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Masked Feelings CH 47 A Night at Lara’s Sister’s house
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Dana – Really?
Sara – Yeah… and she got hurt.
Dana – The teacher? What happened?
Sara – I still don’t know to this day. I have a feeling that Lara really liked her and that the teacher didn’t share the same feelings for her. I know both Lara and David were involved with that one.
Dana – Wow… how did they manage to stay out of juvenile detention?
Sara – Our dad is a lawyer and he pulled some strings.
Dana – Well that’s convenient…. but I’m guessing they didn’t learn anything.
Sara – Well you know that first hand.. look at what she did to come between you and Alice.
Dana groans.
Sara – Which brings me to my question… why don’t you want to go home?
Dana – Alice is the reason and there is no one else to blame but her.
Sara – I can hear the hurt in your voice. What happened… if you don’t mind me asking?
Dana – She cheated on me.
Sara – Wow… I didn’t see that one coming. I thought you two were so close. I know Lara was jealous of what you two had.
Dana – She talked to you about us?
Sara – Even Lara had her weak moments. I could tell she was feeling a little helpless because what you and Alice had was untouchable.
Dana – She said that?
Sara – She didn’t have to… anyone who can see you two together knows that there is something really special there. And after all that you two have been through, only confirms the fact. Lara couldn’t keep you apart and unfortunately she died trying. I know that I have no idea what happened to make Alice cheat on you but I hope you really think about what matters. Will anyone make an impression on your heart like Alice does?
Dana – I have no heart left, Alice ripped it out of my chest and threw it away… just like the garbage. If she can hurt me this bad, I don’t need to feel… I’d rather be numb.
Sara – Dana… I know she has to love you. Lara screwed up royally, yet you seemed to find a way to forgive her or at least make peace with the things she’s done.
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I’m glad that we learned a little more about Lara, and that Sara didn’t hook up with Dana. She needs a friend right now.
Hey, nice chapter – all the drama is sure going full steam ahead… but it would be really, really good if Al & Dana could get back together soonish. Real good!
YAY :hugs Br: this was such a great chap ty so much. well consider me your cheerleader so there will be no giving up! but i know you wouldnt since what u got going here is way to awesome to give up. I must admit roxy is at the bottom of the list BUT its coool to see and try to understand about Roxy also why she has such a powerful wave over Alice! what a way to end! im on the edge of my seat here will Kristin say the magic words and bring dana home to Alice? i hope sooooo :) :waves poms poms: Brteyes brteyes she’s our gal! lol thats as far as my cheerleading skills go..
lol omg, you really do crack me up you know that? You give me all of this crap about how the chapter isn’t that great and how I’m going to be biased and here I am gasping and laughing my ass off, first off let me say before I forget, Alice’s comment to Tina “Do you think I would look like this if I did?” hilarious. And the fucking like a couple of rabbits…priceless. You threw me for a loop though, so Lara’s brother was in love with her? Nice angle, it makes for some incest that I’m hoping I don’t have to read but still nice angle. I would have never thought of it but then again I am not the greatness that is you. Perfect one would say, a vixen in the eyes of some. :) I loved the chapter, and to think some selfish bastard almost kept us from the priviledge of reading it. That person should be ashamed, trying to distract you from your work. You toil over a hot keyboard all day on your day off, she’s just uncaring only looking for instant gratification. But not me…not ClosetDana no no :) Great chapter, I can’t wait till next week….it’s going to be juicy I just know it.
the drama continues to unfold, i dig it. sara isn’t half bad which is a total relief. i’m truly enjoying how sinister lara is. it plays well with her wholesome looks. i can’t wait to read what comes next.
Really love the in-depth angle we’re getting on all the characters… When Alice confessed to Dana I wasn’t sure how the story was going to go on, but even though Danish has a broken heart I’m still enjoying reading because we’re getting to understand the decisions and consequences of each character’s actions and it’s really great! Looking forward to the twists in the next couple chapters, can’t wait to read more! :)
god I love this story and I can’t wait to see wha will happen next pleas post soon great update
Nice to have some background on Lara, but I’m so frustrated…I still don’t have the answers to my questions (*pouts like a small child who didn’t get an ice cream*)! :P I was jumping for joy when I read Sara wouldn’t be jumping Dana’s bones. :D Luckily Sara had a calming effect on Dana. Now it’s all up to Kirsten to talk some sense into her. Alice deserves a second chance. Go Kirsten! :) So, Sara has pyscho twins in her family. Something tells me that Dana is going to run into him (again) and maybe even Lara…. (*humming the theme from Psycho right now*) I think Alice could use some professional help, she has had a lot to deal with (some of it was really disturbing!). Hopefully it can help her to deal with it and live her normal daily life again. I don’t think that they’re both ready to have a talk yet. As much as I love them be together (as) soon (as possible), Dana still needs to deal with the anger and pain that is still left inside of her. I’ll be buckling up tight for the next chapter ’cause its going the one bumpy ride…and I don’t even like being in a rollercoasters…but I’ll be waiting for the next chapter. :)
Here it goes: I thought it was great. Lara’s brother is a freaky one, I’ll bet good money that he or even Lara are bound to resurface at some point, probably when things are just about to seem like they are getting better. Dana and Alice apart is a heart breaker, it’s really so sad to see. I hope there is some way to bring them back together, some way that makes me go AWWW the same way you do. It’ll happen, I know it will, because I know you and you are a sucker for happy endings just like me, even if you’d never admit it. I seem to hate Lara more and more, you know I always did, even way back when in the first 10 chapters. This was a really great update and I’ll be waiting patiently for the next, no matter when it is. I think we both understand what its like to go through those dry spells. Hopefully we’ll both get something going. I’m sorry that bad moods make things tense, but stressing is not something you need to do. Just know that I’m still the same and happy about you. Love you.