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Gonna get to livin’ – Chapter 24
Alice hit her ‘g’ spot perfectly. Dana screamed Alices` name out instantly. She begged for more. Alice became wetter and more swollen too. She pumped in and out, flicking and sucking her clit at the same time. After two and a half years Dana could not take anymore, but Alice entered a third finger. Dana cried out in passion for the last time. She thrashed her legs and her arms went up to her head, which was still being tossed from side to side. Her arms dropped back towards her side grasping the rug and she arched her back one last time. Her head was thrown back, her mouth open with an empty scream. She twitched her legs up and down until her toes tightened and she came so hard that she finally screamed Alices` name over and over again.
Alice slowed her assault as Dana came down, shuddering above her. Slowly she retracted her fingers and Dana finally slumped back lifeless. Alice tenderly climbed back up Danas` body and asked her if she was ok. She snuggled into the crook of Danas` shoulder and led there. They kissed slowly after Dana caught her breath and loved the last glow of the fire until Dana was back to normal.
Alice led in the crook of Danas` arm and watched the fire start to go out. She looked to Danas` face and said that the fire had nearly died out. Dana looked concerned and said no, she had just recovered and the fire was far from out, wiggling her eyebrows. Alice chuckled, then said that she was so goofy, she actually was on about the fire, nodding at it, not a metaphor. Dana said she was such a doofus. Alice smiled and said no, sexy goofy! Alice got up and threw a bit more ‘shit’ on the fire and it roared back into life, as did the passion between Alice and Dana.
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Alice had her arms wrapped around her knees as she sat watching the flames flickering. Dana had regained her composure and sat up. She leant over and put her hand to Alices face and kissed her gently, thanking her. Alice asked why and Dana said for letting her into her life.
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(31 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
I am with MaGoose and uhhuh. Burning all those magazines was a perfect gesture to start anew. A turned up the a/c earlier so that she could light a fire, lol. Actually, I think you wrote them hotter than the roaring fire. Great job, chillipepper!
Hot, hot hot! I know you were nervous about this chapter, but, I think you handled it perfectly. I love that you had a Danish moment of Alice hitting her head on the fridge. Great job in using the magazines for the fire. Alice doesn’t need them anymore. The NC-17 was written just right. You had the raw passion, but, also the love and respect. Excellent chapter, chillipepper!! BTW: You know I am still loving this story – you can take as many chapters as you want to finish it as far as I’m concerned. I’ll be here to read each one. Thanks!!
I echoed Magoose here, this chapter is nothing but HOT HOT HOT! The intimate moments between the two was very well written. And pls continue with this story, I love it very very much! Thanks and PPS!
I loved it! It was totally hot. I think you melted my coputer. But anyway I think you should continue on for many many chapters because will continue to read. This story is great.
How hot can that be!…Your description was so detailed that I got goosebumps…I love the part where dana was frustrated bec. she can’t get the hook of alice bra…great story…thanks…
All I really want to say is the story is great and please don’t forget about it and update it or even better finish it soon…