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Masked Feelings CH 66 Entanglement
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Dana parked her car at the end of the pier and left a note on the windshield just in case she missed seeing her. She told her to stay in the car and lock the doors until she got back. Dana didn’t know where she should look first. She decided that she’d weave her way back and forth across the pier in hopes this way she wouldn’t miss her. This was bound to take forever. Dana was scared that David might get to her before she would and that just couldn’t happen. She started to run because she couldn’t bear the thought of anything happening to her. There weren’t many people around and the thought crossed her mind that anyone of them could be David. Maybe he knew by now that she had escaped and was looking for her now. Damn it…. why hadn’t she called someone for help?
Alice was barely moving. All she wanted to do was lay down and go to sleep. Her body ached and her mind craved for a distraction from her hellish night. Dana could take her back to Bette and Tina’s, but how was she going to explain her obvious physical shape and where she had been? How was she going to explain why it was Dana bring her back there? And what was she going to tell them? They had a right to know that she could be putting their family in danger. Damn… it had been an hour already.
Dana was dying to call out to her, but was that really wise? She was getting tired herself, but thinking of Alice gave her the energy to keep moving. It was hard to believe it had been over an hour already. Dana had covered an amazingly large amount of area in such a short time. Her frustration was growing by the second until she saw her, moving along the water’s edge. It broke her heart, she looked so helpless and that wasn’t the woman she was used to seeing.
Dana ran up to her. Alice turned as she heard the approaching footsteps. She managed a small smile for Dana, though that’s not what she really wanted. What she really wanted to do was wrap her arms around the woman and kiss her. When Dana got to her, she wrapped her arms around Alice. She seemed to melt against her. Dana wanted to stay that way, but she knew it wasn’t the best option.
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I knew you were a whore, but if you’re classifying yourself as a comment whore, who am I to argue? I’m not sure if you have outdone or one upped yourself yet … I would have to re-read it at least another half dozen times, but it was damn good. Sometimes I can forgot just how fucking twisted you are & then you come back with something like this … which I realize is not even the tip of your toxic iceberg. As for your great desire to torment me … I’m all to familiar with it. And as far as how sex deprived I am … well perhaps I should just keep that bit to myself. I’m sure you would prefer to get my sweet & gushy side … but not everyone is quite that fortunate … someone has to get pricked. Don’t think that one smutty update is going to get rid of ALL of your demerits … you seriously need to get back to work bitch. I’ll be eagerly waiting for you to shock & surprise me with your talents.
Thank god you are back!! Just an hour ago I’ve started reading this babe again from the beginning, and u post a new chap in the middle of it… Talk about coincidence. Oh BTW I’m baleygoodnes(the chick who likes to thank you, a lot), had to change my name.. With one chapter you managed to make me feel every single emotion, everything in between love and hate… The beginning, when Dana finally reached Alice, the comfortable silence got to me. In a good way though, I could feel the love between them. At the end, a forceful and dark Alice made me cringe… it really was scary. But near the last part, I’m glad she said she won’t leave. They play it rough a little too much don’t ya think babe? Is this the third or fourth time, one of them had forced the other? Third, I guess… :) GOD, how much I still hate Roxy, i cant even pity her. I don’t feel sorry for what she had to experience back then. OH Kristen, oh pretty Kristen, what have you done? (i couldn’t comment to your previous post) I should have listened to my gut and shouldn’t have given her benefit of the doubt. See, another potential!! Kill her off!! Kill her off!! :) I’m getting way used to this evil feeling, special thanks to IC! David still hasn’t noticed that Alice has escaped has he? lol what happened to the mysterious man in the shadows, my sweet Danish Fix-er? I am more than glad Dana could find her before David did. Please post soon for the love of Danish, please. Love you and your twisted mind… Thanks!!!
I can’t believe I was the only oone who pm’d you to plead with you to post another chapter…me and De_leish_ous were actually talking about the fact that you did not post for awhile…Anyway another great chapter, I sometimes that Alice and Dana could just talk to each other then most of these fights/fall-outs wouldn’t happen. Still loving this story and PPS
Whoa – did someone mention the word twisted? hmmm… lol I breathed a sigh of relief when Dana found Alice, and was psyched that Kristen was about to see that Alice was back. But she was gone – which wasn’t a bad thing. Who would have thought that Alice would have reacted to Dana that way. I guess she has been through so much that she’s probably forever changed. I’m glad you softened her up at the end. There is so much love between them, but it feels like the tension below the surface is always a nano-second from pulling them apart. I was surprised Dana let her leave.
well damn…you were right, I did indeed enjoy the ending to this. I love how realistic you made Alice, with the roughness at first but the genuine love for Dana in the end that stopped her from doing anything truly unwanted. This is still twisted as hell and once again you’ve left me anxious as to what’s to come, you still have so many things you could implement into this. Love it, post soon so my anxiety eases just a tad. But what way to end a chapter. :)
Hé my favorite writer! And I didn’t comment on the last chapter, shame on me…sorry! Please trust me when I tell you I read it together with this one. Personal is getting in the way! But getting back on the subject of commenting. You blew my mind with these two chapters, I mean when I think this story is all played out you bring on something amazing everytime. So glad Dana got to Alice when she did, she was messed up big time. And the lovemaking was powerfull to say the least. I have got to read both chapters again because it was a lot to take in for one reading session. I love you for writing this story and I will be back with regular comments. Hope to still be in the list of faithfull readers. Thanks for this wonderfull update, sweetie you’re the best.
That’s right, I’m back baby! ;) I’ll stick around this time…and if not, you should blame my employer. (Maybe you can write my employer and ask them to give me more free time to comment on stories like this. :P) Poor poor Alice, I could totally picture her walking on the beach…completely lost. Yay for Dana to find her and to have them share such a sweet moment right after that! Alice is safe…for the tim being. Ofcourse David will always be able to find Alice. :S I wonder if he’s after Dana too. She did dump his big sis (well sort of). And Roxy should have picked the locks of the doors in David’s house. Come on, she’s a tough lady and a small concussion shouldn’t have kept her from solving a mystery (I’m just teasing you :D)! Will Kristen have a part in this David-storyline too (as a colleague of Roxy)? (Hint hint, let her pick the locks…I so want to know what is behing those doors.) The end of this chapter was satisying in a disturbing way. It’s all about who’s in control with those two. It has been from the beginning (starting with Dana ‘raping’ Alice). I wonder if these two will ever find a balance. And yeah, there are still some question unanswered. The clock and Lara, dead or alive??? Are you ever going to reveal the answers? :D
Bloody fucking hell!!! That was an outstanding chapter, my dear. I’m so excited…don’t know where to start. I guess, at the beginning would be a good idea, lol. Roxy has a hard timeremembering her childhood. Now she seems fragile and weak but I’m sure you giveher more strength in the next chapters. Actually, you already did in this one. So glad, Dana has a good nose and found Alice before David could. It took her only one hour, but who cares, right? lol Being an athlete is sometimes anadvantage, mainly being able to kick someone’s ass, lol. I didn’t thank you the last time for bringing up the fight between Roxy and Dana. Thanks, darlin’! But as I know you and how you decribed Roxy later in this installment she’s seeking revenge. She’s still one of my favorite characters and I’m notsaying it just to get on your good side. Do you have one, by the way? LOL Dana made the right decision by bringing Alice to her condo even if it was against the rules. Who thinks of rules while being in mortal fear? Alice of course☺. Dana saying Kristen’s name whenAlice touched her wasn’t the best that ever came out of her mouth. But who can blame Ms. Hottie? lol Now, there’ll be just more dyke drama. And don’t we love it? lol And yes, I blame Kristen for kissing Dana. How dare you???? That means war, lol. She could try it out with Alison or Roxy. Both of them are available, lol. Let’s see how the talk between Dana and Kristen plays out. I’m curious what you make out of it. David’s still a pain in the ass. What a psycho. If Lara’s still alive I won’t imagine what happens to Alice. You said you would maybe kill off Alice. Do you really want to see me crying rivers? I guess, you want to, Miss Smut-Ass, lol. Roxy doesn’t seem interesting enough to David, now that she’s shown how unstable she is. I really hope, Roxy kind of finds that bastard “Dick” and pays him back everything she went through with him. Still feel sorry for her, obviously. I’m so glad I read this chapter at home and not in school like the last time. How fucking hot was the end??? It didn’t only melt my brain away, lol. That’s for sure. I especially loved the part where Dana lands on her butt and all the stuff she helds in her hands flies on top of her. Mhhhhhhhmmmm, delicious:-) Did that ever happen to you? I mean falling to the ground of course, lol. It was written like from own experience, lol. Alice being all dominant exposes a new and kind of sexy side of her. Totally loved it! Don’t forget the whip next time, lol. I’m not sure what you come up next with but I’m sooooo looking forward to it. You’re the best!!! Keep on rockin’, babe!! Love you♥
another wonderful chapter as always my dear. i’m sure you are dying to know if i feel bad for roxy. well i don’t really. and now that you’ve revealed her past a little it makes me a little more upset with her. if she’s been through having someone force themselves on her then why is she using the same tactics on alice? in the next chapter can you send roxy to therapy where she stays until she is a nice girl and can play well with others. thanks! as for dana and alice, well those two just keep getting more and more messed up don’t they. why did kristen have to kiss dana when she was sleeping? why did dana have to say kristen’s name? why couldn’t alice just take a deep breath and let dana explain? one of these days you are going to give me a heartattack reading your story. but you know i love it and that’s why i stick around. oh, before i forget, thank you for the b-day greeting in your comment section, you sure do know how to make a gal feel special. and lastly, the sex scene was rather hot.
I really like the raw emmotions between Alice and Dana in the last scene–IMHO you write scenes like that better than anyone else on this site. It sort of reminded me of the the last scene between Lara and Dana, sans the connection or tenderness at the end. I hope Dana can loose some of her anger with Roxy. It is not good to carry that bitterness around, it can twisted as in the case of David. Besides in a way it gives Roxy some power over Dana. As long as you keep writing, I’ll keep reading.
Woah scary fucked up dark Alice, is it wrong I kinda liked her that way? Who can really blame her though, the poor woman just keeps going through hell over and over again. I was so happy when Dana found Alice then gave her a bath then Dana had to go and say Kristen’s name dammit. As for Roxy, yeah I still feel sorry for her past but I really think she needs to let Alice go for the sake of what little sanity the woman has left. It’s offical I hate Lara and David, equally, maybe Lara more since she started all this. You always leave me wanting more, my dear, and you never disappoint. I feel every emotion in your chaps it’s just amazing and freaky at the same time. Hope you can PPS. xx