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Laid Up: Another Season 3 – Chapter 26C
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“You wouldn’t have the address, would you?”
Ju-Ju nodded and turned pages until she reached the first page of the camp photos. “I always take an establishing shot.” Camp Tohopka: 4111 Foggy Park, Big Bear, was the second sign at the entrance.
“I wonder how long it’ll take to get there,” Bette said aloud.
Peggy walked out of the Center back to the limo.
“Cou’ we use yo-ah computer?” Tina asked. Her words came out rushed. Now that they knew where Angelica was, all she wanted to do was get to her.
“Sure.”
Ju-Ju stood up and Bette and Tina went around to the other side. Bette sat in the stool and went to a ‘maps’ site to find the route and time. Tina stood over her rubbing her hand up and down Bette’s shoulder and arm.
After Bette typed in the information, they watched as the route was plotted by the site. Bette turned to look at Tina. “Shit. It’s a fucking two and a half hours away. Shit, shit, shit.”
Tina’s head nodded.
Peggy walked quickly into the building. “Bette? Tina?” Bette looked up at her, still annoyed, still angry.
“I’ve just made a call to a good friend in Century City. . .”
“Peggy, we don’t have time for this,” Bette stopped her.
“Hear me out. He has a heli-pad on top of his building. His company has a copter that is just sitting there. He can get someone to fly us to Big Bear and arrange for a car to pick us up at the airport there. We can get you there in less than half an hour.”
Tina stepped from behind the counter and walked to Peggy. “Thank you.” Tears ran down her face. This was a very lucky break.
Bette was slower, but she came around the desk and walked to Peggy. She hugged her. “Yeah, thank you, Peggy. Thank you.”
“Let’s go. Let’s get you girls there.”
They started out and Tina turned to Ju-Ju. “Ju-Ju, cou’ you give me his num-bah?”
Ju-Ju took out her phone, pressed for her last call and wrote down the number.
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i am once again left speechless at your incredible ability to weave a tale. i actually yelped in excitement when Angie was safe but at the same time, believe it or not, felt somewhat sorry for Josh. only your writing could evoke that somewhat schizophrenic sympathy.I’m also a bit worried at the introduction of Jodi into the story but hope that after all that we’ve been through with Bette and Tina to date, she will not pose a threat to their relationship.as for all of the other characters and their stories, i am finding them entertaining and interesting as well which is not usually the case when reading as i’m pretty much just a Tina/Bette fan. this again, is testimony to your ability to ability to entertain.thanks again for the story and the time and effort that must be involved. looking forward as always to reading more.
WOW. you put so much into this everyone was weitten about. Could have done without Jodie tho. thanks
I’ve spent the past two days reading the whole thing, and honestly? It’s great. Really, really great. The characters are well written and adhere to canon, your reweaving of the events of Season 3 into this alternative version is not only really well done, but in my mind — preferable. As for the Jodi issue, if she’s like every other non-core character in your work (herself, but changed), I’ll be very happy to see where that goes. I do wonder, though, moments after Bette is reunited with Tina and her baby for the first time in weeks, she wanders off to talk to Jodi? That seems a little… I don’t know, inhuman? But, hey, if that’s my only complaint in 26 chapters, consider it an amazing feat. I’m a huge Danish fan, and I’m happy to see you keeping the love alive. Would love to see more of that relationship in your writing, but generally I think the chapters are fairly good about being even with their time. You’re prolific. Are you really spitting out this much in three days? Because if so, that’s incredible. I mean, really, really exceptional. Thanks for writing this, it’s a great read, and I can’t wait to see more of it.
more sharmeeeeeen!!! pleasee!!..excellent chap, so glad angie’s ok, hope you post soon
Thank goodness Angelica is safe. I’m glad Boden was there. Um, not too excited about Jodi showing up in this story :). Can’t wait for the celebration…hope everyone gets a little ‘private celebration’ time :wink:. You’ve really spoiled us this last week Portia. Thanks for this wonderful fic and don’t be gone too long :)
Nice way to weave Jodi and Big Bear into the story – and loved that Bette denied ‘gush’ing. Great stuff, Portia.
Bette better mess up of jodi!! yeah for angie being okay… now it’s time for the port-kennards to get on with their lives. tina needs to finish her rehab.i wonder what else steph. did what else is she hiding??? great update!!:)
Ahhhh… I can breathe now. That was tense, but Baby A is safe, finally! I’m so glad there was a third person there and Boden clocked that whining maggot Josh. Although, I think Bette would have ripped him apart eventually anyway. Hels is leaving, which is a shame, but her heart’s somewhere else… So! Ol’ Steph’s about to get her comeuppance, big time. I hope Peter gets his money back, as well as his furniture. I’m dreading the stuff coming out that was on that list of hers. Girl needs help, if she can survive prison. This was so good, I can’t wait for the next post. thanks Portia.
glad angie is ok…can’t wait for shane to get home and face the wrath of carmen…things need to change