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Masked Feelings CH 85 Lost, Found and left Unburied
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The plain and simple truth of the matter is that she was still scared. It bothered her that she didn’t know what Dana was saying in her sessions. She didn’t talk about what went on during that time and it probably wasn’t fair to ask. What concerned her the most was not knowing the therispt’s course of action for Dana. Would she recommend that the two not see each toher during the time she was in counseling? What changes would she recommend that she make to ensure a positive direction. There were so many questions that she wanted answers to.
This whole disappearance of Roxy was a real mystery to her. Where had she gone? No one had seen her since Dana made her report about her kidnapping. Alice knew that this was going to bring some serious trouble for her, but it wasn’t like her to disappear. Roxy was one of those people that didn’t go down without a fight… or at least this seemed to be what she led everyone to believe. Had she walked away from the scene before the authorities arrived? Had someone pulled her from the car? this was going to bother her until she knew.
It didn’t seem possible that Roxy would give up seeing her. If she went to the lengths she did to try to get rid of Dana, then it only made sense that Roxy still wanted her. Her absence did make her feel more nervous. Was she plotting her next move? Would she go after Dana again? Would she be desperate enough to take Alice, in hopes of persuading her that she was the right choice? Alice’s mind was just creating more questions than answers. Whatever he case maybe, she knew something was seriously wrong.
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The plane didn’t feel big enough, but maybe it’s because she had to sit next to her mother. She hated long flights. Dana already felt drained since she heard of her grandmother’s death. She wasn’t used to losing someone that close to her. It made her feel like maybe she was somewhat cold and heartless when it came to Lara… but then again there were times that she felt like she wasn’t dead. After what she did anyway, it was hard to find forgiveness in her heart. When someone that was close and betrayed you, it was hard to turn the other cheek.
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YESS!!!! You’re back!!! I just dropped by the site after playing a game, and BOOM there you are! I was so happy that I even squeled! I am very sorry about your loss, and thank you very much to step it and post some great story. I missed your story so much. But even when it was a long time ago that I read the previous one, I remeber what it was about! Very amazing for someone like me who can’t remeber stuffs!! ;) Wow….. So let’s start with Tony…. Tony, Tony, Tony… That hot guy has some weird control over Alice huh? It’s really hot how everyone’s running after Alice. Count me in, too! lol But I really wish that he wouldn’t cause any problem in Danish relationship. I mean, common! They already have David, Roxy, and Roxy’s partner (sorry the name is missing,) dead Lara, dead Gina… Yeah, but I guess Tony can squeez in, cuz he’s charismatic hot guy. Hahaha. Aww…. Poor Roxy, I really wanna put David into death sentence. He’s an evil incarnate–I hate him with all of my heart! I think I come to heart Roxy and it is mainly due to David’s crazy deeds to her. And one sentence just got me in this story–that he’ll have human experiment on Alice and Roxy! OMG, I guess he doesn’t hate Dana as much as Alice? THIS is really creepy. I think Dana should kidnap Alice to the unknown island and protect her from evils like David and admirers like Roxy and Tony. Dang… I really think it’s sat how Dana’s whole family don’t express any sorrow for Grace. I lost my grandpa but I really didn’t know him that much. I guess the death of loved one tells you a lot… So I only hope that this will be a good chance for Sharon and Dana to unite. They deserve so much. Anyway, great work! I hope Tony finds Roxy’s whereabout and rescue her. I don’t know, your story is impossible to guess!! That makes it all the more loveable!! GREAT WORK!! Keep posting! PPS!
Wow, I’m rambling….(blush)
So excited to see an update! Thanks, brteyes!! And, luckily, my blood alcohol level was already high enough that I could read it right away… Excellent chapter, as always. Damn Tony. Geez. Leave Al alone. I do kinda wonder what David will do when he finds out that Tony is sniffing around. I am disappointed in how Alice handled the situation. She doesn’t know if she kissed back? I am trying to give her the benefit of the doubt — that she was confused and upset over how Dana left. But, Al, get it together!! And I understand her not telling Dana over the phone, but, I hope she has a chance to tell her before someone else does. I feel for Dana — being trapped with a family that she doesn’t mesh with on top of her grandmother’s death and everything going on with Alice. And her mom going through her suitcase? Serious line crossing there. David and Roxy. Urgh. I am glad Roxy is getting a slight respite. However, that will probably make whatever it is that happens next even harder for her. The chip in her back is pretty creepy. On a completely personal note… My deepest condolences on the passing of your grandmother. I am sending you good thoughts and virtual hugs. Take care.
Before I start commenting on your story I’d like to offer you my sincerest condolences. Losinga family member is always a tragedy. I feel for you and your family who must be going througha rough and hard time. I really am sorry for your loss, darlin’ and I hope time, friends and familywill help you to go through the grieving process. Now on with the chapter: I think, you are trying toconfuse me, lol. Wanted to get that phrase out first so I wouldn’t forget about it. I’ll come back to that later though. Tony is still a slacker, a jerk and a selfish dumbass. Why is it that guys only think with their little George? lol Power, money and women….that’s all guys like him want, no matterat what cost. I fear, he’ll burn his fingers soon and I hope it’ll hurt bestially. Maybe you shouldn’tburn his fingers though, lol. Really don’t like seeing him and Alice together. We all know what hewants from Alice. He even kissed her!!! But what’s worse….she kissed him back:-((( I wanted to screamwhen I got to that paragraph. Actually, I had to read it twice to understand that there weren’t any typos and that you meant every word you wrote. Well, since Alice considers herself as being bisexualit’s safe to say that she’s not only into women but she’s definitely playing with the fire. She enjoyedthe kiss and I have a strong feeling that this wasn’t their last intimate encounter. Any hetero sexin the future? You better not tell me this or I’ll go insane, lol. Tony doesn’t stand a chance tofind Roxy which means he has to wait until David lets her go. Roxy will have a lot of explainingto do, not only to dumbie but also to Bobby. What will she come up with? It was very clever of Davidto insert a chip under Roxy’s skin. She won’t notice it nor will she see it since it’s placed on herback. Sly fox, but still a psycho, lol. He worked in a hospital when I remember right so that’s whyhe knew how to attend to Roxy’s wounds. I have no idea what to expect from Mr. Psycho. You said it’sgoing to be worse for Roxy. “She’ll be the new and improved Roxy when she’s done”, I’m quoting youhere. Sounds like she’ll come out as a robot or something, lol. She’ll have a hard time ahead. Davidwill be informed about every step she takes and that fact itself is scary enough. Glad, he didn’t installa cam in her breast, lol. That would be very entertaining, don’t you think? Just hope her time’s upin that bunker soon. She needs more action….and I don’t mean it like having sex with Alice, lol. Alice is a fragile person. Does she know what she wants? That’s what truly confuses me. On one handshe’s telling Dana that she loves her, that she’s the only one for her, that bla bla bla (you getthe picture, lol) but behind her back she’s cheating on her. What happened to being faithful, Al??? I’m glad, she’s not my girlfriend. Am still waiting for Dana when they should break up, lol. Can Ihave her, please? Poor Dana has to spend time with her family. If my mother was like Sharon I’d commitsuicide, lol. Okay, not completely true, but I’d flee far away, even to Siberia if I had to, lol. Sharon’s pretty nosey by going through Dana’s suitcase. What will she find there? A porn video? A whip? lolYou better come up with something nice, missy. We know that Dana’s not dirty, right? Don’t destroy myillusion, lol. Laughed hard when Dana’s cell slid into the tub. Did this ever happen to you? I have anidea how to make it up to you….oops, forgot it again, lol. Maybe you’ll be lucky and I remember it the next time:-))) This was another excellent chapter, my dear. Can’t wait for more!You are definitely a genius, brteyes. I’ll be patiently awaiting your next masterpiece….
Aren’t you full of surprises my dear? Very clever with the tracking device. I like it. I can almost respect someone that psychotic. It takes skill & craft. I’m hoping this will infact be the end of the rats, because seriously, it fucks with my head and don’t much care for that. As for the rats in the L Word episode itself, you can bet your ass I was cursing your name all night long. Alice, Alice, Alice. Will she ever learn? You freakin’ kill me with her. Not every chapter has to be NC-17, for the record, they just tend to be better ;-) I can’t help it if I like sex and you happen to write some steamy steamy stuff. Not sure what Sharon is up to, but you definitely have my curiousity peaked.
Welcome back Brteyes :)First of all can i just say how sorry i am to hear about your grandmother, i know how hard that can be and so my thought go out to you.What another great chapter!!! Im glad Dana realised her mistake by just leaving and rang Alice. Little worried about Tony’s reapperance again, he reli did push his luck by doing what he did. Looks as though he has some control over Alice in some way by the way she acted thou??? Roxy and the chip thing is quite scary she reli has no escape even if and wen she is set free. David clearly has no limits and i reli didnt like it wen it was revealed it wud eithe be Roxy or Alice or both he finally got to experiment on :S. Poor Dana having to struggle through with her grndmothers death and the fact that she doesnt connect with her own family. And im intrigued to know what the deal is with her mother going through her stuff?? Oh and i know wat u mean about writing sex scenes, they seem to take me forever i reli struggle lol. Anyway ramble over, so good to see u bak look forward to another brilliant post from u. :) PPS x x
No, I’m not lazy although my girlfriend tends to tell me that I am, lol. She is misguided in that point but I forgive her each time. Should I forgive you for calling me lazy? lol I heart your story so very much and I’m always looking forward to another chapter. When are you going to post again? It’s rather inscrutable to make out when you’ll be around again. Or are you being lazy? lol I’ll be hoping to see another update of your’s soon. Why do you call me missy, brteyes? I’m not Missy Elliott, my dear…the only thing we have in common is ??? I can’t think of anything, lol. But I like her music. PPS brteyes;-)