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Housewife (8) – Final Chapter
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“That was sweet, but I’m still not over the hate comment. Don’t even think of moving your hand where I think you want.”
Bette slipped her fingers quickly over Tina’s hip, and down between her legs, taking a full breast in her other hand. It was so fast that Tina couldn’t even react, but she had to feel the power of their energy together. She had to feel what Bette could do to her.
“Like this?”
“You are … so … not off the hook.”
Bette let Tina enjoy it for another moment before pulling back and helping her turn back around so they were face-to-face. “T … I love you too damn much.”
Tina smiled.
“I can’t even hate our past together, you know that? I can’t hate anything, because it brought me you. And I usually hate all this sappy shit, but with you, it’s not anything but true.”
It was difficult to stay upset when Bette was looking at her that way, and when her words were so emotional, so she just listened.
“God you’re beautiful,” Bette whispered, stepping back under the water so Tina’s shivering would cease. “I just can’t believe … I can’t believe you let me in that first time. I was sure you were gonna slap me when I kissed you.”
“Outside my house?”
“Yeah.”
“Just after we got out of the car. Right after I told you that you’d have to leave.”
Bette smirked. “I knew you didn’t mean it.”
“How?” Tina wondered aloud, looking down to Bette’s collarbone, her shoulders, and then her chest. She let her eyes fix on the darker nipples that were hard with the cold, and from letting Tina enjoy the heat. “God … you were so persistent. I’d never met anybody like you.”
“What were you planning to do once we got inside? Sell Tupperware?”
Tina laughed, whacking Bette’s arm. “No … if you must know, I thought you would leave when I asked you to. I actually thought you would hang up on me before that even, when I told you it could never work, or in the store when we first met, and I told you that I was married.”
Suddenly, Bette’s face fell. “I’m sorry.”
“For what?”
“I just wanted to have you … and I didn’t think much of how this would all sit with you, and how you would deal. I know it’s been a long time coming, but … I’m sorry, T. You deserved better.”
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Great story, great ending to it, even though I feel like this is just the beginning of it, in a way. Thank you for writing it and I am waiting to see what else you’ve got in store for your readers :p. Have a fabulous day and come back soon with something else! :)
Hey GrindRight, I am the someone who mentioned priorities. (LOL) However, I am certain you are aware of this, after all who could possible forget a name like Seduction. By the way speaking of priorities, I believe you first must create a list before you can keep them straight, replace or loss them .Now that Tina has decided to leave her husband and commit to the relationship with Bette. Satisfying Bette, can be added to her list of priorities. That is considering she had a list to begin with. Although I do not believe making that her priority is realistic until she clearly understands the reason why she made her decision. I noticed that Bette did apologize to Tina for the first unconsented Kiss, which initiated the affair. Bette’s kiss must have made Tina loss her mind because she was not aware of the real reason for Bette’s apology. GrindRight, referencing your story Anything for You, can you call my first comment regarding my belief, that beautiful woman like having it done rough? Thanks for confirming my belief and for sharing your wonderful talent of writing. Please continue with this story it is offering more than entertainment. With judging the comments, I am certain others will agree. Until your next posting, take care…
That was awesome and sweet, love it. thanks for sharing this story with us !
it was an amazing ride – with a sweet, sweet ending… :) Excellent way to ‘take a bow’
Bravooo!! :D
You forced me out of silence! Please continue or write a sequel, PLEASE!
I have great admiration for your writing. Great talent and an ability to communicate in a thought provoking manner. Can you continue w/this story?
Is it weird if someone gives a standing ovation in front of their computer, alone? Oh well, I did it and then yelled “Encore!” I think that you could write a story about watching paint dry or grass grow and it would be eloquent and sexy, because you’re GrindRight. Thank you for another amazing story.
Perfect ending GR I love your stories they always teach some sort of lesson or give us something to think about thank you
Love it as always; the depth of character you explore, the ability to imply without explicitly having to say it, encouraging readers to ask questions and use their own imagination, and building such characters that in one post captivate you. Your kink for me is by far my favourite on the site, but you keep proving your skills go way beyond that. Great writing, great writer. Thanks :o)
Excellent update and really liked this story. Thank you.
This story is really amazing – Thank you for sharing!
Great story. Hate to see it end.
Great story, really enjoyed reading it!
Excellent story.Thank you.Whar about part II ?
Great thought provoking story. I believe that both women had some growing up to do. Tina especially. Sometimes that soul searching is a very painful process. Thanks for the great read!
put a smile on my face. Thanks.
Loved the story, hate to see it end. Sequel? Thanks.
Beautiful story with a sweet ending :-) so many things are laid between the lines, and it’s the pull of your writing GR! :-) thanks for sharing this marvelously written story :-) enjoy your weekend ahead!!
I’m glad they found each other finally. Great ending ;DWe r waiting for ur next story :D
OK you wouldn’t hurt my feelings if you added to this great story ….they were great together…loved it wish for more…thank you