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Masked Feelings CH 71 Conditional Honesty
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She had been to Chicago a few times, but this trip was going to be different then the others. The neighborhood that she was going to tomorrow was in the most unsavory part of the city. The car was well equiped with a navigational system and maps of Chicago. She knew where the hotel was because she had been there many times. This is where her meeting was so she didn’t even have to go out unless she wanted to. She was staying at the Ritz-Carlton this time around. When she checked in, she headed right for her room. She tipped the young man that carried her bags up and dismissed him.
She immediately ordered something from the menu and unpacked her things while she was waiting. Later, she would be having a meeting over cocktails. It was best not to drink on an empty stomach.
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Alice was trying to relax after the continual attacks of her friends. It was even harder to take since Dana left her to take the brunt of it all… and by herself, mind you. The least she could’ve done was tell her that she changed their plan to tell them together. And what was the deal with Shane staying with her. Shane wouldn’t say why she was there, except that Dana had asked her to stay while she was gone. Alice didn’t feel like she was asking too much. She didn’t need to know every little thing that went on, but when it came to herself, was it necessary to leave her in the dark?
Alice – You don’t have to stay here, Shane. I’m not even sure why Dana asked you.
Shane – I’m already here and I did tell her I’d stay.
Alice – Well, stay because you want to … not because Dana asked you to.
Shane – I know it doesn’t seem like it right now, but I really am happy for the both of you…. as fucked up as this is. I can’t believe she didn’t talk to you before she left. She barely talked to me, but I guess that makes sense since she hasn’t really talked to me for months.
Alice – I’m sorry you got caught in the middle.
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What are you up to you sick bastard? I can’t say I’m digging the lack of trust or communication exhibited in this chapter. I’m sure you have something up you’re sleeve & you’ll reveal it when you damn well please. Over all I liked the chapter, although the lack of sex is a bit unforgiveable.
HOORAY! You’re back! And like always with a great installment. Even without any massacres, lol. Hmmmm, so you think I’m not impartial anymore and am trying to charm the pants off of you? Actually, I thought they were already off, lol. Seems like it’s not the case…I have to work harder, huh? To be honest, I wasthinking of a different piece of clothing to get off of you anyway, lol.When I’m complimentary all the time, my dear, it’s only because I have a good reason…maybe also two…or three? Iguess enough to show you how much I worship your story…more with every new chapter. You’re right. I can’t let goof Lara…I miss her in a way. Are you sure she’s dead? I’m not, lol. Thischapter raises so many questions. Would love to know what’s held in these “mysterious” barrels. Who was at Dana’s hotel room? And who wanted to kill Dana?Maybe a mob member? I know you won’t answer these questions right away…but I can at least try, can’t I? I’m glad, Andrea saved Hottie. I knew it was right of me to love her, lol. Must be my female intuition that functions at times like these, lol. Do I smell another fight when it comes to Sara and Roxy? Hope David won’t hypnotize his sister to get rid of Foxy, lol. I’m sure, he’ll attend it to himself. Too much pleasure…more than he had with animals. What a fucking lunatic. Dana made the right decision by going alone to Chicago. I fear she might be having second thoughts when it comes to her relationship with Alice. They definitely need to fix their trust issues. I’mconfident they’re going to make the bestout of it…even with Roxy on their minds…albeit with completely oppositefeelings. As for the tape…no idea if it’s smart of Al to hand it over to Foxy. She promised not to watch it…will she stick to it? I doubt it…I highly doubt it to say the least. You think you know my favorite number? Hmmmm…I’d say…if you guess right I’ll get you some candys, LOL. Not satisfied with it? Maybe you’ve got something on your mind? But if you’re wrong, hrhr…I better think it through before giving an answer, lol. Please post soon, darlin’. You know I need my brteyes-fix. Excellent job, lady. You’ve become near and dear to my heart…(are your pants finally off? lol)
I was so excited to read this chapter (even without the steamy sex!) Hope Dana finds a way to make it up to Alice. Although going alone was a very good idea… Love your story looking forward to the next one!
Oh Alice and Dana!! What am I gonna do with you two? They have to start communicating better or I’m gonna strangle them both. Who is this Andrea chic? Whoever she is she needs to keep away from Dana because she belongs with Alice and that is that!!!
Interesting twist in the end, I wonder what kind of help Andera is going to give Roxy and how did she know where Dana would be? I am also glad that the clock reappeared since I have been waiting for that mystery to be solved. You do make a good point that Dana doesn’t know that it was Alice, not Roxy that started things with Roxy, it would devastated Dana to find out especially from someone other than Alice, but I wonder can Dana ever forgive Alice without knowing the whole truth, not just about that night but the other times that Alice almost fvcked Roxy.
super awesome chapter as always. took me almost 24 hours to read the whole thing because i kept getting interupted by life. i hope your next chapter comes soon because this one was too much of a cliffhanger. noises outside of windows, mysterious phone calls, late night people at hotel doors, and andrea following dana. crazy stuff. please post soon so we can all know what the heck happens. oh and it wouldn’t be a post if i didn’t say … i hate roxy!
Hmmmm intresting, still following this story Please post again very soon :)
So many twists… It was great to see you back!