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I’ve Got You Under My Skin
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“I’ve got you under my skin
I’ve got you deep in the heart of me
So deep in my heart, that youre really a part of me
I’ve got you under my skin
I’ve tried so not to give in
I’ve said to myself this affair never will go so well
But why should I try to resist, when baby will I know than well
That I’ve got you under my skin”
“Who is that?”
The instant he said that, I knew what would greet me when I turned. As I did, I knew I she would be there, knew that, somehow, she’d glide towards me and be able to make me regret everything I had done in the last year, but, more importantly, all the things I hadn’t done, all the words that had gone unspoken, the disasters I’d left in my wake. I wasn’t prepared for the vision that met my eyes. Dumbly, I stood there with the pitcher in my hands, only managing a weak, “You came.” Small talk, Henry talking. My skin started to crawl with them being in such close proximity to one another. He excused himself, taking the pitcher with him. Suddenly, I felt very naked, nothing to fiddle with, nothing to put between my body and hers. With this space, I could feel the pull she’d always had one me.
She was more beautiful now than ten years ago when she trapped my hand with hers and kissed a very straight Tina Kennard. She was exquisite now as she approached another ‘straight’ TK, but one who knew her body and what it would do, how she tasted and how her lips felt. I couldn’t help wanting to lose my earring all over again. I knew another first time would find me as the first had, at her mercy, begging her to show me, unable to manage my body’s reactions as it shook uncontrollably, the divine ecstasy of her experienced fingers and mouth bringing me to the most glorious climax and leading me back down to earth after with smooth, loving caresses.
The light in her eyes as she mentioned my old apartment encouraged me, reminding me so painfully how that light used to be reserved for more private occasions that involved fewer clothes. As soon as it appeared, it burned out, but I felt bolstered nonetheless. I moved to stand in front of her, just in front of her. I could feel the heat off her body, and I could swear I felt it rise as I stood there. It’s be so easy to lean into her, feel her against my back as I had so many times before, be as close again to being one with her as I had ever come. I knew I was close, so close, that we must only be a hair’s breadth apart. I could feel my pulse begin to pound, heard it in my head, felt a cool sweat breaking out all over my skin. The reactions she could produce in me, would they ever subside? She hadn’t even touched me. If she had shifted forward at that moment, just for a moment, I think I might have imploded. I was close enough to feel her breath rustle a few lose hairs on the back of my neck, and it played across my shoulders. Her dig about my not living with Henry ‘yet’ was about as effective as a cold shower, and she walked away, leaving me feeling so very alone. My head spun as I struggled to regain my composure. What had I done?
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Loved it!! And hell… everything she wears is sinful… its just so fucking hot that she is always going to commit that crime!
Precisely, NYGayLady.I like it.We can see that Tina is regretting what she had done. I would also. But, I just would come to talk to Bette and say what was and is in my heart. That´s what this marvelous fanfic writers do around here. Cover the holes and the bullshit of IC´s writers. Besides that i got an question. Everybody says that lesbian love to talk and discuss their relationship, their love life.So, this women at TLW aren´nt gay, hun…`cause they just don´t talk. Anyway I like it , honey :)
How can you want to be completely ingulf in some one and not be with them. thanks
BBe I didn’t think you’d post this soon but you did- and you’ve gone and got under My skin AGAIN!!! Good installment- can’t wait to see where you’re going now. Thanks.
I thought LH played this part excellently in the show, you could see the regret, thae pain and the Love, and you captured it beautifully PPS
Beautiful and sp very painful. As AshleyRoth just suggested, may we please have Bette’s pov on this scene. PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You put into words what I thought was happening when I saw that scene. The look that Tina had on her face and in her eyes, the way that she kept looking at Bette. There was longing in her eyes and in her posture. It will always be Bette for Tina. Now it is up to her to take the necassary steps back to the only one that she will ever love.
I thought this was a great piece–you captured the moment beautifully, and judging from Sunday night’s episode, all of this may very well have been running through Tina’s head. Or I should say…this is what *I* want running through her head. Also, I was very excited to see that you’d posted again so soon. Always a pleasure reading your work, NY.
I saw it too. Can’t wait to read you reaction to this weeks episode.
Well Well Well, NY you can’t stay away can you and I am thankful for that. I agree with the others that you wrote what Tina looked like she was feeling at that party…well actually disaster is more like it. You know how much I like your writing and can’t wait until you post once again my friend. Thanks!
Definitly looking like another good story to keep going. How did Bette feel that night? You know Tina’s regretting leaving Bette, things are hopefully looking up, cos I don’t care who they try and set her up with, you put Bette and Tina together and the temperature always goes up. This weeks episode was one of my favorites cos their were scenes with them together. The Jodi/Bette combination just isn’t doing it for me.
I forgot. Dress, tank top, whatever, our Ms. Bette is looking extremely hot this season.
Damn, lady!!! you make me cry every time… it’s really sad, but then again, Tina was the one that made her choice… BUT, I can’t help to feel sorry for her… yeah, yeah, I blame my LH heart for not hating her… ANYWAY, girl, keep posting, your stories are always marvelous… and even though ‘the very thought of you’ had a sad tibette ending, it was great… Post soon!!
absolutely…under each other’s skin…
Well, I like it
Tina’s never going to be able to let Bette totally go… And of course, when she gets not-so-little reminder like the sight of Bette in that black dress… well. That should have been enough for Tina to snatch up Angie, grab Bette’s hand and run as fast and as far as possible from Vapid Valley. Alas, she’s left shutting her eyes against the sight of Bette walking away. Oh, well. Great post, NY.
I’m glad someone has done this scene (and beautifully too). I suppose it was deliberate on the part of the actors but Tina did seem so fantastically aware of Bette and so regretful.
The title alone made Frankie Valli’s voice get stuck in my head. I’ll read this later.
wow serious!!
That’s painfully beautiful, or beautifully painful? :D
Completely overwhelming. Bette’s pov would also be great to read.
I’m awful. I would’ve said, “Fuck this shit!” and left if I was Tina.
Lament, that doesn’t make you awful, it makes you human.
NY NY…man this was great…you captured Tina’s angst…I hope you will continue this…one off dosen’t really mean one off on fanfiction.