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Heaven Can Wait – Episode 8: Blame God Instead
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Jenny: Wait…you mean Dana right?
Max shakes his head.
Max: Alice.
Jenny: Why Alice?
Max: ‘Cause Lara only hangs out and talks with two people nowadays. Alice and Carmen.
Jenny: What about Dana?
Max shrugs and shakes her head.
Max: Dunno, man. But…I think she was goin’ through the motions last night. I mean…she kisses Lara…and then kisses Alice….and keeps kissing Alice…all while she’s lookin’ at Bette for approval.
Jenny: Bette?
Max: Fuckin’ A, I think Bette was waitin’ for Dana to do somethin’ last night and Dana did it….which pissed off Tina, ’cause Tina’s got her own shit with Bette and the baby and Henry and all that.
Jenny leans her elbows on the bar and rests her chin against her knuckles, looking at Max.
Jenny: So what does it all mean, oh wise one?
Max: ….I think they’re all fucked up.
Jenny: …
Max: But…they all want somethin’ not so fucked up which is hard to do when everyone’s noticin’ everyone else for different reasons.
Jenny: And you?
Max: Me?
Jenny: Yes. Who are you noticing and why?
Max: Nobody. Except for you, anyway. You’re a fuckin’ enigma.
Jenny laughs before focusing back on her work at the Planet Cafe. Max goes back to his meal.
The door opens at Carmen’s apartment and standing there is Helena with a concerned look on her face.
Helena: Is everything alright?
Carmen: Funny you should ask. Why?
Helena looks beyond Carmen and sees Lara down the hall.
Helena: Is it alright if I come in?
Carmen: Sure.
Helena enters and immediately leans up to Carmen’s left ear to speak softly.
Helena: You and Lara didn’t….ummm….
Carmen: She’s upset about last night. I told her she could stay here if she wanted to…and then she passed out on my couch. I think she wants to get her mind off things so she’s getting ready to fix brunch.
Helena: Alice asked me to come by.
Carmen: Why’d she do that?
Helena: I think she feels that her and Dana are probably the last two people Lara wants to see right now…but…they’re really concerned about her. So I told Alice I would check in and see if she’s okay.
Carmen and Helena walk towards the kitchen where Lara is hard at work. Upon entering, Helena sees Lara focused on the task at hand.
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alice can’t seriously have feeling beyond friendship for lara! come on! i mean lara’s rad in her own way, but… come on!!! hook lara up with carmen and be done with it! :) great update – looking forward to the next.
Awesome update i must say! lol apart from being a wierdo he seems to be a keen observer i liked it! alice and lara wow thats awesome and im glad shanez jealous lol or atleast i think she should be. i agree with Adelefiz im not sure about the couples anymore, i cant really say if carmen n lara wont be good together or dana and alice or alice and lara.. gosh! confuzzling! i would leave it all in your able hands!:)
whoa Henry’s got some balls!!! PPS
poor lara but I have a feel that alice is happy but not as happy as she wants to be and I think that she has started to have some feelings for lara as well as lara may ahve for alice aswell please post soon can’t wait to see what will happen next great update I love it
Lara isn’t my favorite. I didn’t want her with Alice when Dana was dead on the show, so I definitely don’t want her on Alice’s mind when Dana is alive. lol If they all continued to live together more lines might have been blurred, but I think Alice just feels guilty because she knows what it feels like to be dumped by Dana. She understands the hurt Lara is feeling now, but I’m pretty sure she’ll learn to deal with it, and enjoy her time with Dana. If anyone is to blame for the confusion, it is Dana, but I suppose she gets a pass because of her illness.
Thanks for the props, man! OK, you’ve done it, you’ve actually made me like Max for more than 2.5 seconds AND made me seethe over my fave character on the show, Dana. Usually I find Max a terrible waste of time, but I like how you used him as an outside observer of the WTF-with-the-Lara-Dana-Alice-trio dynamic. Why do I want Lara and Alice to totally hook up on this trip to Canada and turn the tables on the dumpage? I dunno, but I’m excited to see how you’ll untangle this mess. And argh, Dana is still a wuss in my mind here, getting her cake and eating it too (so to speak) without bearing any fallout from those she’s hurting. OK, she’s been sick. This does mean something. But still, gaaah. I am on board with those who don’t like Lara and Carmen together, it’s not as dynamic as the thought of Alice and Lara mulling over what the nature of THEIR relationship is/could be (all while sneaking around behind Dana’s back? mwhahahaha), plus it would seem like an easy way out of this sticky situation. Bring on the drama and cool fancy words;) Obviously how you’re moving this story along is working, and you’ve stirring a lot of us up. Please post soon, updates rule! Thanks.
Oh, what a tangled web Max sees… I like Henry’s pre-emptive strike. He’s going down and he knows it. As for Our Alice, welp, she’s gotten what she wanted… hasn’t she? (duhn-de-duhn-dunh)
Henry has a lot of balls coming to Bette to ask about Tina. Is Carman in love with Lara? I’m going back tomorrow and read and get my mind clear on some of this. I might have missed something thanks for posting thanks
Great update,i agree i didnt see this coming either!!! Your sneaky!!! lmao PPS and as always,keep with the great work!!!!
Did Henry think that he and Bette were gonna have a heart to heart? If my partner & I are having problems I’ll be damned if I go to the ex to get some kind of insight. I still can’t believe Tina blamed Bette for seeing her as some type of baby machine…in this story did Tina get pregnant without Bette knowing? If so how could Bette press her for a child she created behind her back. Instead of talking to Bette she picks a fight over someone else’s relationship. Tina needs some professional help to help her see where this anger really lies. That’s not saying she can’t be BI but I dont even think that’s the issue…it’s about payback to someone who has hurt you more than you thought you ever could be.