libido and were honest in the first place she wouldn’t be in this position. Bette is attracted to Tina that’s obvious. Tina brings out the passion and the fire and the sexuality but it’s physical. Bette doesn’t ‘feel’ an emotional connection to Tina which is where she needs to be in order to express love beyond sex. I think it’s just the opposite with Sarah … Bette feels safe and emotionally connected, she has real feelings for Sarah but she doesn’t have the physical sexual passion for Sarah perhaps that will come once they have sex but I doubt it will ever compare to what she feels for Tina. Sadly Sarah gets the short end of the stick even if Bette spends some time with her because passion and the physical attraction will win out even if they can’t communicate outside of the bedroom. Tina will get her girl in the end like she always does. Long live TiBette. There’s a part 2 to this … TBC
Part 2. The tracks this rollercoaster is on is dangerously close to breaking so please put on the emergency brakes and let Sarah off. If you keep her in the picture then at least give her a fighting chance of survival by letting her know what she’s dealing with. I suspect you already know where this story will end up and how you will get us there so my expectations are low in order to keep myself from being disappointed but I have my hopes for this story to take a compassionate turn in Sarah’s favor. First I hope that Bette will be completely honest with Sarah about her relationship with Tina. I think she should tell Sarah how she and Tina met, she should tell her about their arrangement, she should tell her about the kiss, and she should tell her about their talk that evening. Of course that is ONLY if Bette is sincere about pursuing anything ‘REAL’ with Sarah. She has to come clean not only about Tina’s feelings and how that might impact their ability to work in the same school but also about whatever doubts Bette herself has regarding her own attraction to Tina. If she can’t fight the feeling then she needs to let Sarah off the hook until she figures it out. My other hope is that Sarah doesn’t have sex with Bette just to make her ‘feel better’ about making Tina sad or hurting her feelings. If she does then she’s setting herself up and the fall will be even greater when Bette leaves her bed to go back to Tina’s. As for Tina … I can’t say that I have much compassion for her. She has yet to stick to any of her convictions so the whole sad symbolic ‘Goodbye Bette’ scenario is just more drama. I expect you’re going to give us more twists and turns and entanglements to keep us hanging. Looking forward to seeing how Tina handles the ‘rejection’ which really wasn’t a rejection since there wasn’t an ‘us’ to speak of in the first place. Bette always falls for jealousy or sympathy so Tina just has to figure out which card to play and she’s back in the game. OK I think I got it all out of my system now. Have fun torturing us with another TEASE but hopefully you won’t keep us waiting too long.
god, i can feel what tina’s feel, great writing phacey..thank you for the update
Thanks for posting…..although I’m hating the way it turned out. I guess this is the road Bette has to take since Tina was her first, literally. We need more!!
I feel so sad about this chapter. If tibbet will be together in the end? I hope so. Otherwise I don’t want to read this story.
Okay, that sucked! Will Bette understand that lust IS sometimes the precursor to everlasting love!!
Phacey, ang masasabi ko lang, ikaw na! Haha. Tingnan mo naman kung pa’no maka-react ang mga tao dito. Ikaw na talaga! Haha. Okay. All I can say is, good riddance. Tina is better off without Bette and her 30-year old baggage. Lol. That letter-throwing ritual sounds final as final can get. I hope Tina will now arrange her transfer to Mc-Something Else High. She’s started grieving and the last thing she needs is to see her dead revivified 5 days a week as jp22 said. Bette’s decision is clear enough. Tina I know I’m your universe and Sarah is mine, but can we still be friends? Not her exact words but well you know Bette. Tina thinks she’s in love but in truth she’s just had too much lechon and sapin-sapin at Sam’s party. Speaking of, if Tina only takes maalox she’ll realize she’s being stupid looking past the most decent girl she’ll probably ever meet. Long live SamNa!
Bette was cruel and insensitive, calling Tina at the restaurant where they had their first meeting, to talk “about us” where there was not really “us” among them. Only to once more to apologize for a kiss that she already had said she was sorry !!? Actually I did not understand the purpose of the meeting. “Other than to break even more the heart of Tina”. But on the other hand the meeting was good, because Tina can say all that was stuck in his heart, though of Bette already had a good idea.Tina if her mother was not sick she should go out of town the most away from Bette of possible. And maybe years later they can meet and be – friends- “That I doubt”.:)
Maybe Tina should move on and give Sam a chance since she is in love with her all the while,sometimes is better to be loved than love someone.Let Sam loves Tina to get her off her misery.PPS!
Tina was honest with Sam about his feelings, so I do not think Tina should be with Sam, just because Bette has feelings for Sarah. Feelings do not change from day to night and Sam knows this very well. PPS.
WHAT WAS THE PURPOSE OF THE MEETING? – To talk about something that Tina already knew or did Bette would say more, but was speechless after the confession of Tina??. ” NOT, because when Tina asked Bette to say something, she just said she didn’t know what to say, or worst said that Tina knew of his feelings for Sarah”. Shortly after the meeting Bette was crying on the shoulder of Sarah. — Bette if you know of your feelings to whom belongs, leave Tina in PEACE.
Oh damn this is sad and please fix this and get them back together. Please post more, thanks!
i’m glad tina made the decision to tell bette that they can’t be friends otherwise bette will think tina is fine. i hope if bette goes with sarah, tina will try her best to move on. she must have been so sad to throw away that letter. wake up bette. sigh….
Wow! Thanks for the update phacey! :-) omg… I am speechless!! For once I’d like to tell Tina to say nothing untill Bette say something and what the ??? The lack of conversation and many POVs are driving me crazy as its leaving all the issues in gray area…! Ugh… I hope I’ll find more answers in your next updates lol :-D
phacey first I want to thank you for sharing us this story… as i was reading all the comments above i was amazed by how this story brought out different emotions from the readers and how this story greatly affected some of us. I firmly believe that any one is entitled to his or her opinion but any person doesn’t have the right to judge you for what you wrote. This particular chapter is really heartbreaking for all of us tibetters but I know from reading youR previous author’s notes that in the end these girls will eventually find their way back into each other’s arms. I have my faith in you phacey and I sure can’t wait to see the next chapter. PPS
NOoooooooooo!….don’t do this Tina!!she’s she’s??…Damn it Bette why!!!…..PPS PHACEY PPS!…NOooooooooo!!……………………………….
Okay late reaction ito. Sobra ka naman, anong dugo-dugo ka d’yan? Ako nga ang bilib sa ‘yo dahil marunong kang magkuwento. Tingnan mo naman nalolurkey na ang mga tao dito. LOL. Mas gawin mo pa silang baliwag. Hahaha. ‘Yung tipong kisay-kisay sila sa mga pangyayari. Hahahahahaha. Joke lang. Ibig sabihin lang ang galing mo kumonek sa mambabasa mo, mega apektado ang mga hitad. Lol. Hay sarap mag-tagalog. Dugu-dugo gang na rin ako sa kaka-Ingles ‘no, sa totoo lang. Hihi. Kaya lang gusto kong sagutin ‘yung ibang komento sa taas kahapon. Hehe. Anyway. Sana mapagtanto (naks hehehe) ni Bette na hindi siya magiging masaya kung magduduwag-duwagan siya at magpapaka-safe sa kumbento ng Sarah. Si Tina ay wala nang unfinished business dahil naipaglaban na niya at nagawa na ang lahat para sa nararamdaman niya. Para sa akin ay tama ang ginawa niyang pagdadalamhati na. (At talagang feel ko ang Sam para kay Tina sa kuwentong ito, kaya Tina sige, move on na.) Si Bette ang talagang manghihinayang dito kasi maiisip niya ang mga what ifs niya kapag may mga problema sila ni Sarah. Masalimuot ang mga kaganapan pero ang sarap lang talagang basahin nito. PPS.