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Masked Feelings CH 74 Burn for me
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Dana – We can have all of it, Alice.
Alice – It’s not working, Dana. You know I’m right.
Dana – Why are you fighting me on this? Why are you pulling away from me?
Alice – I can’t do this anymore. I can’t even talk to you….
Dana – Yes, you can… you’re just being stubborn.
Alice – We’ve talked before and look how well that turned out. We are right back where we started.
Dana – Let’s start over….
Alice – Where would we be starting, Dana? From the kiss that we shared that sent you running to Lara? Or maybe from the day she raped me? Perhaps from the day that Lara stabbed you and left you for dead.. or maybe when she tried to finish you off. Where do you want to start?!
Dana – Why are you so angry?
Alice – Why aren’t you?
Dana – I’m putting it past me.
Alice – Why do I feel like I’m talking in circles?
Dana – You’re not making any sense.
Alice – I give up.
Dana – Tell me what you mean.
Alice – I need a break.
Dana – From me?
Alice – From all of it…..
Alice walks toward the door. Dana grabs her arm, digging her fingers into her skin.
Dana – You’re not leaving……
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Andrea was curled up on the couch and fell asleep half way through the movie she was watching. She had had a celebratory drink earlier to commemorate bagging her latest catch, Dana. Maybe she needed to go after more celebrity types. Saying that she wasn’t interested in Dana was true, but she was curious if she could get her again without the drugs. Andrea was sure that she could. Her ego was so over inflated that it made others feel uncomfortable in her presense. Some things should remain quiet or at least have a tasteful spin when talked about, but Andrea was clueless to this. When she was pleased with herself, she wanted everyone to know.
Falling asleep on the couch was the norm for Andrea. She rarely slept in her bed unless there was someone with her. The combination of the drink and the jetlag left her exhausted. She was so out cold that the noise sounded muffled… the noise of the doorbell and pounding of fists on the front door. It took her a few moments to realize that she wasn’t dreaming. Someone was pounding urgently on her door. Her head was still in a fog when she went to the door. She didn’t even think to ask who it was before she unlocked the door. The moment that the deadbolt clicked, a man came rushing inside.
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RESERVED! lol
yeah, I think you should definitely continue. It’s twisted, but hey, that’s what makes it exciting. I wouldn’t mind seeing Alice and Dana give a relationship a shot the right way this time
You are so evil! I can’t believe you killed Andrea *sniff, sniff*. Well okay,it wasn’t you but David that psycho. I guess, I’ll never get her number now:-(At least, there’s still Roxy I can bug provided that you’re so kind and give me her number:-) Any favors you expect from me, hmmm? I would do prettyeverything, lol. You think me bold for speculating about Kristens future actions and feelings? Hey, that’s my job, lol. I have no idea what Roxy’s going to plan to do with that tape that shows Dana and Andrea. Probably hiding it in one of Alice’s drawers where she accidentally finds it. Oops, that would be bad luck, Dana, lol. This chapter definitely had the sickest and most twisted plot I’ve read till now. You need to tell me what inspires you the most. Or do you want me to beg for that?It’s not fair to leave the physical description to me. I suck at that. Roxycould look like Condoleeza Rice though, lol. But no, you mentioned she’scaucasian once, right? Please, give me a tiny hint:-( Yeah, a lap dance wouldbe definitely worth a flight over unless you have something else on your mind. Hope you fill me in:-) I’m happy you brought David back in the story. I really missed him. Guess, he’s even more dangerous than he was before. But that makes his character so attractive to me. His actions vary from person to person (or should I say from victim to victim?) and it’s always fascinating to see that he comes up with lots of different ideas. Alice and Dana….well, I’ve almost shed a tear when Alice tried to leave. Yeah, I know. I actually wanted them to break up and I still do because I don’t feel that Alice cares as much as Dana does for her. Going back to best friends would be more than unlikely. Maybe their friends could bring them back together in that case but I fear it would take them a long time to get there again. A lot of distrust, dissapointment, anger, frustration and lack of communication would cross their way. I loved the sex scenario. It left me…ehm, thinking of how great it would be to….ehm that should remain private, lol. Want to read more smut:-) Hmmmmm, maybe I’m planning to get under your skin. Do you think, it’s a difficult task? Let me know:-) Hope you post soon. You know I need my brteyes-fix as soon as possible. Otherwise I’ll be sad and devastated:-( Keep up that marvelous work, darlin’. I’ll be awaiting your next chapter. Big Hug to you:-) Oh and, RIP Andrea, lol.
You & Twisted Tales won the daily double and ended another mini Danish fanfic drought. Are you kidding? Don’t even think of breaking away from Danish. There are still plenty of Danish fans around. Have you checked youtube lately? In the last 24 hrs, there are 4 new Danish music videos. That just shows people still care. I think the problem is the # of Danish writers has dwindled. So the tibette posts take over giving an illusion that Danish fics are less popular. I am sure that there are still a lot of silence readers like I once was. It was during the late July drought that I decided to comment on the ourchart fanfic forum to call attention to all the Danish writers. I believe most readers are timid in commenting. They will do so some day when they are ready. Please, “Masked Feelings” is awesome. There are so many loose ends. I wish someday someone will discover all the people David had killed; what Roxy is all about; whether Lara is still lurking around waiting for another strike? Alice will figure out her true feelings for Dana; Dana will realise she needs help to crack the case; and the whole thing about Tony; and so on. Besides, the whole theme about the Danish relationship is the 2 of them had to struggle through many adversities before living happily ever after. That’s exactly why they are so precious. I swear I will comment on your story if I am not away from the US. This is too good a storyline to even consider changing the plots. Back to this chapter, I love it. Like I said before, it is ok to have some Danish misunderstanding, as long as they were together to figure things out after each hurdle. It is just life. I believe this story will become a novel by the time you are through with it. Keep it up! pps.
You are so evil for leaving us hanging at the end. What’s up with that? Of course you should continue. Loved the killing of Andrea, she deserved it!! Could you please do the same for Roxy except make her suffer a lot more and a lot longer!! Oh Alice what are you thinking walking away from Dana like that? Don’t you know she is the hottest and sexiest woman on this earth? If you don’t want her I’ll take her issues and all!! Another job well done brteyes. And no you are not allowed to give up on the Danish. This story is the best one out there right now and I would be disappointed to see it end. I will continue to comment as long as you continue to write.
Wow, that David is one sick son of a bitch – when is he going to get his cummupance?? Hope you are leading up to a happy Danish sequel. Good to have you back writing so please post soon.
Sorry I am so late in responding, vacation and internet problems have kept me away. It is good that Dana and Alice are talking but are they being honest and is enough at this point? I feel bad for Dana, it is bad enough she was violated, but then adding Roxy getting off on Dana being victimized is bad enough but given that Dana could possibly loose Alice because she thinks Dana lied and cheated on her… I hope Dana at least has a good friend somewhere to help her out I think she is going to need it provided she can find a friend who doesn’t has the conflict of interest of wanting to sleep with her. I am also worried about what David has planned for Alice and Dana, after what he did to Andrea. I will be waiting for the next installment of this fic, the sequel which you have been teasing us with or any other fic you write. pps
Still here! lol I’m sorry that Andrea met such an awful demise. I hope someone catches that guy soon.
omg bahaha they are obssessed with sex geeez im a little scared about their relationship, whats with alice nearly leaving :( david scares me lol love this story though one of my favourites :) great work!!