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Masked Feelings CH 30 Til Death Do Us Part
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The drive home for Shane seemed eternal. She grabbed the bat off the porch as she left. Her reasoning? She was going to bash Lara’s skull in if she saw her. Her thoughts went back to Dana. Shane had no grasp of the feelings Alice had for Dana, till today. Alice was such a mess, yet she showed so much strength. She pulled herself together and did what she needed to do to save Dana. Shane knew that she would’ve never been able to do what Alice did. She hoped that Alice would have the chance to tell Dana that she loved her.
Shane knew the helicopter was flying home but she had no idea which hospital. Getting on her cell phone, she called Bette.
Bette – Hello?
Shane – Hi, it’s me.
Bette – Shane? Tina! Shane’s on the phone… So what happened? Is everyone ok?
Shane – No…. everyone isn’t ok. Alice is beat up pretty bad, but she’ll be alright. It’s Dana….
Bette – What? Say something… you’re scaring me.
Shane – She got stabbed.
Bette – Oh my God! How bad is it?
Shane – She stopped breathing. Alice and I had to give her CPR until the paramedics showed up. I have no idea how she is right now. They are flying Alice and her to one of the hospitals at home. Can you do me a favor and find out which one she’s going to?
Bette – Yeah…. don’t worry about it. We’ll be there.
Shane – Call me back, so I know which hospital. Better call her parents… so they can be there.
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When at last they landed on the hospital heli-pad, they were met by the hospital crew. Dana and Alice would be separated once again. Dana was being rushed into the building, while Alice walked in under her own accord. When to the door, however…they made her sit in a wheelchair.
Alice – I can walk on my own.
Nurse – Sorry, it’s hospital policy.
Alice – My friend, Dana…. where are they taking her?
Nurse – She’s being wheeled into one of the OR’s for surgery. I’m sorry I can’t tell you anything else at this point.
Alice – How long do you think she’ll be in for?
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OH MY GOD! Lara is such a sick f*ck! That’s some imagination you have there. I loved how Roxy has impeccable timing- showing up at the perfect time. Ok now please let Dana get to the hospital and at least get somewhat better before you decide to try and kill her again!;) I have to say that I’m do for some good old Danish lovin’ though…Update soon!
i can’t believe Lara could be so twisted. it’s hard for me to imagine her like that on my own but the way you’ve written her character makes it so damn easy. loved this great update. post soon. Ü
Well I’m still here :D woa Lara was (“was” haha :P ) special, well now I wanna see how they are gonna heal for all this situations. Thanks.
Whoa!! Lara is one phucking, sick little shyt. Thank God for Roxy tho, she seems to be one step ahead of the important stuff. And Lara’s brother is a sicko too. Hope you post soon, this just keeps getting more interesting.
Omg Lara is such a crazy dirty whore!! I hate her so much. The torture has become unbearable you leave me at the edge of my seat palms sweaty wondering what on earth is going to happen next!! I need more and i need it now you naughty little vixen you had better come and get me out of this tortous misery you have put me in. I am begging you on my hands and knees pleaseeeeeee…..
holy shit!! WTF!! damn!! lara is…that was sick!! thank you for bringing roxy back. yay, for the marriage being a scam. ooh one more thing: “ding dong the witch is dead. which ol’ witch? the wicked witch!”
you almost rendered me speechless. lara’s last desperate move………
Whooaaa, grafic indeed! Ewww, what a psycho Lara is. But Roxy rocks my world =) And no more evil, yay! Looking foward to the recovery… great chapter, thank you!
i’m glad that u have enjoyed writing this series as much as i’ve enjoyed reading it. YOU are amazing, not me sweetie. all4willow you can blame me for your torturous misery. brteyes did dedicate the cliffhangers for me, but it’s over now. unless, somehow lara is still alive or david avenges her death…i hope not.
Haha yeah talk about stirring emotions brteyes! my god… Slightly violent I guess but well written… more danish soon tho :P
Ok, Lara is really psycho!!! Thanks for the warning that it got graphic. I read the whole story….because I was too curious what was going to happen. Thank you for letting Roxy show up at the right moment! I always thought that she would shoot Lara. After this chapter, I’ m ready for the cleaning up part….and some Danish loving (please!). :D
that was b*tch I hope she doesnt wake up from those gun shots….anyways I cant wait for the clean up it is going to be good to read….something fresh for the eyes.
Lara is a F##king sicko. Alice just didnt hit her hard enough. Lets get this mess clean wwwwup so Aliace and Dana can live happily for ever thanks
Awww man, this was so sick! I loved it!! Okay, I have issues…( : You left me so hanging here…please, please post soon. I’m like Billie Blakley and the drugs…I need more, more, more…oh, sorry. Peace! ( ;
that was great no wait what am i saying that was brilliant and I can’t wait to see how you will clean this mess up I just hope that all goes well for alice and dana please post soon I love it so much as for lara she is a f*cking bi*ch just hope that she is now dead for good but with roxy shooting her I have a feeling that she is can’t wait
Here’s a little secret. I sorta like it when you leave me hangin’ – but don’t tell anyone! lol
I usually don’t comment that much, but this story is so amazing I couldn’t resist. Lara is a flippin’ maniac. I hope she gets what she has coming! Also looking forward to some happy Danish, we need it so! THANKS…