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Masked Feelings CH 38 Roxy…. The Third Wheel
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Dana – I think there is more going on then your admitting. I guess we’ll find out if I’m right.
Roxy – I don’t know what you mean, Dana.
Dana – Treat me like I’m stupid if thats what makes you feel better.
Roxy – I don’t think you’re stupid, Dana. Why do you always have to turn everything into a fight?
Dana – It wouldn’t be that way if you didn’t stick your nose into my business, the way you do.
Roxy – I can’t help but get personally involved. If I didn’t care so much I would stay out of it.
Dana – You could care less about me. The only reason why you’re so interested in me is because of Alice. Don’t pretend that you’re not interested in her. I see the way you look at her.
Roxy – You’re wrong, Dana.
Dana – Lying again…. you’re so good at it.
Roxy – Are you that insecure, Dana?
Dana – Trying to turn this around on me, Roxy? This isn’t about my feelings…. this is about yours. I saw you watching us that day in the hospital, from the little window in the door. I excused your behavior for the first few seconds just because I thought you were curious, but when you kept watching…. well you could say I was pissed off.
Roxy – I’m sorry.
Dana – You should be. I spared Alice the embarrassment by not telling her, but don’t think I won’t. If you give me any reason to think that I can’t trust you…. I will tell her.
Roxy – You’ll do nothing but make the living arrangement unbearable if you do.
Dana – You’re making it unbearable by just being here. You’re the embarrassment. Keep those feelings in check, Roxy or I swear to God I will make you pay.
Alice came walking out of the bathroom in her robe and saw what looked like a stand off.
Alice – Whats going on here?
Dana – We were just talking.
Alice – Uh huh…
Dana puts her arm around her, looking at Roxy as she did it.
Dana – I know you need help getting dressed so lets go.
Dana intended to keep Alice from knowing what Roxy had done, but she meant what she said… she would tell her if Roxy got out of line. It was the only thing she had on her for the time being, but hopefully she would have more. Roxy wasn’t going to stand the the way of her happiness.
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For some reason Alice is the one who is scaring me now. As much as I know she loves Dana, she seems to have a weak spot where Roxy is concerned. Dana is going to blow when she finds out.
Great writing as usual. I just hope that Dana and Alice are strong enough to overcome these obstacles….because there are loads! Check your private messages : )
Wow I must say I like the fact that Alice is vaguely torn between the two. Roxy has got this sleazy quality that’s almost understandable…If I had a round with Alice I can’t say I wouldn’t be hooked. Great name for Roxy’s partner Erika…ahhhh perfect spelling and everything, the fact that we share the same name and spelling shows I was meant to read this story. I squeal in delight when I see each chapter posted keep up the great work!
I’m really glad that Dana had this talk with Roxy… It won’t stop Roxy from trying to seduce Alice (hell, it’s even a bigger challenge for her now). But it’s nice to see that Dana is fighting for Alice (can’t help, I’m a helpless romantic). :D I was wondering, did Roxy say something prophetic when she said ‘If a life is going to be taken, it’s going to be mine’? :) I liked the character of Sara showing up, what does she have for Dana (I’m thinking an organ of a pig or something drenched in blood…as you can see, I’m mentally preparing myself for the next chapter ;) )?! So, next chapter more dinner scenes? It will be a torture for Alice. I hope Alice didn’t have too much alcohol that she will blow their cover. Like I said earlier I’m hooked, no matter how sick, twisted and graphic is going to get…I will keep reading (but for some parts I will cover my eyes and peak trough my fingers to try to find out what words are written on the screen ).
I am still a firm believer in the whole ‘Roxy is Evil and She Must Be Destroyed’ theory! You write a wicked villain, keep it up. So glad Dana stood her ground and faced off with Roxy. Perhaps Dana could start training again and work on her overhead lob, using Roxy’s head as a ball. : ) It’s just a thought.
Isn’t it funny how Roxy used to save the day and now Dana hates her? Who knew the direction her character would take. GREAT last two chapters. I have been keeping up I promise, it’s just I haven’t had time to comment. I love the game between Roxy and Dana, it’s so entertaining. In the end I’m all for Alice and Dana, but it’s really interesting to see this sort of contest for her affection. Roxy’s quite a challenge. Now, what’s this!? A new character…Lara’s sister…hmmm..If I recall, wasn’t Lara’s brother the one who let her into Dana’s hospital room to steal her body? This can only mean one thing, trouble. I hope for the best of course. My oh my, these chapters just get better and better. You’re such an awesome writer, if I haven’t said it enough before. I love you the most too! Right on, biggest fan, right here baby. Even though I suck at letting you know how wonderful you are, always know that’s how I feel. You are amazing. Awesome update, can’t wait to read more as always. Love baby..Until next time
I’am finding it hard to follow this fic.. Alice is some kind of pod person when she’s with Roxy. She’s not the Alice we know and love ! Roxy is just gross and creepy . Poor Dana is really in for some major drama ! I hope she see’s what Alice is really doing, Before she seriously gets hurt. This is not really about Dana/Alice ? There is way too much Roxy. Where’s the gang ? I mean they love Dana too , she just got out of the hospital wouldn’t they want to visit ? Just saying… P.S. I got sucked into this fic for the Dana/Alice love story. People in love don’t treat each other this way… It’s like Alice has no respect for Dana or their relationship ! I hope that all is exposed soon ???
what the hell is in the box and I have a feeling that roxy and kristin both work for tony and I can’twait to see what you have plan please post soon I love it
OMG…what is going on? I cannot believe Roxy, she is getting as bad as Lara. And she had a sis. Oh, wow that one I didn’t see coming. I’m liking the stand up in your face Dana, she’s going to fight for her womyn!! Kristen seems like a mole to me, hmmm, IMO. Espionge is a dirty lit’le game.I hope my girls stay strong 2gether. Thanks for the update, luv it…brteyes. Cheers!!
I feel so honored that you dedicated this story to me. Thank you very much for that. I truly love your writing and I’m always waiting for sunday to come around so I can read the next brainwave you have in store for us. Another great update, loved reading about our girls finally in the same room. They share a true bond. But it’s official: I hate Roxy. Hope Dana kicks her ass when she can, she will be so mad when she finds out. I know Alice loves Dana so I’m confident they will work it out in the end. Please keep me on the edge of my seat…great job brteyes!
I was so excited to see you had posted! The update was GREAT as usual. Roxy better watch herself, Dana’s pretty upset with her and she’d do anything for Alice…I don’t like the fact that Alice is “torn” between Roxy and Dana. I think that her deal with Roxy is mainly on a sexual level. Once Dana is better she (hopefully) will get her feelings in check. Can’t wait to see what Lara left Dana :) Please update soon!!!