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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 14
Dana, close your mouth already, said Alice, youre starting to look catatonic.
Yeah, Dane, you still with us? Shane asked.
Oh, my godthis is unbelievable. Im quitting tennis. Why should I spend all these hours training when I could write a book about this and make money – Dana said.
Hey, Hey, Im the ***** writer here! Alice shouted at her. Keep your ***** butt on the tennis court.
So did Peggy Peabody come over to Tinas? asked Jenny.
Yes, she did, but not before I had to gag and tie Helena to the dresser.
Holy *****! Bette, HOLY *****! You didnt! Alices eyes were bugging out of her head.
Yes, I did, Al, but dont worry, I used Giorgio Maraldi scarves. Bette laughed, You know, let the ***** be bound in a little style – not that she deserved any kind of style.
Bette felt she had to introduce a little levity into the story. It was just too tense, for herself and Tina and for their family. Except for Alice, who was leaning in across the table with that What next! What next! look on her face, the girls were pretty much transfixed and mute.
Baby, Ive got to use the ladies room. Be right back.
She called her baby Alice thought. Umm…me thinks theres a couple more chapters to this story.
You okay, T? Bette asked.
Yep, just have to pee really badly. Why dont you order some food, too. Im getting a bit hungry, Tina said and patted her stomach, and your daughter is, too.
Oh, my god, Oh my god! The baby!! Tell us about the baby! they were all shouting in unision.
The sonogram picturewhere is it? Bette completely forgot about it when she saw Alice charging at her –
Just as the thought was passing through her mind, someone tapped her on the shoulder. I think this belongs to you. It was on the floor against the wall. I was just leaving and saw it there. It must have flown out of your hand when that person the unknown woman looked over at Alice (Alice just shrugged her shoulders), attacked you and knocked you down. The woman handed the envelope containing the sonogram picture to Bette.
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(30 votes, average: 4.17 out of 5)
I LOVE THIS STORY!!
I get all giddy everytime I see a new chapter of this story.
“creepfuckass Hellacious Peabody.”–fuckin classic!I KNOW quite a couple of people that would do a major cheer for that expression!*LOL*
I had to go and look up fissure in the online dictionary..:”and the fissure’s sides came together and the separation of two became one, once again. “….lovely line.
This story just keeps bein an excellent VERY entertaining and witty piece of writing….with style!! NICE! :-)
Hahaha Oh, Alice. That was the perfect ending to a great chapter, arc! Thanks. :)
ALICE IS TO MUCH SOMETIMES…LOVE THIS CHAPTER…EXCITED TO READ WHAT PEGGY SAYS…PLEASE POST SOON
i loved it! i want more, please you gotta give me more!
leave it to alice to bring up the righty lefty thing…gotta love her…great story…please we need more
I’m doing the Happy Dance along with Dana and Alice :-) Excellent writing…
Megga- I LOVE this story! Haha, I’m so glad they are back together! Damn, the second season would have been soooo much better if things happened this way! Please post again soon!
Gotta love Alice. Thanks for another great chapter!
definitely need more of this wonderful story..thank you.
Oh Alice, you of all people should know Bette well enough to know a little thing like a cast is only going to slow her down but she easily adapts and can overcome anything to be with her T.
I just love this story, can’t wait for more fun and games, post real soon please.
K
That was just perfect. Love it! I just love Alice in this too, she is too funny.