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Masked Feelings CH 67 Valentine’s Edition
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David was laughing at their expense, but why shouldn’t he? They were all so easy to play. He got more out of this then he expected. Locking up Alice and Roxy in the walk-in cooler was pure brilliance. Roxy failed miserably under pressure. Alice remained cool until she saw Roxy pass out, which proved she fared better on her own or so it seemed. She didn’t do too badly when he took her to the pier. Maybe her experience with Lara had made her a little stronger, but then again he wasn’t out to break her…. not yet anyway. Leaving that text for Dana was the probably the best. He knew that she’d lose control, but wasn’t sure to what extent. He loved to watch women fight. It was fun to see Dana kick Roxy’s ass, especially when her defenses were down. Then to see her clobber her over the head with the shovel… damn that must have hurt.
This was more of an experiment of reactions, seeing how each person conducted themselves in different circumstances. Dana got to be the hero. She got to save poor Alice. He knew that the battery was low in her phone,with just enough juice to place the call. David couldn’t be there to watch the whole fiasco. Paranoia had to be running deep since neither of them knew what he looked like. Alice had probably tried to keep a low profile since she more then likely couldn’t move very fast. Dana was most likely running down the pier trying to find her.
He planned to let Alice escape all along. The ropes were loose enough to get out of, but not quite loose enough to come out of it unscathed. He wanted her to have rope burns as a reminder. Maybe this would be the circumstance that would cement their relationship. The plan had been to give Alice everything she wanted so it could be slowly taken away. Only one person knew what he looked liked, but she had no idea who he was really was. David had destroyed every picture.. every piece of information that could identify him. As long as no one else knew what he looked like… he would always remain the mystery man. The fun was only just beginning. They might be getting a break, but for how long?
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And here I was, waiting for a massacre … I guess you still have a trick or two up those sleeves of yours. Lovely dedication, I’m all a glow. As for telling you about the direction of your own story, I’m flattered that my opinion means so damn much to you & and that you’re killing yourself just to please me. Don’t die on me, I’m terribly attatched & my story isn’t done yet! Absoulutely, it is entirely about sex! Just kidding, it’s about their journey & all the crazy shit that they seemed to be drawn to like a magnet. As for my prickly exterior, I think you have managed to get under my skin at time or two to experience my sweet, gushy side. Don’t remember how many times I read the last chapter, but I gotta say I’m loving this chapter in a major way. You’re just so damn accomodating! Can’t tell you how much that made me laugh, that and finally wrote me a shower scene … it must be Valentine’s Day. And yes, I do adore the fact that you’re twisted … but I didn’t realize it was your toxicity that was leaking all over the floor. Oops … my bad! Believe me when I tell you that my greatest desire is not to torment you … I have far grander aspirations than that … although I dig the fact you want to please me. As for you demerits … just keep working them off … we’ll evaluate at a later date. As for your talents … I’m still waiting for all of them to be revealed to me.
I love cliffhangers, I hate cliffhangers but no wait…I loved this one a lot!! Just a new chapter an excellent update jet again. The shower scene…that was just I mean wow. You leave me at a loss for words. Looking forward to the next one. Hope you had a happy valentine’s day yourself. ;-))
I will write a note for your boss. One of my arguments will be ‘is very good at writing hot steamy sex scenes’. Do you think I’m able to convince your boss with that? :P Yay, one mystery revealed! My eyes didn’t deceive me when I read David is the mystery man?!? I knew it! If Roxy only knew. lol @ the conversation that Roxy and Andrea we’re having about taking Roxy ‘home’. I have this feeling David will be haunting Alice (and Dana) and let’s hope it’ll not have a happy ending as David is probably hoping for. I didn’t see the proposal coming. I know they need to work things out bla bla bla…but please let Alice say yes (or at least give me a tiny bit of hope she will). I’m very curious what will happen when Dana and Kristen (and Alice) will have a conversation. And please do warn me when things get graphical. You don’t want one of your readers to have a heartache because of your story, do you? ;) Btw, I was wondering what you were thinking of S4 without Dana/Danish. I have to say…I LOVE it (but nothing can top Danish!).
Way too early for Dana to ask Alice to marry her–they both still have a ton of stuff to work thru but a nice gesture by Dana anyway. Then suspense keeps building both David and Roxy are ticking time-bombs for Alice and Dana respectively I wonder which one will go off first.
Great chapter, so sweet of Dana to askAlice to marry her, I hope she says yes but I also hope they have along talk about all the fears of trust and so on. I was also thinking if Kirsten had been poisioned don’t know why but thats what came to me reading the story….still loving this story and PPS :D
Yes, Dana, I will!!!!! If Alice abnegates, I’ll wait for you, lol. You think, I’m easy to please? Well, maybe I’m just an easy mind, lol. But yeah, truth to be told, I loved every chapter you wrote till now. But that doesn’t mean, I agree on everything, lol. David, David…what shall we do with you? Giving him a beating wouldn’t be enough. I think, he would even like it in the end and ask for more, lol. So Lara, appear finally! I need you to be the genius mind behind all the massacrethat’s going to happen soon. Actually, I hope there will be one, lol. Hmmmm, you really want me to tell you all the details? I guess, that would take too long, lol. I feel sorry for Kristen being all sick. Maybe it’s better when they talk later. Wouldn’t like seeing her puking all over Dana, lol. As for Roxy…well well, what can I say? Don’t seek revenge or MY twin brother comes around, lol. She reminds me of a stalker sometimes, but I still like her. It would be boring without her.Unfortunately, she needs to go to a therapist and get over her childhood. She can’t change that fact, as painful as it is. No idea, what to think about Andrea so far. I have a bad feeling when it comes to her. Maybe I’m just overreacting, lol. When she becomes a pain in the ass the mob could somehow get rid of her, lol. You didn’t mention them in a long time. And yeah, I’ll try and be thankful of what I get, lol. As for the shower scene: How fucking hot was that???? Loved it. I guess, that’ll be my favorite scene ever!!!! There’s just one place that could change my mind of the shower being my fav. But I won’t tell, lol. So happy, you managed to bring this chapter out this fast. Don’t let me wait too long for the next though or I’ll talk to your lazy butt, lol. You rock! Happy (belated) Valentine, darlin’!!!
well that was a rather steamy chapter. you almost caused my bath water to boil. :) i’m sure i don’t have to tell you how big my smile was when i read that roxy gets to alice’s office only to find alice was not there. that was so rad! i gotta tell ya i was taken my surprise that dana popped the big question to alice. those girls need to be working out a few things before they get all serious. oh and kristen with the flu? are you sure it’s the flu? it seems so tame for you! i’ll be awaiting the next chapter to see if she’s been poisoned. well.. i guess that’s all i’ve got to say. you did good with the typos, very few! happy valentine’s day.
Woah again what an amazing chapter, I’m not going to leave a long winded message cause I have to get some of my own writing done, however after reading this mine doesn’t compare int he slightest. This was fantastic and such a surprise ending! I hope Alice says yes :D But now danish are happy and reconnecting someone’s gonna come in and spoil it, Roxy or David or Kirsten or some other evil character you’re dreaming up :( Again this was perfect thanks so much, hope you can post again soon. xx