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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT24
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“T, baby, it was meant to make you smile, not make you cry!” Bette said quietly.
Tina lifted her head and looked into Bettes eyes, her tear stained face smiling as she spoke, “it made me smile Bette and it made my heart beat faster, and it made me fall in love with you a little bit more!”
“That was my hope baby, Im glad you like it”
They both looked at the bed seeing what had made Tinas heart beat faster and what made her fall a little more in love, the bed had a big heart made from petals, inside the heart was written:
B P
4
T K
Forever
Underneath the heart declaration was the simple words of Forgive me, the rest of the bed continued with the theme of the room with the rose petals scattered over the crisp cream-ness of the linen, candles surrounded the love nest, illuminating and dancing across expanse of the bed.
Tina looked back at Bette, smiling into her eyes, searching the expressions on her face; she found the apology, as sincere as it could possibly be.
“T, honey why dont you go and have a nice bath, go and relax and Ill bring you a drink OK?”
“Why dont you join me babe?” Tinas eyes sparkled, enticing her, willing her to accompany her.
Bette shook her head, smiling her apology, “No, T, this evening is about you, I want you to go into the bathroom on your own and have some time just to relax. Im going to just sit out on the balcony for a little while, then Ill have a shower before getting ready.”
“Please Bette, come with me” Tina pleaded with her voice and her eyes.
“No T, please honey, go into the bathroom and take a relaxing bath, Ill come in, in a while, OK?”
“Ok, promise youll come in though?”
Bette smiled, “pinky promise” she leaned forward and placed her lips gently against Tinas, full of tenderness, full of warmth, full of her continuing apology and full of love.
Tina turned and walked to the bathroom door and opened it, she gasped as she saw that this room carried on the tradition of the decoration within the bedroom, there were candles scattered all over the bathroom, the large corner bath was already full of steaming scented water, red and white rose petals floating atop the bubbly water, and there laid on the floor in front of the bath was a deep red bath mat and on the mat were the same words that Bette had quietly whispered as she had walked toward the bathroom, I Love You written in white rose petals.
Bette watched the retreating figure disappear behind the bathroom door, she heard the gasp and she smiled, wondering what her instructions to the concierge had looked like, her request for the bedroom were perfect, she glanced down at the heart on the bed, she leaned forward touching the petals of the initials of TK within the heart, they would fulfill a joint fantasy later, one they had already carried out many years ago, when they taken their first vacation together.
Tina had whispered into Bettes ear one dark night that she would like to make love on a bed of rose petals, she had giggled when she told Bette, feeling embarrassed at the slushy romantic nature of her fantasy, but Bette had listened, taken it in and made it come true, it was an unforgettable night and one that was held dear in her heart.
Bette had long since had the thoughts of once again carrying out this fantasy, not just for Tina, but for both of them, today had given her the absolute ideal opportunity, she wanted and needed to make amends for her earlier behaviour of walking away, and she would continue to show Tina how sorry she was for breaking her promises of being open, and for walking away when she should of stayed and accepted words that her love had said.
Tonight, she would show her how much she loved her and she would show her how profoundly sorry she was, she would bring Tina back from the restaurant and she would make long, slow love to her on a bed of red rose petals
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Can’t wait!! I think your story is making me like tina again..lol! this is my abosolute favorite and Emily, what a gem! I do hope you bring her back again!
DEEP!!!!!!!! Bring on the next chapter…and how can u sleep well after leaving a chapter like this……huh don’t you have a conscience??????? SOOO NOT FAIR!!!!!!! LOL!!!!!!!
I think Bette’s gotten back in Tina’s good graces. Pretty lush, Jo.
Wow…that was…”WOW”! Very touching, very romatic, very loving. Emily is so adorable!
But who has to clear up the mess? I hope Bettes leaving a BIG Tip for the housekeeping staff!
Very romantic, Bette show me more Porter charm! lol…don’t know why, when I knew Emily’s dad is Henry. I sense some drama is coming. I hope he’s NOT the Henry! Please don’t make them use his sperm as they like Emily so much. I’m thinking too much so it’s time to bed then…lol, please continue.
This is a great fic by a brillant writer. LOVE the communication and the admittance and acknowledgement of fault by both parties, especially Betty, it shows her growth. This is so eloquently written.
so romantic and beautiful….can’t wait for more…btw, i hope henry won’t ever make his appearnce
Just wonderful. Am too tired to write anything more specific or eloquent but that doesn’t mean I appreciate it any less. Thanks for posting.
Wonderful,beautiful and I do believe that Ms.Bette has gotten into Tina good gotten into Tina good gracest again.
love the romance and can’t wait for the next chapter
Fantastic as always, thank you
Hey little Emily – glad she’s sticking around along with Jill (not sure if that was your original plan). Way to go, Bette. GREAT chapter!!
Very romantic indeed.
I love how you can take simple words and turn them into this flowing story full of love. You have taken this couple from utter despair to the highest mountain and into the sea of delight. I have always loved Bette and Tina together and with the help of your story you have reminded me of the absolute love that a person can have for another. What ever seems to be thrown at them you have allowed them to work throught it and that seems to have brought them closer as a couple. IC and company should take lessons from your story telling. Then maybe they will treat Bette and Tina the way that most of us would love to see them.
Jo, as usual another fantastic chapter. If I remember correctly you left a comment on another author’s chapter calling her an ole slushy romantic. After this chapter I think that would accurately describe you also.
Take your vitamins Tina. Bette’s going to mean business after dinner! I look forward to reading about that business, Jobadge. As always, this chapter rocked!
Now that was just beautiful… perfect… in every way… there is not too much more i can add… you took my breath away… i look forward to them making love on a bed of rose petals… please continue
Damn this is sweet and romantic!
OMG…that was an amazing and wonderful chapter – I just love the Porter Power and Charm, she is so romantic, sweet and loving, when she wants to and luckily (for us) she wants to a lot with and for Tina :o)) I sure hope Emily and Jill will stick around, but NOT Henry!!!! Take care and thank you :o))
Excellent and breathtaking as always. Please post soon.
There are some chapters of a story that make your heart beat a little faster….there usually NC17s……this chapter just proves that it doesnt have to be NC anything…..to actually make your heart skip a few beats….no matter how many times you read it….Romance at its best!
Oh, I think Bette already showed Tina how much she loves her and how sorry she is, but what will follow will be an amazing addition to that. Thanks a lot for this chapter… Ah, red rose petals.
HENRY?!? *Roll eyes*Plz dear Lord, tell me, Your Tina is not going to have feelings for men in this story, and she just happens to fall for a man, named Henry, coz I seriously couldnt deal with another s3 lmao’ … but apart from that, Im enjoyin it! love this story! … that was nice, n romantic
sweetttttttttt