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Masked Feelings CH 74 Burn for me
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Derek was sleeping peacefully on his side of the bed, while Kristen stood by the bedroom window looking out. She couldn’t sleep. The words that she had heard from the phone conversation were burned in her memory. She kept her emotions under wraps the whole time she was talking to Derek, but what she really wanted to do was scream about the injustice played upon her. Normally, her first reaction to someone hurting her would be plain and simple hurt. This wasn’t the case here. Roxy’s actions were malicious and deliberate without provocation. What purpose was she serving by trying to break up her marriage?
She was seething with anger. It wasn’t healthy for her or the baby if she didn’t find a way to calm herself down. It wasn’t going to be easy to work with her now. She had already signed on for the case. Kristen felt a moral obligation to keep an eye on her now. This is where that expression really fit… "keep your enemies closer." It wasn’t enough to keep her in line… she was going to have to bring her down. Roxy was more dangerous then she anticipated. She and her unborn child was almost killed by her wreckless attitude. No one was safe.
The situation was so much more complicated now that she had allowed the feelings for Dana to happen. With a baby in the picture and the fact that all she had believed was false, Kristen knew she’d have to try to make the marriage work. She knew that she still loved Derek, but the appeal of having these new and exciting feelings were trying to lure her away. Roxy had fucked with her life in more ways then one. She had her doubting everything…. most of all doubting herself. Kristen couldn’t allow that to happen in all aspects of her life.
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Roxy threw the video tape on the coffee table and went into the kitchen to pour herself a drink. She ran her fingers through her hair, picked up her drink and headed for the bathroom to take that much needed shower. Her head hurt everytime she played out the phone conversation she had with her nemesis, Dana. Mostly, it was just hard knowing that she wasn’t going to be able to see Alice as often as she had been. She had tried to get Alice to commit to something wheen she told her the news on the phone. All she got was a "maybe" for the hug and a "we’ll see" on about a call or a visit. It didn’t seem fair to come up empty handed when she put all that effort into it.
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RESERVED! lol
yeah, I think you should definitely continue. It’s twisted, but hey, that’s what makes it exciting. I wouldn’t mind seeing Alice and Dana give a relationship a shot the right way this time
You are so evil! I can’t believe you killed Andrea *sniff, sniff*. Well okay,it wasn’t you but David that psycho. I guess, I’ll never get her number now:-(At least, there’s still Roxy I can bug provided that you’re so kind and give me her number:-) Any favors you expect from me, hmmm? I would do prettyeverything, lol. You think me bold for speculating about Kristens future actions and feelings? Hey, that’s my job, lol. I have no idea what Roxy’s going to plan to do with that tape that shows Dana and Andrea. Probably hiding it in one of Alice’s drawers where she accidentally finds it. Oops, that would be bad luck, Dana, lol. This chapter definitely had the sickest and most twisted plot I’ve read till now. You need to tell me what inspires you the most. Or do you want me to beg for that?It’s not fair to leave the physical description to me. I suck at that. Roxycould look like Condoleeza Rice though, lol. But no, you mentioned she’scaucasian once, right? Please, give me a tiny hint:-( Yeah, a lap dance wouldbe definitely worth a flight over unless you have something else on your mind. Hope you fill me in:-) I’m happy you brought David back in the story. I really missed him. Guess, he’s even more dangerous than he was before. But that makes his character so attractive to me. His actions vary from person to person (or should I say from victim to victim?) and it’s always fascinating to see that he comes up with lots of different ideas. Alice and Dana….well, I’ve almost shed a tear when Alice tried to leave. Yeah, I know. I actually wanted them to break up and I still do because I don’t feel that Alice cares as much as Dana does for her. Going back to best friends would be more than unlikely. Maybe their friends could bring them back together in that case but I fear it would take them a long time to get there again. A lot of distrust, dissapointment, anger, frustration and lack of communication would cross their way. I loved the sex scenario. It left me…ehm, thinking of how great it would be to….ehm that should remain private, lol. Want to read more smut:-) Hmmmmm, maybe I’m planning to get under your skin. Do you think, it’s a difficult task? Let me know:-) Hope you post soon. You know I need my brteyes-fix as soon as possible. Otherwise I’ll be sad and devastated:-( Keep up that marvelous work, darlin’. I’ll be awaiting your next chapter. Big Hug to you:-) Oh and, RIP Andrea, lol.
You & Twisted Tales won the daily double and ended another mini Danish fanfic drought. Are you kidding? Don’t even think of breaking away from Danish. There are still plenty of Danish fans around. Have you checked youtube lately? In the last 24 hrs, there are 4 new Danish music videos. That just shows people still care. I think the problem is the # of Danish writers has dwindled. So the tibette posts take over giving an illusion that Danish fics are less popular. I am sure that there are still a lot of silence readers like I once was. It was during the late July drought that I decided to comment on the ourchart fanfic forum to call attention to all the Danish writers. I believe most readers are timid in commenting. They will do so some day when they are ready. Please, “Masked Feelings” is awesome. There are so many loose ends. I wish someday someone will discover all the people David had killed; what Roxy is all about; whether Lara is still lurking around waiting for another strike? Alice will figure out her true feelings for Dana; Dana will realise she needs help to crack the case; and the whole thing about Tony; and so on. Besides, the whole theme about the Danish relationship is the 2 of them had to struggle through many adversities before living happily ever after. That’s exactly why they are so precious. I swear I will comment on your story if I am not away from the US. This is too good a storyline to even consider changing the plots. Back to this chapter, I love it. Like I said before, it is ok to have some Danish misunderstanding, as long as they were together to figure things out after each hurdle. It is just life. I believe this story will become a novel by the time you are through with it. Keep it up! pps.
You are so evil for leaving us hanging at the end. What’s up with that? Of course you should continue. Loved the killing of Andrea, she deserved it!! Could you please do the same for Roxy except make her suffer a lot more and a lot longer!! Oh Alice what are you thinking walking away from Dana like that? Don’t you know she is the hottest and sexiest woman on this earth? If you don’t want her I’ll take her issues and all!! Another job well done brteyes. And no you are not allowed to give up on the Danish. This story is the best one out there right now and I would be disappointed to see it end. I will continue to comment as long as you continue to write.
Wow, that David is one sick son of a bitch – when is he going to get his cummupance?? Hope you are leading up to a happy Danish sequel. Good to have you back writing so please post soon.
Sorry I am so late in responding, vacation and internet problems have kept me away. It is good that Dana and Alice are talking but are they being honest and is enough at this point? I feel bad for Dana, it is bad enough she was violated, but then adding Roxy getting off on Dana being victimized is bad enough but given that Dana could possibly loose Alice because she thinks Dana lied and cheated on her… I hope Dana at least has a good friend somewhere to help her out I think she is going to need it provided she can find a friend who doesn’t has the conflict of interest of wanting to sleep with her. I am also worried about what David has planned for Alice and Dana, after what he did to Andrea. I will be waiting for the next installment of this fic, the sequel which you have been teasing us with or any other fic you write. pps
Still here! lol I’m sorry that Andrea met such an awful demise. I hope someone catches that guy soon.
omg bahaha they are obssessed with sex geeez im a little scared about their relationship, whats with alice nearly leaving :( david scares me lol love this story though one of my favourites :) great work!!