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Damaged Ch. 43
Hi, would you like to dance? She asked Lara. Lara looked at Dana, but she obviously in la-la-land.
Yes, I would. Lara grabbed the womans hand and got up from her seat. They headed out to the dance floor and danced. Dana didnt even know Lara was gone and got out of her seat. She walked through the crowd and over to the bathroom. She walked over there and purposely bumped into Jordana and Alice.
Oh my god, Im so sorry. Jordana stay still in front of Alice.
Oh no, its fine. Are you alright?
Im fine, Im heading to the bathroom. Dana looked at Alice and then walked to the bathroom. Jordana leaned against Alice.
That was interestingSo, where were we?
I think we should wait until we get home.
Ok. Jordana pulled away from Alice and fixed her shirt. Alice fixed her dress, and they headed back over to the dance floor.
Carmen was watching the crowd, from above the dj booth. She was spinning and was having a good time. She kept looking for Shane, but nowhere to be found. Carmen handed the headphones back to the dj.
Thanks so much for that. I had fun.
No problem, enjoy your night. She waved goodbye and headed back downstairs. She walked through the crowd and found Alice and Jordana.
Hey guys. Im ready to head home. I am having jet lag. She smiled.
Yeah, Im ready to go too babe. Alice said.
Alright, lets find Jenny and Marina. The girls went looking for the couple and found them, standing in a corner.
Hey guys, were ready to go home. Carmen said. They walked away from the corner and walked towards the entrance. Dana walked over with the group with Lara behind her.
Has anyone seen Shane? Carmen asked.
I seen her go the steps with some girl. Alice pointed to the steps to left.
Alright, Ill go get her. Carmen head over to the steps and started to walk up. She walked up to door to door and looked for Shane. She didnt find her, but theres one room left. She walked up to the door and opened up. Shane are you in”oh my god! Carmen turned around and closed the door. She walked in on Shane ***** some blonde haired girl. She felt embarrassed and couldnt this happen. Not even an hour, and Shane already ***** with someone she hardly knows. Shane walked out the door and headed towards the steps. Carmen ran after her and headed down also. Shane walked through the crowd and met up with the girls. Carmen was a step behind her and stood behind her.
Okay, everyones here. Lets go. Marina said. The girls walked out and headed back to the beach house.
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(74 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
man, i hope u do one when they get home, the akwardness between shand and carmen would be grand
damn, i really like dana, but she’s really pissing me off, i think lara should get a new girl, and alice should stay with jordana… but other than that gr8 story!! ;)
Yeah two chapters in one day, thank you!!
Gosh, you always stop in moments like that, do you want to torture me????
:-)
That was perfect, I like the acting from Shane and Carmen and of course from jenny, that seh saw whats going on with shane. I can´t wait for the next chapter.
Someone needs to call on her behavior she just keeps f***ing up and hurting carmen
Great chapter. It’s nice to Shane and Carmen talking again. How about that a bet between Bette and Helena,I can’t wait to see who wins. Let me guess, is this the calm before the storm? Drama that what I live for. Another great job.
That damn Shane, Carmen should choke her. Glad they ended up in the same room. There goes Dana trying to screw up Alice & Jordana. Bette should never have told Helena where Tina is. Great start to Key West.
It floors me that these chapters have a four star rating…they really are five stars all the way! Thanks!