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Masked Feelings CH 40 Three is One too Many
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Kristin – Whats not true?
Dana – Alice didn’t say one way or the other…
Kristin – What did she do, answer your question with a question?
Dana – Yeah, come to think of it. Alice says she’s committed to me and not to doubt how she feels.
Kristin – Do you think something is going on between the two?
Dana – I really don’t see Alice cheating on me. She went through so much just for us to be together.
Kristin – I hope she’s being straight with you.
Dana – I know Alice… it’s Roxy I don’t know or trust.
Kristin – Like I said before, I will keep my eye on Roxy, but I think you better find out whats going on with Alice. If she’s dodging your questions, it usually means someone’s hiding something.
Dana – I wish I could get Alice to talk to me. We had this big fight and now she’s giving me the silent treatment.
Kristin – Is this from last night?
Dana – Yeah.
Kristin – I’m sure by the time she gets home, she’ll feel like talking to you. Whatever it is, I’m sure it will straighten itself out.
Dana had her doubts about that. This was a difference of opinion, neither of them wanting to concede…testing their boundarys. She did want to try to explain to Alice her reason for keeping the clock. Hopefully, Alice was in the mood to listen. Dana knew that there was more going on with Alice. They seemed to be fine when it was only the two of them…. alone. There were too many negative forces working against them. Something was causing Alice to detach from the new bond they were forming and until she could speak to her about it…. the distance would expand further.
Alice was trying to work, but her heart wasn’t in it. She still had the picture of Dana in her head. The one where she is asleep on the bed, looking haggard… the area around her eyes red and puffy. She’d been crying. It was probably because she didn’t want to talk to her.
Roxy couldn’t stand the distance any longer and walked over to her desk and sat down.
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Great Update! Roxy was right about them stopping because of her hesitation. How long can Alice hold her off?
So yes, as you said, this chapter had allot of drama and crap in it but I appreciate the bit of hope you give us in the last paragraph. I know that once the truth comes out Dana will be upset with Alice but in the end they’ll be together. I just hate that Roxy keeps toying with Alice- especially when she’s vulnerable. I’m glad Alice is determined to show Dana how much she means to her but Alice needs to tell Dana the truth soon. You have me curious as to what the hell’s up with Lara’s body (or missing body as the case may be)…I’m still waiting for Dana to get better and for the scorching hot sex to be had ;) Great job as usual and thanks for the comment! Can’t wait till the update…
Wow I grovel at your feet, this will be the third time I’ve read this chapter and I can’t not love it. I tried and failed miserably, Alice needs to get her ass in gear and tell Dana, things are only going to get worse and when the shit hits the fan, they better have a good cleaning lady. I loved the shopping scene, and all the bickering, man Alice you have it hard you’ve got Dana Tony Gina and Roxy all dying to be with you the stress must be otherwordly. Meanwhile I can’t get a glance but that’s ok…whatever. Anyway great chapter again (but you don’t need me to tell you that for you to know it’s amazing). Update soon (but I’ll keep on you and make sure it happens) :)
Whoa…brteyes…how lucky am I? I get to comment right under one of my other fav. FF writers in one of my other fav fic…ClosetDana **bowing to both** whew! That floor was dirty, but worth it….you guys are great…Cheers!!!
Thank you for your sweet comment. :D You got me worried there… When I didn’t find an update of this story in the last couple of days, I thought you left me! :P As long as you keep writing this wonderful story (I can’t believe it’s the 40th chapter either!), I’ll keep commenting. :D I’m really curious what’s in that clock. Time will tell, I will try to wait patiently… :S A lot of fighting this chapter. The tension (in all of its meaning) is still building up, nice. :)Poor Dana tough (actually poor all of them), I wonder how she will react when she hears the whole truth. Roxy’s plans to win Alice over always seem to backfire on her in the end, don’t they? :D As you probably can guess, Roxy’s plans are working for me, because they get Alice more drawn to Dana. When did Sharon Fairbanks become so nice and supportive? I think it’s sweet that Alice called her out of concern for Dana. And I justed wanted to say that – in my opinion – the doctor can give Dana an OK (on Dana being healed) in the near future. If the doctor doesn’t want to, they can come to me. I mean if that’s the only thing that’s standing in the way of hot Danish love making, I can pretend to have a medical background and give Dana an OK. :P
Here’s my happy ending…The mob starts gunning for Roxy, The FBI kicks her out for misconduct, she now must fend for herself. Shane catches wind of all this Roxy crap and has some of her old street pals rough her up. Soon the mob catches up to Roxy and she is sleepin’ with the fishes. Dana and Alice confess all of their sins and live happily ever after.
there is going to be so much more drama to come from all of this please post soon can’t wait to see what will happen next great update
Drama, drama, drama…I loved every bit of it. Roxy is a piece of work but she doesn’t seem te be getting closer to Alice as she wants. That’s a good thing though. I think that Dana hates Roxy as much as I do. Loved Kirstens part in it and cannot wait to find out what happened to Lara’s body!! And Sharon to the rescue, who knew! Go Sharon, make your daughter see the light. Hope Alice tells Dana the truth about her and Roxy just to get that over with. Brteyes you had me for 13 pages and I’m counting the days for the next update. Thanks your great!