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Green Diamond 17
Ch 17
Carmen’s POV
McCutcheon’s Mansion – Scotland
We woke up around noon the next day because of jet lag. The house is very quite, everyone is out already and the kids have gone to school.
We are having breakfast, no, lunch sleepily in the dining room when Shay drags himself in heavily.
“Hey, little brother! Late night last night?” Shane teases him lightly.
He stops his tracks, looking pale at me then at Shane. Shane goes over to hug him warmly.
“Not happy to see me?” Shane asks.
“No sis… just have a hangover.” Shay replies glancing over nervously. Shane narrows her eyes and chooses not to believe him.
“You are a very bad liar. Come on, spill?” She pats his head.
“Shane, if he is anything like you? It must be about some girls. Hi Shay. By the way, I am Carmen.” I pretend that last night didn’t happen and smile at him.
“Hi. Carmen.” He says with his head down. Shane whispers something into his ear and his swallows hard.
“Good for you.” He mutters to his big sister.
Knowing Shane, she must have told him that I am her girlfriend. For someone who claims not to do relationship, she is not shy in telling everyone about us. I guess not doing relationship does automatically equal to not capable of it.
“So what time did you arrive last night?” Shane asks motioning Shay to sit down.
“I can’t remember. I had dinner with some friends in London first before taking the jet up, so it must have past mid-night.” He says before taking a big bite of his toast.
“Really? I didn’t hear a thing last night, we must have sleep like a baby. Isn’t it Shane?” I give her a quick peck on the cheek and wink at Shay.
“Yes, darling.” She looks surprised at my sudden display of affection in front of her brother. Shay drops his shoulder when he realised that I am letting him off the hook. What I don’t know is my little act of kindness may come back to haunt me!
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Glad you poated. Gabe is a ass. If you Try to pay off you daughter G/F just to keep your daughter in line. They are a sstrange family. thanks
great update. dying to find out whats going to happen..how will Shane react, what’s Bette supposed to do????
So glad you’re back! I’ve been waiting for updates to this fic and was beginning to think you had abandoned it. Great chapter, I loved it. Can’t wait to see how this all unfolds. pps! :)
YOU UPDATED! :)) – smiles. love it. gabriel is mad to think that he can buy carmen’s love. i hope they settle the issues between and i can’t wait to find out what’s going on with Bette. please update soon!!
Hey ur back I was going to tell u to update!!!!!!!!!!! This rock bette will do the right thing
Welcome back! I really missed this story! Great chapter btw..=)
heeeey great story im hooked please post soon!!
good post about darn time cat. lol
hey, hey ^^ you’re welcome ;) and I liked the chapter a lot, cant wait to see what happens next !