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Masked Feelings CH 38 Roxy…. The Third Wheel
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Tony – Don’t push me, Alice. You don’t want to see what I’m capable of.
Alice – Let me go…
Tony – You better let me get to know you or we can do this the hard way. I can get to Dana anytime I want….
They were interrupted… they were informed that it was time for dinner. Tony put his arm around Alice’s waist and led her to the dining room. There was the family. It was like being on display. All of them looked like they were shocked to see her there.
Tony – Alice, I would like you to meet my family. I’m sorry I should have told everyone that I was bringing someone. I’ll explain why Alice is here in a minute.
Alice wasn’t sure what Tony was going to say to them but she knew if she was going to make it through dinner it would require more alcohol.
Dana was sitting on the couch, thinking about Alice.
Kristin – You’re worried about her, aren’t you?
Dana – Yes.
Kristin – I can see how much you love her. How long have you been together?
Dana – We’ve been friends for what seems like forever, but as for being together… it hasn’t been long. I can’t imagine my life without her. We’ve been through so much together.
Kristin – I know… I saw the file.
Dana wanted to see that file. Roxy had to have it in that briefcase.
The doorbell rings…
Kristin – You better let me answer that.
Dana saw it was someone she didn’t recognize. Kristin asked for her name and then some sort of ID. She let her in. The woman looked familiar to her somehow and it would all come clear when she was introduced to her. She had a box in her hand. She extended her hand to get Dana to shake it.
Sara – Hi, I’m sorry we’re just meeting for the very first time and under these circumstances. I’m Sara, Lara’s sister.
Dana – Her sister? I didn’t even know she had a sister.
Dana was clearly shocked.
Sara – I have something for you. I’m sure Lara would want you to have it. It’s a present she planned for you to have a few days ago.
TBC – The next chapter the dinner continues and Dana is left with words and a gift from Lara. What’s going to happen next? I hope to hear your comments…
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For some reason Alice is the one who is scaring me now. As much as I know she loves Dana, she seems to have a weak spot where Roxy is concerned. Dana is going to blow when she finds out.
Great writing as usual. I just hope that Dana and Alice are strong enough to overcome these obstacles….because there are loads! Check your private messages : )
Wow I must say I like the fact that Alice is vaguely torn between the two. Roxy has got this sleazy quality that’s almost understandable…If I had a round with Alice I can’t say I wouldn’t be hooked. Great name for Roxy’s partner Erika…ahhhh perfect spelling and everything, the fact that we share the same name and spelling shows I was meant to read this story. I squeal in delight when I see each chapter posted keep up the great work!
I’m really glad that Dana had this talk with Roxy… It won’t stop Roxy from trying to seduce Alice (hell, it’s even a bigger challenge for her now). But it’s nice to see that Dana is fighting for Alice (can’t help, I’m a helpless romantic). :D I was wondering, did Roxy say something prophetic when she said ‘If a life is going to be taken, it’s going to be mine’? :) I liked the character of Sara showing up, what does she have for Dana (I’m thinking an organ of a pig or something drenched in blood…as you can see, I’m mentally preparing myself for the next chapter ;) )?! So, next chapter more dinner scenes? It will be a torture for Alice. I hope Alice didn’t have too much alcohol that she will blow their cover. Like I said earlier I’m hooked, no matter how sick, twisted and graphic is going to get…I will keep reading (but for some parts I will cover my eyes and peak trough my fingers to try to find out what words are written on the screen ).
I am still a firm believer in the whole ‘Roxy is Evil and She Must Be Destroyed’ theory! You write a wicked villain, keep it up. So glad Dana stood her ground and faced off with Roxy. Perhaps Dana could start training again and work on her overhead lob, using Roxy’s head as a ball. : ) It’s just a thought.
Isn’t it funny how Roxy used to save the day and now Dana hates her? Who knew the direction her character would take. GREAT last two chapters. I have been keeping up I promise, it’s just I haven’t had time to comment. I love the game between Roxy and Dana, it’s so entertaining. In the end I’m all for Alice and Dana, but it’s really interesting to see this sort of contest for her affection. Roxy’s quite a challenge. Now, what’s this!? A new character…Lara’s sister…hmmm..If I recall, wasn’t Lara’s brother the one who let her into Dana’s hospital room to steal her body? This can only mean one thing, trouble. I hope for the best of course. My oh my, these chapters just get better and better. You’re such an awesome writer, if I haven’t said it enough before. I love you the most too! Right on, biggest fan, right here baby. Even though I suck at letting you know how wonderful you are, always know that’s how I feel. You are amazing. Awesome update, can’t wait to read more as always. Love baby..Until next time
I’am finding it hard to follow this fic.. Alice is some kind of pod person when she’s with Roxy. She’s not the Alice we know and love ! Roxy is just gross and creepy . Poor Dana is really in for some major drama ! I hope she see’s what Alice is really doing, Before she seriously gets hurt. This is not really about Dana/Alice ? There is way too much Roxy. Where’s the gang ? I mean they love Dana too , she just got out of the hospital wouldn’t they want to visit ? Just saying… P.S. I got sucked into this fic for the Dana/Alice love story. People in love don’t treat each other this way… It’s like Alice has no respect for Dana or their relationship ! I hope that all is exposed soon ???
what the hell is in the box and I have a feeling that roxy and kristin both work for tony and I can’twait to see what you have plan please post soon I love it
OMG…what is going on? I cannot believe Roxy, she is getting as bad as Lara. And she had a sis. Oh, wow that one I didn’t see coming. I’m liking the stand up in your face Dana, she’s going to fight for her womyn!! Kristen seems like a mole to me, hmmm, IMO. Espionge is a dirty lit’le game.I hope my girls stay strong 2gether. Thanks for the update, luv it…brteyes. Cheers!!
I feel so honored that you dedicated this story to me. Thank you very much for that. I truly love your writing and I’m always waiting for sunday to come around so I can read the next brainwave you have in store for us. Another great update, loved reading about our girls finally in the same room. They share a true bond. But it’s official: I hate Roxy. Hope Dana kicks her ass when she can, she will be so mad when she finds out. I know Alice loves Dana so I’m confident they will work it out in the end. Please keep me on the edge of my seat…great job brteyes!
I was so excited to see you had posted! The update was GREAT as usual. Roxy better watch herself, Dana’s pretty upset with her and she’d do anything for Alice…I don’t like the fact that Alice is “torn” between Roxy and Dana. I think that her deal with Roxy is mainly on a sexual level. Once Dana is better she (hopefully) will get her feelings in check. Can’t wait to see what Lara left Dana :) Please update soon!!!