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Masked Feelings CH 28 Revelations
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Dana drove home. Lara was sitting in the passenger seat still picking spaghetti noodles out of her hair.
Dana – Hey, make sure all those noodles go out that window. (laughing)
Lara – Very funny, Dana.
Lara was clearly not in the mood for Dana’s goofiness, but Dana went on…
Dana – Kinda backfired on you, didn’t it?
Lara – What?
Dana – I saw what you did…. I’m not blind, you know.
Lara – It was an accident.
Dana – That was no accident. Who were you aiming for? Gina, Alice, or maybe the both of them?
Lara – Both…. They ruined our night by making it about them!
Dana – Calm down. It’s no big deal.
Lara – No big deal, Huh? I didn’t see you smiling when Gina made her big announcement.
Dana – What can I say, Gina’s a bitch and I can’t stand her.
Lara – I could careless what she is or isn’t. Thats not what this is about. You’re mad about the engagement. Once again, it’s all about Alice.
Dana – For crying out loud, not this again. You’re the one that makes it about Alice. Are you jealous of her?
Lara – Why should I be jealous of Alice?
Dana – I don’t know. You don’t have any reason to be.
Lara – Lets just get home. I need a shower.
Dana laughing again.
Dana – It was worth it to see Gina covered in that gooey mess. I bet she needs hosed off first. You could say she got her just desserts….. get it….. just desserts.
Lara rolls her eyes at Dana’s lame attempt of a joke.
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Gina, immediately took a shower when she walked in the door. Alice didn’t know who deserved it more, Lara or Gina…. but she smiled at their humiliation. Lara face first in to a plate of spaghetti and Gina covered in dessert. If it was Dana covered in dessert…. now that would be yummy.
Alice was hoping that Dana understood the note. It wasn’t like they could talk about it….. Alice couldn’t if she wanted to. She had gone this far and there was simply no turning back. She saw Dana’s pleading eyes, trying to get her to explain. Speaking of Dana, there she was again…. trying to reach her on her cell phone. Alice actually was expecting her to call. Given the way she left things at the restaurant, Dana would be all wound up.
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omg i want to read it again and again!! i love it!! Die Lara you skeezy whore die!!I want Dana and Roxy to beat the shit out of lara with a baseball bat. I love this story so much you never cease to amaze me please update soon and lets kill the wicked whore!!
I hope Dana gets there in time to help Alice beat the crap out of Lara. Man is she twisted. Remind me not to get on your bad side! lol
HOLY SHIT!! THAT WAS AWESOME! OMG, THIS WAS TOTALLY WORTH THE WAIT. HAVE I TOLD U I LOVE U? ALICE TORTURING GINA…DANA WATCHING THE TAPE…ALICE LURING LARA TO THE CABIN…OHHHH MAN! I CAN’T STOP SHOUTING. I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOO MUCH!
btw, THANK U THANK U THANK U THANK U THANK U THANK U!!!
We still got Lara and Gina to think about. Go get your woman Dana. Beat the crap out of both Lara and Gina/ thanks
Yes, Alice finally has the tape! :D I’m glad to see that Dana also got to watch the tape. Hopefully she will be in the cabin on time…together with Roxy. Gina has been conquered (she has, hasn’t she…at least I hope?), only Lara has to be defeated!! I’m afraid she won’t give up a fight that easily tough. :S One down and still one to go. Post soon!!!
People are so right…this is like a movie playing out in my head. It’s amazing!! What’s going to happen! I’m goin insane! Baby, you are truly amazing. Kill Lara man, just cut her ass! Oh wow, the way Alice took charge of Gina, that was awesome! She totally took me by surprize! I’m wondering where Gina is though, prolly still tied to that bed. Lol that was fantastic. And even the way Lara taunted Gina, that was cool. It’s all starting to come together! I’m so excited. Who knew when I started reading this story I’d get so excited and attached. Now bring us to that happy ending girl! I think we deserve it after all the angst! Look at all your fans, we love you. What a great chapter babe. It was certainly worth the wait. Also, where oh where is Roxy? Something tells me she might be able to help Dana out. I hope you’ve worked it all out in that brilliant mind of yours. Don’t keep us waiting too much longer darling. You rock my world!!! I totally feel proud to be named your biggest fan. Until next time lovely…
Oh boy, woman you outdid yourself. This is great, so much thriller! Dana finally knows! Bring on Roxy and the revenge, and then a lot of Danish loving =)
WOW i had to leave another comment just because this post was so totaly amazing!! I even started from the beginning to read it all over again up to this point and i am at the edge of my seat wanting that whore Lara to die in this story and on the show. DANISH FOREVER!!! please post soon dont make me beg……actually you may like me begging.
Haha well done, very entertaining chapter. I have to say, not too sure about Alice’s career as a psychotic-revenging torturer but I like the other two getting their just desserts… but maybe an NC-17 Danish reunion?
wow! intense man! it was quiet w/ the danish writers for a while, and the updates are here! this was awesome, and i’m up past midnight (rarity) reading this. i’m not sure if i even blinked, i was so into it. lol
OMG!!! That was soooo….goood!!! I read it twice, it was so worth the wait!! I loved it, I miss that love they have for each other on S3, it’s still there between them, but they’re playing w/us. I think if there’s no Danish down the road and there’s a S4 I will so stop watching. Just like the O.C. it’s so depressing. I hope that Alice realizes that Dana does still love her, it’s destiny…AWESOME, Dude!!! PEACE!!
Oh My GOD!!! I’m going CRAAAAZY!!! Amazing chapter, when Dana was watching the tape I wanted to tag-team with Dana to beat the ever living shit out of Lara! And I can’t believe Alice is trying to trap Lara at the cabin…I can’t wait to see what Dana does when she gets there! I have a feeling Roxy will make an appearance and help Dana out with the Lara situation. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Please update soon! STOP THE TORTURE!
this is great…its like a movie and its playing in my head….great writing and I cant wait to see what happens next….i hope dana makes it in time to make sure alice doesnt get hurt…anyways ill be waiting on the next chapter…laters
oh my god that was just great and I just can’t wait for the next part please post soon so I can see what will happens to them I love it