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Masked Feelings CH 28 Revelations
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Dana sat through and watched Lara doing all these unthinkable acts at Alice. She cried all the way through, feeling all her pain and humiliation. She wished it was her… Alice didn’t deserve this. When she burned her, Dana flinched. “You fucking bitch! Dana would only get further enraged when Lara fucked her…. then she went down on her. Dana felt the bile rise to her mouth, only to swallow it back down. Just because Alice didn’t respond to her touch…. Lara burned her again, between her legs this time. Dana was out of her mind and full of hate. The last part was the threats to stay away from her.
This was too much for one person to take in all at once. Her first concern was for Alice. Where was she? She went down to the laundry room to see if she was there. No Alice. Going up to her apartment again, she saw her neighbor Patty in the hallway.
Dana – Have you seen Alice?
Patty – Yeah, you missed her. She left in a cab about a half hour ago.
Dana – Did you talk to her? Did she say where she was going?
Patty – Sorry…. I just happened to see her leave.
Dana – Thanks.
Dana tried to call Alice on her cell but got sent straight to the voice mail. “Damn it…. where did you go?”
She grabbed Alice’s extra set of car keys and headed out the door. Nothing was wrong with her car, it started right up. “Why would you take a cab when your car runs just fine?” Since she couldn’t find Alice, Dana decided that she’d go home. That made her thoughts shift back to Lara.
” Just wait til I get home. You’ll suffer at my hands now…. you bitch! I’m going to kill you for what you did to Alice. You will never hurt her again. I don’t care what happens to me anymore, I don’t care if I rot in jail for the rest of my life. Even if Alice does forgive me, I’ll never be able to forgive myself. We’ll never be together now, because of you.”
Dana got home only to be disappointed again. Lara’s car wasn’t there. Going inside, she picks up the a picture of Lara and her off the mantle and smashes it. Dana picks up a few more things and throws them against the wall. Dana couldn’t get herself to calm down, she paces around the house waiting for Lara to get home. She picks up the mail off the table, looking through it to distract herself. Setting it down, she saw a note. “Damn it!” Alice had tried to forge her handwriting. She told Lara to meet her at the cabin and gave her directions to it. Alice was trying to set a trap for Lara. ” No, Alice…. don’t do it. She’s not worth it.”
Where was Roxy when you needed her? She had no way of Getting a hold of her. Dana grabbed a baseball bat out of her closet and headed to the garage. Her car was gone, of course. Alice too it… she couldn’t drive her own car to the cabin. Dana runs out to Alice’s car and races down the street.
” Damn it, Alice….. I know you think this is your fight but its not. This is about me…. Lara’s sick obsession with me. You should have trusted me…. told me what happened. I would’ve believed you. I would’ve dealt with her myself. Now you’re in danger…. she’ll try to kill you this time. If anything happens to you, I’ll never forgive myself…. never.”
TBC – Well I hope you liked what I wrote so far…. there is more drama to come. This is such a long part… I’m not sure how many chapters for this cliffhanger. Tell me what you think.
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omg i want to read it again and again!! i love it!! Die Lara you skeezy whore die!!I want Dana and Roxy to beat the shit out of lara with a baseball bat. I love this story so much you never cease to amaze me please update soon and lets kill the wicked whore!!
I hope Dana gets there in time to help Alice beat the crap out of Lara. Man is she twisted. Remind me not to get on your bad side! lol
HOLY SHIT!! THAT WAS AWESOME! OMG, THIS WAS TOTALLY WORTH THE WAIT. HAVE I TOLD U I LOVE U? ALICE TORTURING GINA…DANA WATCHING THE TAPE…ALICE LURING LARA TO THE CABIN…OHHHH MAN! I CAN’T STOP SHOUTING. I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOO MUCH!
btw, THANK U THANK U THANK U THANK U THANK U THANK U!!!
We still got Lara and Gina to think about. Go get your woman Dana. Beat the crap out of both Lara and Gina/ thanks
Yes, Alice finally has the tape! :D I’m glad to see that Dana also got to watch the tape. Hopefully she will be in the cabin on time…together with Roxy. Gina has been conquered (she has, hasn’t she…at least I hope?), only Lara has to be defeated!! I’m afraid she won’t give up a fight that easily tough. :S One down and still one to go. Post soon!!!
People are so right…this is like a movie playing out in my head. It’s amazing!! What’s going to happen! I’m goin insane! Baby, you are truly amazing. Kill Lara man, just cut her ass! Oh wow, the way Alice took charge of Gina, that was awesome! She totally took me by surprize! I’m wondering where Gina is though, prolly still tied to that bed. Lol that was fantastic. And even the way Lara taunted Gina, that was cool. It’s all starting to come together! I’m so excited. Who knew when I started reading this story I’d get so excited and attached. Now bring us to that happy ending girl! I think we deserve it after all the angst! Look at all your fans, we love you. What a great chapter babe. It was certainly worth the wait. Also, where oh where is Roxy? Something tells me she might be able to help Dana out. I hope you’ve worked it all out in that brilliant mind of yours. Don’t keep us waiting too much longer darling. You rock my world!!! I totally feel proud to be named your biggest fan. Until next time lovely…
Oh boy, woman you outdid yourself. This is great, so much thriller! Dana finally knows! Bring on Roxy and the revenge, and then a lot of Danish loving =)
WOW i had to leave another comment just because this post was so totaly amazing!! I even started from the beginning to read it all over again up to this point and i am at the edge of my seat wanting that whore Lara to die in this story and on the show. DANISH FOREVER!!! please post soon dont make me beg……actually you may like me begging.
Haha well done, very entertaining chapter. I have to say, not too sure about Alice’s career as a psychotic-revenging torturer but I like the other two getting their just desserts… but maybe an NC-17 Danish reunion?
wow! intense man! it was quiet w/ the danish writers for a while, and the updates are here! this was awesome, and i’m up past midnight (rarity) reading this. i’m not sure if i even blinked, i was so into it. lol
OMG!!! That was soooo….goood!!! I read it twice, it was so worth the wait!! I loved it, I miss that love they have for each other on S3, it’s still there between them, but they’re playing w/us. I think if there’s no Danish down the road and there’s a S4 I will so stop watching. Just like the O.C. it’s so depressing. I hope that Alice realizes that Dana does still love her, it’s destiny…AWESOME, Dude!!! PEACE!!
Oh My GOD!!! I’m going CRAAAAZY!!! Amazing chapter, when Dana was watching the tape I wanted to tag-team with Dana to beat the ever living shit out of Lara! And I can’t believe Alice is trying to trap Lara at the cabin…I can’t wait to see what Dana does when she gets there! I have a feeling Roxy will make an appearance and help Dana out with the Lara situation. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Please update soon! STOP THE TORTURE!
this is great…its like a movie and its playing in my head….great writing and I cant wait to see what happens next….i hope dana makes it in time to make sure alice doesnt get hurt…anyways ill be waiting on the next chapter…laters
oh my god that was just great and I just can’t wait for the next part please post soon so I can see what will happens to them I love it