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Masked Feelings CH 71 Conditional Honesty
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Dana loved it when she had the time to get out and just look around. There was much to see in Chicago. Alice was definitely going to have to see it with her the next time. She didn’t have time to go inside some of the stores, but she’d window shop. Maybe she’d have time to pick out a present for Alice. It would be a small peace offering.
The glare of the sun off the window was giving her a headache. She moved on. As she approached the alley, she ducked out of the sun for a moment. Dana stepped into the alley and debated on going back since she was walking towards the sun. She stood near the entrance and was about to move out of there when a car went careening through the alley. When she turned around the car was headed right for her. She had not time to react… not even time to have her life flash before her eyes.
She felt arms around her as she was being tackled. Dana was knocked off her feet and went flying through the air. The car narrowly missed her. She felt a crushing weight on top of her…. but she was alive. Dana was stunned, but maybe not as stunned as the woman that was on top of her.
" You saved my life."
" Are you hurt?"
" I’m alive… and any pain I’m feeling now is minimal compared to the alternative."
The woman moves off of her and sits on the curb. Dana lays there a few seconds as a crowd starts to gather. People offer assistance, but Dana declines help. She sits up, but moves a little slow. The woman doesn’t look at her, but just sits there on the curb.
" Maybe I should ask if you’re ok."
" I’m just a little shook up."
" I think we both are. Saying thank you seems like hardly the right words."
" You don’t have to thank me… all I did was react."
"And I’m glad you did or I’d make headlines… and not the good kind. I’m Dana, by the way."
Dana holds out her hand and the woman’s hand slides into hers.
" I’m Andrea."
TBC – This chapter may seem a little tame compared to what I’ve been doing but I hope you enjoyed it. I’ll be back… hopefully a lot sooner this next time.
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What are you up to you sick bastard? I can’t say I’m digging the lack of trust or communication exhibited in this chapter. I’m sure you have something up you’re sleeve & you’ll reveal it when you damn well please. Over all I liked the chapter, although the lack of sex is a bit unforgiveable.
HOORAY! You’re back! And like always with a great installment. Even without any massacres, lol. Hmmmm, so you think I’m not impartial anymore and am trying to charm the pants off of you? Actually, I thought they were already off, lol. Seems like it’s not the case…I have to work harder, huh? To be honest, I wasthinking of a different piece of clothing to get off of you anyway, lol.When I’m complimentary all the time, my dear, it’s only because I have a good reason…maybe also two…or three? Iguess enough to show you how much I worship your story…more with every new chapter. You’re right. I can’t let goof Lara…I miss her in a way. Are you sure she’s dead? I’m not, lol. Thischapter raises so many questions. Would love to know what’s held in these “mysterious” barrels. Who was at Dana’s hotel room? And who wanted to kill Dana?Maybe a mob member? I know you won’t answer these questions right away…but I can at least try, can’t I? I’m glad, Andrea saved Hottie. I knew it was right of me to love her, lol. Must be my female intuition that functions at times like these, lol. Do I smell another fight when it comes to Sara and Roxy? Hope David won’t hypnotize his sister to get rid of Foxy, lol. I’m sure, he’ll attend it to himself. Too much pleasure…more than he had with animals. What a fucking lunatic. Dana made the right decision by going alone to Chicago. I fear she might be having second thoughts when it comes to her relationship with Alice. They definitely need to fix their trust issues. I’mconfident they’re going to make the bestout of it…even with Roxy on their minds…albeit with completely oppositefeelings. As for the tape…no idea if it’s smart of Al to hand it over to Foxy. She promised not to watch it…will she stick to it? I doubt it…I highly doubt it to say the least. You think you know my favorite number? Hmmmm…I’d say…if you guess right I’ll get you some candys, LOL. Not satisfied with it? Maybe you’ve got something on your mind? But if you’re wrong, hrhr…I better think it through before giving an answer, lol. Please post soon, darlin’. You know I need my brteyes-fix. Excellent job, lady. You’ve become near and dear to my heart…(are your pants finally off? lol)
I was so excited to read this chapter (even without the steamy sex!) Hope Dana finds a way to make it up to Alice. Although going alone was a very good idea… Love your story looking forward to the next one!
Oh Alice and Dana!! What am I gonna do with you two? They have to start communicating better or I’m gonna strangle them both. Who is this Andrea chic? Whoever she is she needs to keep away from Dana because she belongs with Alice and that is that!!!
Interesting twist in the end, I wonder what kind of help Andera is going to give Roxy and how did she know where Dana would be? I am also glad that the clock reappeared since I have been waiting for that mystery to be solved. You do make a good point that Dana doesn’t know that it was Alice, not Roxy that started things with Roxy, it would devastated Dana to find out especially from someone other than Alice, but I wonder can Dana ever forgive Alice without knowing the whole truth, not just about that night but the other times that Alice almost fvcked Roxy.
super awesome chapter as always. took me almost 24 hours to read the whole thing because i kept getting interupted by life. i hope your next chapter comes soon because this one was too much of a cliffhanger. noises outside of windows, mysterious phone calls, late night people at hotel doors, and andrea following dana. crazy stuff. please post soon so we can all know what the heck happens. oh and it wouldn’t be a post if i didn’t say … i hate roxy!
Hmmmm intresting, still following this story Please post again very soon :)
So many twists… It was great to see you back!