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Life with Teenagers chapter 4
Chapter 4
(Bette and Tina Came running up the corridor to where Jay was, Jay was still Crying Tina and Bette both instantly put their arms around there son waiting to hear news.)
Jay: “we were just talking and then she….this happend” (Crying)
(Bette and Tina remained silent and just held their son tighter. Doctor approches them.)
Doctor: “Chloe is stable…But I warn you She can arrest just as quick with any shouting…Please be calm and quite around her”
Jay: “This is my fault I nearly Killed my sister”(shocked remembering himself pushing chloe for answers)
Tina: ” Jay this isnt your fault (looking straight into her sons eyes)
Jay: ” Mum you were not here so how would you know” (release’s himself from his Mums grip grabing his skateboard and Running towards the exit)
Bette:”Jay!!!” (running after him)
(Outside Carman is just approching the entrance, Jay jumps on his skateboard dodgeing Carmans atempt to catch him, Bette also trys to catch him but fails)
Carman: “Bette Whats going on (clueless to whats happening)
Bette: “Chloe arrested and Jays blaims himself”
Carman: (Pulling Bette into a hug) “Look I’ll go find him you go be with your wife and daughter they need you”
Bette: “But…” (cut off by Carman)
Carman: “No Buts Bette GO!!!”
(Bette runs back into the hospital and Carman runs towards her car hoping to catch Jay)
Chloes Room
(Tina is sitting holding Chloe’s hand watching her sleep, Bette enters)
Tina: ” Where’s Jay”
Bette: “He took off on his skateboard Carman is away to find him” (Going over to sit next to her wife)
Tina: “Carman”(confused)
Bette: “Carman was on her way in here and seen Jay take off”
(Carman is going frantic wondering where Jay would be, Then she clicks Skatepark. She drives to the skatepark then gets out the car.She notices Jay sitting on a bench and walks over to him)
Skatepark
Carman: “Hey dude, Why did you take off like that”(sitting next to him)
Jay: (wipeing tears away) “It was my fault Carman I pushed her to tell me what happend”
Carman: ” Hunni thats only because you were worried thats not your fault” (pulling him into a hug)
Jay: “I dont know what to do… Im a boy im suppose to be strong”
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somebody must go to the school and have a really really serius talk with this crapy gang. i like the idea of a holidays. post soon
This is an incredible storyline. I think that the grammar could improve. I assume that English is not your native tongue, I think you are doing a great job storyline wise. The poor grammar makes this family seem more on the “white trash” side. Having said that, I do like the story and its idea. Please don’t be offended by my comment. That is really the only ideals I can share with you.
wicked,i loved that.some more sooner please
just one quick comment..carman = carmEn
opps didnt notice the carmen part sorry.
Bette gonna kick some ass that hit her daughter!
Love Bette’s outburst. Love how you are having the parents deal with the family dynamics.
i think shane and carman should pay a visit to the school… and show those bullies a thing or two… hmmmmmmmmmm… but don’t let them get caught… not on school grounds…
Great update and of course Bette would flip out – she wouldn’t be Bette if she didn’t LOL…..looking forward too the holiday…
“OH IM NOT GOING TO CAUSE A SCENE IM GOING TO CAUSE A FLIPPING BROADWAY MUSICAL!!!”loved this line!! lol. just caught up with your story and I’m lovin it.
hmmmmmmm. very interesting, i like, i like a lot. a great start to a great story! i also honestly think that Bette should march down to chloe’s school and smack the heads of the girls that bet chloe up, know that would be a great scene! anyway looking forward to next post, plz continue!
I so agree with Aria I love this line OH IM NOT GOING TO CAUSE A SCENE IM GOING TO CAUSE A FLIPPING BROADWAY MUSICAL!!!”I burst out luaghing its great