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Masked Feelings CH 47 A Night at Lara’s Sister’s house
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Tina – Sounds like you really mean it.
Alice – I do and I’m more then serious. As much as I hate seeking professional help, I’m willing to do it.. not just for Dana but for myself now. Before I thought of just doing this for Dana.. but I know that whether Dana takes me back or not, I have to get my head straight and figure out why I do the things I do.
Tina – Thats the most sense you’ve made in weeks. If Dana knows that you’re willing to make the effort, I think there is always the chance she’ll come around.
Kristen sat in her car, drinking the mocha that she picked up at Starbucks early this morning. She thought about what she was going to say to Dana, but nothing sounded good enough. How do you sugar-coat what Alice did to her? Not to mention it was Roxy that was the other woman…. that would be the hardest part to get over. Kristen wasn’t even sure if she was in the same position whether or not if she could get past that. Kristen tried to push her own personal feelings aside and do what she thought was best for Dana… and Alice was it.
Sara pulled up behind Dana’s car and they sat there talking for a few minutes. Kristen gave Alice a call.
Alice – Hello?
Kristen – She just pulled up… someone gave her a ride back to her car.
Alice – Someone… who?
Kristen – A woman.
Alice – Oh…
Kristen – Alice… keep an open mind. It doesn’t mean that she slept with her.
Alice – I know… I wouldn’t blame her if she did though.
Kristen – I’ll talk to her. Maybe I can get her to talk to you, be ready if thats the case. I got to go… she’s getting out.
No goodbye.. Kristen had hung up… Alice stood there holding the phone.
Dana had made it to her car door when Kristen came up behind her to touch her shoulder. She turns around to face Kristen.
Dana – Kristen? What are you doing here?
TBC – I hope this is a good lead into the next chapter cause I’m planning something good for it. Please give me your comments.. thanks for reading!
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I’m glad that we learned a little more about Lara, and that Sara didn’t hook up with Dana. She needs a friend right now.
Hey, nice chapter – all the drama is sure going full steam ahead… but it would be really, really good if Al & Dana could get back together soonish. Real good!
YAY :hugs Br: this was such a great chap ty so much. well consider me your cheerleader so there will be no giving up! but i know you wouldnt since what u got going here is way to awesome to give up. I must admit roxy is at the bottom of the list BUT its coool to see and try to understand about Roxy also why she has such a powerful wave over Alice! what a way to end! im on the edge of my seat here will Kristin say the magic words and bring dana home to Alice? i hope sooooo :) :waves poms poms: Brteyes brteyes she’s our gal! lol thats as far as my cheerleading skills go..
lol omg, you really do crack me up you know that? You give me all of this crap about how the chapter isn’t that great and how I’m going to be biased and here I am gasping and laughing my ass off, first off let me say before I forget, Alice’s comment to Tina “Do you think I would look like this if I did?” hilarious. And the fucking like a couple of rabbits…priceless. You threw me for a loop though, so Lara’s brother was in love with her? Nice angle, it makes for some incest that I’m hoping I don’t have to read but still nice angle. I would have never thought of it but then again I am not the greatness that is you. Perfect one would say, a vixen in the eyes of some. :) I loved the chapter, and to think some selfish bastard almost kept us from the priviledge of reading it. That person should be ashamed, trying to distract you from your work. You toil over a hot keyboard all day on your day off, she’s just uncaring only looking for instant gratification. But not me…not ClosetDana no no :) Great chapter, I can’t wait till next week….it’s going to be juicy I just know it.
the drama continues to unfold, i dig it. sara isn’t half bad which is a total relief. i’m truly enjoying how sinister lara is. it plays well with her wholesome looks. i can’t wait to read what comes next.
Really love the in-depth angle we’re getting on all the characters… When Alice confessed to Dana I wasn’t sure how the story was going to go on, but even though Danish has a broken heart I’m still enjoying reading because we’re getting to understand the decisions and consequences of each character’s actions and it’s really great! Looking forward to the twists in the next couple chapters, can’t wait to read more! :)
god I love this story and I can’t wait to see wha will happen next pleas post soon great update
Nice to have some background on Lara, but I’m so frustrated…I still don’t have the answers to my questions (*pouts like a small child who didn’t get an ice cream*)! :P I was jumping for joy when I read Sara wouldn’t be jumping Dana’s bones. :D Luckily Sara had a calming effect on Dana. Now it’s all up to Kirsten to talk some sense into her. Alice deserves a second chance. Go Kirsten! :) So, Sara has pyscho twins in her family. Something tells me that Dana is going to run into him (again) and maybe even Lara…. (*humming the theme from Psycho right now*) I think Alice could use some professional help, she has had a lot to deal with (some of it was really disturbing!). Hopefully it can help her to deal with it and live her normal daily life again. I don’t think that they’re both ready to have a talk yet. As much as I love them be together (as) soon (as possible), Dana still needs to deal with the anger and pain that is still left inside of her. I’ll be buckling up tight for the next chapter ’cause its going the one bumpy ride…and I don’t even like being in a rollercoasters…but I’ll be waiting for the next chapter. :)
Here it goes: I thought it was great. Lara’s brother is a freaky one, I’ll bet good money that he or even Lara are bound to resurface at some point, probably when things are just about to seem like they are getting better. Dana and Alice apart is a heart breaker, it’s really so sad to see. I hope there is some way to bring them back together, some way that makes me go AWWW the same way you do. It’ll happen, I know it will, because I know you and you are a sucker for happy endings just like me, even if you’d never admit it. I seem to hate Lara more and more, you know I always did, even way back when in the first 10 chapters. This was a really great update and I’ll be waiting patiently for the next, no matter when it is. I think we both understand what its like to go through those dry spells. Hopefully we’ll both get something going. I’m sorry that bad moods make things tense, but stressing is not something you need to do. Just know that I’m still the same and happy about you. Love you.