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Masked Feelings CH 65 Solitary Confinement
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Roxy felt the walls start to close in around her, damned if it wasn’t happening again. The flashbacks to childhood, being locked up in that closet… so damn hard to breathe. The air was so hot and sticky. The hours of darkness that she endured with only the small amount of light coming from the crack under the door. Roxy would lay on the floor with her face to the crack, hoping to catch a draft that would cool her face. She’d draw in a deep breath of fresh air when it came available.
Sometimes she’d be in there for hours. Roxy managed to distract herself for quite sometime, but eventually the time would come where she couldn’t hold it anymore. How could anyone endure torturous hours being locked up without relieving themselves? Sitting in her own urine and feces was so humiliating… but it wasn’t the worst thing that had happened to her. What came after was the worst….
Alice – Roxy….. Roxy!
Roxy – Huh?
Alice – What’s wrong with you? You’re so pale… and sweating like a pig.
Roxy clasped her hands together to keep them from shaking.
Roxy – We need to get out of here.
Alice – Well duh… I think I know that.
Roxy had a terrified look in her eyes.
Roxy – Don’t leave me in here.
Alice – My cell phone!
Alice retrieves her cell out of her pocket. There was no signal.
Alice – Damn it…
Roxy – I feel a breeze.
Her voice raised a few octaves higher.
Alice – It smells really funny in here now…. more so then ever before.
Roxy was in survival mode, and definitely not in the present day time. She breathed in deeply. Alice quickly threw her hand over Roxy’s face. She forcefully pushed her away.
Alice – Don’t breathe in…. I think we’re being poisoned!
Alice tried to warn her, but it was obvious that she wasn’t reaching her. Roxy continued to take in deep breaths. She welcomed the heady feeling and let it close in around her. In just a few moments, Roxy collapsed to the floor. Seeing her pass out made Alice feel panicky. She could feel herself losing the battle. The gas was having it’s effect… she was drifting off. Alice tried to scream before she passed out, but it came out barely a whisper.
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Holy fuckin’ shit. Yes you can still shock! What wasn’t in this story?! For once I feel completely sorry for Roxy, and what’s gonna happen when Dana gets to Alice, it’s a trap right but hopefulyl Dana will go prepared. Man I’m totally enthralled by this, it’s like no other story on here, it’s sheer brilliance. PPS
Wow! That was a hell of a chapter! I was scared to death Roxy and Alice would have been killed by Mr. Psycho…but nooo. I should have known, you tease, lol. My first thought was: oh shit, David’s gonna rape Alice! Twice in a story? How unfair, lol. Thanks for proving me wrong:-) Still, it was a dark day for Alice to be tied up, havinga “mask” on her face and not being able to speak. I’m sure she would have talking the whole time if David wasn’t clever enough to keep her quiet. I’m glad, she finally had the chance to call Dana on the cell. Let’s hope, she finds her soon. Somewhere on the beach? In the water maybe? lol As for Kristen: what was she thinking kissing my Dana? Yeah, you read it right, she’s all mine, lol. I know you could see them together but I would love to see her with Alice all the way through. I guess, Dana won’t be that mad at Kristen as Kristen will be at herself. Maybe she moves out? No, we won’t be that bad, lol. So, Dana needs to buy a chastity belt when it comes to Kristen, lol. Oh god, I felt so bad for Roxy. Can’t imagine such a childhood. I don’t know how I would behave in this situation she wasput through. Do I have to repeat, Roxy is one of my favorite characters? But I won’t tell you who’s my number one. You have to guess, lol. You made Dana my hero again. Knocking Roxy down with a shovel wasn’t quite fair, but who cares, right? So, Roxy’s real name isMarvela…as for marvellous? Someone’s ironic here…lol I’m so glad you’re back. It was hard without my favorite writer around. Thanks for this hilarious and intense chapter. I missed you! Please post soon, darlin’. Love you
Wow – worth the wait, you certainly know how to keep our attention. A fantastic piece of fiction.
I don’t think I’ve left you a comment before, and that shames me because this story is fucking wonderful. I love all the twists you throw into it, and this chapter was just full of them. You could take it so many places from here, and with your creativity and talent I wouldn’t be disappointed with any of them. You certainly know how to end a chapter, although now I’ll be anxious waiting for the next update. It’s totally worth it, though. Fantastic job.
What a story I am so hooked on!!! Dana has to be Alice’s hero again PPS and don’t leave us hamging!:D
Yes, you can still shock me. I’m feeling very bad for Roxy right now. She’s probably not all bad either. Kristen is so lonely and broken. I wonder when she and Dana will talk about what happened. It’s great to have you back, though you torture us so… lol
I’m hoping that you can still shock me. It’s so kind of you to care whether or not I am sex deprived. I really warms that stone inside my chest I call a heart. Took ya long enough to freakin’ post an update. But after being on a glorious holiday, I suppose you just couldn’t find the time. As for rewards … are you kidding? You still need to work off the demerits … when you’ve done that, then we’ll talk rewards. Although you do get bonus points for not having Alice or Dana be unfaithful to one another … but I have a feeling that will be short lived, considering your desire to torment me.
Take all the time you want to post—as long as you don’t stop. With Dana gone and forgotten on the show we need Dana/Danish fanfic. Interesting twist on Roxy’s character, I wonder how it will play out for her now that she remembers, she is not a bad person, just a little on the obsessed side. I also thought it was interesting that David seems to hold a bigger grudge against Alice over Roxy—who killed Lara (as far as he knows) or Dana—who Lara ‘loved’ in her own twisted way. I see some of the mysteries are on the brink of being revealed.
HEY Captain Doom & Gloom, isn’t about time for an update? Are you getting freakin’ lazy on me? I’m thinking your due for a really hot & smutty update, instead of just demented, incest consumed pyschopaths beating on my girls. You think you’re up to the task? You think you can one-up yourself, because I’m still waiting … don’t think that I forgot or plan on letting up on you.
Hey there! First of all, I hope you had a nice holiday! :D I haven’t commented in ages. At the end of last year I was running around like a chicken with it’s head cut off. But everything is back to normal now and I am able to comment on your wonderful story. Ofcourse I was overexcited to see Alice and Dana back together. But knowing you, that wouldn’t last long. ;) As for Kristen makinga move on Dana…I always thought it would come to that point. But I don’t think Kristen is a real threat to Danish, she’s just feeling lonely.BUT Alice and Dana in the near presence of David on the other hand can be a real threat…David is a real psycho! Still not a big fan of Roxy, but I feel sorry for her that she had to go through during her childhood.
Sorry for the comment delay but this site kept crashing my computer last night. And after 5 attempts I gave up. So, great update! The Roxy flashback was rather harsh and you actually came close to making me feel bad for her, almost. Kristen is making my skin crawl now. You are giving the women of the FBI a bad rep lady. Haha! David is a well written super creepy killer dude and he makes me very nervous, especially when he’s holding a knife to Alice’s throat. Hooray for Dana putting 2+2 together, but what a dimwit for going alone. She could’ve at least called one of her homies to let them know what she was doing. But then I wouldn’t be white knuckling it while reading so I understand what you are doing. But how dare you make us all worry like that. I’m going to say my prayers tonight, ‘please keep Dana and Alice safe from harm in Brteyes story. Please don’t let her kill one of them.’ I think it’s time to change your name to darkeyes now with all this evil you are unleashing. So my dear… well done, keep going, don’t hurt the girls we love and keep on keepin’ on!
Wow what a comeback…Ive missed you! Hmm i think Kristen isnt thinking straight right now and she seems to have lost her way a little. Maybe she can come to her senses before she makes a fool of herself…or has she already? I hope Dana will have the strength to stay away from her, if she loved Alice she would!! David really, really frightens me, he is such a psycho and there seems to be no limits to his evil. The way he treated Alice made me shout out at my computer, lol. I was so relieved that Alice has got in touch with Dana but im still feeling very uneasy for them both.Please let them be ok, havent they been through enough already or are you going to torture us more? The insight into Roxys past made me cringe, christ no wonder she went crazy when she realised that she was locked up in Davids basement! Its helped me to understand why she has acted to certain situations in the previous chapters the way she has! Welcome back brteyes…amazing writing as ever,thanks. I will read your pm after work and get back to you asap.