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Life with Teenagers chapter 4
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Carman: (laughing at Jays comment) “Dude you cant be strong all the time…your sister is really ill your obviously going to be upset”
Jay: ” She told me what happend you know”
Carman: “Oh yeah do you wanna tell me”
Jay: “I can’t I promised her”(wipeing more tears away)
Carman: “You know Jay if your sister is at risk you need to let someone know for her sake”
Jay: ” She would hate me Carman and incase you havn’t noticed im surrounded with famales so im out voted”
Carman: “Hey whats that suppose to mean” (playfully punching him)
Jay: “Well If I upset chloe all the females turn on me and that aint pretty”(smileing)
Carman: “Dude this is totally different this is you as chloe’s older brother protecting her”
Jay: “Yeah ok”
Carman: ” So you going to tell me whats going on then” (looking at him)
Jay: ” Well at school She’s been getting some crap off this gang and after school the other day they attacked her for no reason and that’s all I know.”
Carman: “OK do you know who the people who attacked her are”
Jay: ” No I havn’t a clue i didn’t even know she was getting bullied”
Carman: “Sweetheart we need to let your mums know whats going on”(looking seriously at Jay)
Jay: “Carman they are gonna freak…I cant tell them and I doubt Chloe will”
Carman: “Yeah they probably will freak but they will sort it….How about I tell them”
Jay: ” I dont know Carman Chloe will so kill me”
Carman: “Yeah but you have to do this for her sake… think off the positives instead of the negatives”
Jay: “Yeah ok”
Carman: “Right cummon lets go your Mums need to see your ok” (helping Jay up)
Jay: ” I suppose (Wiping his face and picking up his skateboard and helmet)
Chloe’s Room
(Chloe’s Starting to come round)
Tina: “Hey sweetie”(smiling down chloe)
Bette:”How you feeling?”
Chloe: “Like Ive been hit with a bus…(looking around the room) Where’s Jay”
Bette: “He”(cut off)
Jay: “Here I am” (walking in the room Carman right behind him)
Jay: (walking over to the other side off Chloe’s bed) “You gave me another fright. Two in two days is so not healthy”
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somebody must go to the school and have a really really serius talk with this crapy gang. i like the idea of a holidays. post soon
This is an incredible storyline. I think that the grammar could improve. I assume that English is not your native tongue, I think you are doing a great job storyline wise. The poor grammar makes this family seem more on the “white trash” side. Having said that, I do like the story and its idea. Please don’t be offended by my comment. That is really the only ideals I can share with you.
wicked,i loved that.some more sooner please
just one quick comment..carman = carmEn
opps didnt notice the carmen part sorry.
Bette gonna kick some ass that hit her daughter!
Love Bette’s outburst. Love how you are having the parents deal with the family dynamics.
i think shane and carman should pay a visit to the school… and show those bullies a thing or two… hmmmmmmmmmm… but don’t let them get caught… not on school grounds…
Great update and of course Bette would flip out – she wouldn’t be Bette if she didn’t LOL…..looking forward too the holiday…
“OH IM NOT GOING TO CAUSE A SCENE IM GOING TO CAUSE A FLIPPING BROADWAY MUSICAL!!!”loved this line!! lol. just caught up with your story and I’m lovin it.
hmmmmmmm. very interesting, i like, i like a lot. a great start to a great story! i also honestly think that Bette should march down to chloe’s school and smack the heads of the girls that bet chloe up, know that would be a great scene! anyway looking forward to next post, plz continue!
I so agree with Aria I love this line OH IM NOT GOING TO CAUSE A SCENE IM GOING TO CAUSE A FLIPPING BROADWAY MUSICAL!!!”I burst out luaghing its great