Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
Housewife (8) – Final Chapter
Login to add story to favorites
(37 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
“Nothing special, but I love it here,” Bette sighed, throwing her stuff down in the corner as she started pulling off her jacket again.
“Bette … this is really nice. This whole place – and the rug too. It’s artistic.”
“I don’t know about that.”
Tina chuckled and stepped over to take Bette’s jacket from her, putting her own arms in the sleeves. “And this jacket … does your motorcycle thing work for all the girls?”
Bette smirked teasingly. “It worked for you.”
Again Tina laughed, and Bette watched on with adoration as the blond pulled the jacket closed and sauntered down the hall. She couldn’t help but follow. “What’re you doing?”
“I wanna see how this looks on me.”
Bette cocked her eyebrow with her own surprising excitement – their game was enticing. “You know … I don’t let just anyone steal that jacket.”
“Ooh, I’m hot!” Tina called out, having found the bedroom mirror.
Laughter seemed only fitting. “I’ll bet,” she mumbled to herself as she finally turned the last corner and leaned against the door frame, crossing her arms at the sight. It was almost too arousing, seeing Tina so energetic and teasing. It was like so many other times she had met with Tina, but this time it wasn’t wrong. This time Tina wasn’t pushing her away. She was starting to see what her time with Tina could really be, instead of experiencing the rejection that came with falling for a suburban housewife. Tina was so much more than that to Bette. She was worth the complications.
“Now you can only get it back if you take it off of me,” Tina moaned, knowing just how quickly it could be done, given Bette’s strength. She flirtatiously stepped back, that flash of mischief in her eyes like before. She was freer than ever.
“You’d better make this easy on me,” Bette smiled, knowing that nothing would ever just be easy between them – they would disagree and grow angry each day – but it would no longer be cause for such disappointment. They would always find their way back, and she knew that even then.
Tina glanced around, and then jumped around the bed to the other side. Her heart was pounding in her chest. “If I strip right now, would you be gentle with me?”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Great story, great ending to it, even though I feel like this is just the beginning of it, in a way. Thank you for writing it and I am waiting to see what else you’ve got in store for your readers :p. Have a fabulous day and come back soon with something else! :)
Hey GrindRight, I am the someone who mentioned priorities. (LOL) However, I am certain you are aware of this, after all who could possible forget a name like Seduction. By the way speaking of priorities, I believe you first must create a list before you can keep them straight, replace or loss them .Now that Tina has decided to leave her husband and commit to the relationship with Bette. Satisfying Bette, can be added to her list of priorities. That is considering she had a list to begin with. Although I do not believe making that her priority is realistic until she clearly understands the reason why she made her decision. I noticed that Bette did apologize to Tina for the first unconsented Kiss, which initiated the affair. Bette’s kiss must have made Tina loss her mind because she was not aware of the real reason for Bette’s apology. GrindRight, referencing your story Anything for You, can you call my first comment regarding my belief, that beautiful woman like having it done rough? Thanks for confirming my belief and for sharing your wonderful talent of writing. Please continue with this story it is offering more than entertainment. With judging the comments, I am certain others will agree. Until your next posting, take care…
That was awesome and sweet, love it. thanks for sharing this story with us !
it was an amazing ride – with a sweet, sweet ending… :) Excellent way to ‘take a bow’
Bravooo!! :D
You forced me out of silence! Please continue or write a sequel, PLEASE!
I have great admiration for your writing. Great talent and an ability to communicate in a thought provoking manner. Can you continue w/this story?
Is it weird if someone gives a standing ovation in front of their computer, alone? Oh well, I did it and then yelled “Encore!” I think that you could write a story about watching paint dry or grass grow and it would be eloquent and sexy, because you’re GrindRight. Thank you for another amazing story.
Perfect ending GR I love your stories they always teach some sort of lesson or give us something to think about thank you
Love it as always; the depth of character you explore, the ability to imply without explicitly having to say it, encouraging readers to ask questions and use their own imagination, and building such characters that in one post captivate you. Your kink for me is by far my favourite on the site, but you keep proving your skills go way beyond that. Great writing, great writer. Thanks :o)
Excellent update and really liked this story. Thank you.
This story is really amazing – Thank you for sharing!
Great story. Hate to see it end.
Great story, really enjoyed reading it!
Excellent story.Thank you.Whar about part II ?
Great thought provoking story. I believe that both women had some growing up to do. Tina especially. Sometimes that soul searching is a very painful process. Thanks for the great read!
put a smile on my face. Thanks.
Loved the story, hate to see it end. Sequel? Thanks.
Beautiful story with a sweet ending :-) so many things are laid between the lines, and it’s the pull of your writing GR! :-) thanks for sharing this marvelously written story :-) enjoy your weekend ahead!!
I’m glad they found each other finally. Great ending ;DWe r waiting for ur next story :D
OK you wouldn’t hurt my feelings if you added to this great story ….they were great together…loved it wish for more…thank you