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Masked Feelings CH 65 Solitary Confinement
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If David had learned anything from Lara, it was to know your adversaries. It was helpful to use people’s weakness against them. Sometimes fear could be a tool. It could even be created at your own hand, like Lara had done when she raped Alice. The poor woman didn’t know what hit her when Lara had unleashed her rage on her. David watched the tape over and over again…. getting a hard on as he watched his sister in action. The feelings that he had for her were so out of line and perverse. Watching his sister finish off Gina was probably just as thrilling. Damned if he didn’t look up to his sister in the biggest way. Observing people when they were in situations out of their control was fascinating. It felt good to release some of his own pent up emotions. Killing Mrs. Lewis opened a new door of his dementia. Seeing her reaction when she knew she was about to die was more then he could imagine. Killing animals wouldn’t suffice anymore. It didn’t even compare. You couldn’t get that kind of reaction from an animal.
The greatest thing about humans is the power of freewill. It’s what truly separates us from the animals. Everything is a choice. The choices we make not only effect ourselves, but those around us. If we have a conscious, it acts as our moral compass… steering us in the right direction. Even the best of us make poor choices, but if we can learn something… we’re all the better off. Not everyone has a conscious however, such in the case of David.
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Kristen was just a completely misguided soul. She wasn’t a bad person, but the hurt that she felt was definitely effecting her ability to think rationally. She wanted to fill the empty void that kept growing as the hours and days passed. For some reason she thought Dana could solve all her problems…. or at least the loneliness.
Seeing as Kristen wasn’t up to cooking yet, she elected to order in. Since Dana was into full training mode, Kristen paid special attention to the menu choices. She ordered food that was specifically marked "light and healthy". Now she was just waiting for Dana to show up, like she promised. Of course Kristen picked out a bottle of wine to enhance the mood for the evening. She had taken a pain killer not long ago, but it probably wouldn’t hurt to have a glass of wine to further unwind.
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Holy fuckin’ shit. Yes you can still shock! What wasn’t in this story?! For once I feel completely sorry for Roxy, and what’s gonna happen when Dana gets to Alice, it’s a trap right but hopefulyl Dana will go prepared. Man I’m totally enthralled by this, it’s like no other story on here, it’s sheer brilliance. PPS
Wow! That was a hell of a chapter! I was scared to death Roxy and Alice would have been killed by Mr. Psycho…but nooo. I should have known, you tease, lol. My first thought was: oh shit, David’s gonna rape Alice! Twice in a story? How unfair, lol. Thanks for proving me wrong:-) Still, it was a dark day for Alice to be tied up, havinga “mask” on her face and not being able to speak. I’m sure she would have talking the whole time if David wasn’t clever enough to keep her quiet. I’m glad, she finally had the chance to call Dana on the cell. Let’s hope, she finds her soon. Somewhere on the beach? In the water maybe? lol As for Kristen: what was she thinking kissing my Dana? Yeah, you read it right, she’s all mine, lol. I know you could see them together but I would love to see her with Alice all the way through. I guess, Dana won’t be that mad at Kristen as Kristen will be at herself. Maybe she moves out? No, we won’t be that bad, lol. So, Dana needs to buy a chastity belt when it comes to Kristen, lol. Oh god, I felt so bad for Roxy. Can’t imagine such a childhood. I don’t know how I would behave in this situation she wasput through. Do I have to repeat, Roxy is one of my favorite characters? But I won’t tell you who’s my number one. You have to guess, lol. You made Dana my hero again. Knocking Roxy down with a shovel wasn’t quite fair, but who cares, right? So, Roxy’s real name isMarvela…as for marvellous? Someone’s ironic here…lol I’m so glad you’re back. It was hard without my favorite writer around. Thanks for this hilarious and intense chapter. I missed you! Please post soon, darlin’. Love you
Wow – worth the wait, you certainly know how to keep our attention. A fantastic piece of fiction.
I don’t think I’ve left you a comment before, and that shames me because this story is fucking wonderful. I love all the twists you throw into it, and this chapter was just full of them. You could take it so many places from here, and with your creativity and talent I wouldn’t be disappointed with any of them. You certainly know how to end a chapter, although now I’ll be anxious waiting for the next update. It’s totally worth it, though. Fantastic job.
What a story I am so hooked on!!! Dana has to be Alice’s hero again PPS and don’t leave us hamging!:D
Yes, you can still shock me. I’m feeling very bad for Roxy right now. She’s probably not all bad either. Kristen is so lonely and broken. I wonder when she and Dana will talk about what happened. It’s great to have you back, though you torture us so… lol
I’m hoping that you can still shock me. It’s so kind of you to care whether or not I am sex deprived. I really warms that stone inside my chest I call a heart. Took ya long enough to freakin’ post an update. But after being on a glorious holiday, I suppose you just couldn’t find the time. As for rewards … are you kidding? You still need to work off the demerits … when you’ve done that, then we’ll talk rewards. Although you do get bonus points for not having Alice or Dana be unfaithful to one another … but I have a feeling that will be short lived, considering your desire to torment me.
Take all the time you want to post—as long as you don’t stop. With Dana gone and forgotten on the show we need Dana/Danish fanfic. Interesting twist on Roxy’s character, I wonder how it will play out for her now that she remembers, she is not a bad person, just a little on the obsessed side. I also thought it was interesting that David seems to hold a bigger grudge against Alice over Roxy—who killed Lara (as far as he knows) or Dana—who Lara ‘loved’ in her own twisted way. I see some of the mysteries are on the brink of being revealed.
HEY Captain Doom & Gloom, isn’t about time for an update? Are you getting freakin’ lazy on me? I’m thinking your due for a really hot & smutty update, instead of just demented, incest consumed pyschopaths beating on my girls. You think you’re up to the task? You think you can one-up yourself, because I’m still waiting … don’t think that I forgot or plan on letting up on you.
Hey there! First of all, I hope you had a nice holiday! :D I haven’t commented in ages. At the end of last year I was running around like a chicken with it’s head cut off. But everything is back to normal now and I am able to comment on your wonderful story. Ofcourse I was overexcited to see Alice and Dana back together. But knowing you, that wouldn’t last long. ;) As for Kristen makinga move on Dana…I always thought it would come to that point. But I don’t think Kristen is a real threat to Danish, she’s just feeling lonely.BUT Alice and Dana in the near presence of David on the other hand can be a real threat…David is a real psycho! Still not a big fan of Roxy, but I feel sorry for her that she had to go through during her childhood.
Sorry for the comment delay but this site kept crashing my computer last night. And after 5 attempts I gave up. So, great update! The Roxy flashback was rather harsh and you actually came close to making me feel bad for her, almost. Kristen is making my skin crawl now. You are giving the women of the FBI a bad rep lady. Haha! David is a well written super creepy killer dude and he makes me very nervous, especially when he’s holding a knife to Alice’s throat. Hooray for Dana putting 2+2 together, but what a dimwit for going alone. She could’ve at least called one of her homies to let them know what she was doing. But then I wouldn’t be white knuckling it while reading so I understand what you are doing. But how dare you make us all worry like that. I’m going to say my prayers tonight, ‘please keep Dana and Alice safe from harm in Brteyes story. Please don’t let her kill one of them.’ I think it’s time to change your name to darkeyes now with all this evil you are unleashing. So my dear… well done, keep going, don’t hurt the girls we love and keep on keepin’ on!
Wow what a comeback…Ive missed you! Hmm i think Kristen isnt thinking straight right now and she seems to have lost her way a little. Maybe she can come to her senses before she makes a fool of herself…or has she already? I hope Dana will have the strength to stay away from her, if she loved Alice she would!! David really, really frightens me, he is such a psycho and there seems to be no limits to his evil. The way he treated Alice made me shout out at my computer, lol. I was so relieved that Alice has got in touch with Dana but im still feeling very uneasy for them both.Please let them be ok, havent they been through enough already or are you going to torture us more? The insight into Roxys past made me cringe, christ no wonder she went crazy when she realised that she was locked up in Davids basement! Its helped me to understand why she has acted to certain situations in the previous chapters the way she has! Welcome back brteyes…amazing writing as ever,thanks. I will read your pm after work and get back to you asap.