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Cruise on the Big Sea Chapter 8
Bette looks at Tina with a very curious grin…
Tina: “What are you thinking right now Bette Porter?”
Bette: “I’m thinking that we might want to pass on these drinks because I have a bottle of wine chilling in my room and dessert just for you. What do say we skip out on these ladies and you give me all of your attention?”
Tina: “That sounds like a wonderful idea to me, Bette. Ladies we are going to pass on the drinks. We will see you later…much later.”
They didn’t wait for a response, and there were plenty to be heard.
Instead they made thier way to the suite that Bette had all to herself. It was huge. Tina was in shock when Bette opened the door and found the room lite with nothing but candle light and there was soft music playing.
Tina: “All this room for just one person, Bette?”
Bette: ” I like my space. I don’t want to be cramped in a small room. And, just think you have a place to get away if you too.”
Just then Tina notices the balcony over looking the sea beneath them. She walk out and stands against the railing. Bette comes to join her with wine glass is in hand.
Bette: “Can I offer you a nice chilled glass of wine?”
Tina takes a sip and looks at Bette. Everything about this moment was perfect. Tina leans in and gives Bette a kiss that makes both of their knees go weak. The kiss lasts a couple of minutes. When they both come up for air the only thing they can both say is WOW.
Bette then takes Tina’s hand and leads her to the couch. Next to the couch is a plate of strawberries that Bette had delivered while they were gone to dinner.
Bette: “Please sit down Tina and make yourself comfortable.”
Tina does just that. The setting is so romantic with the candles, the wine, and Bette’s choice of music. Bette sits next to her and grabs the plate of strawberries.
Bette: “Would you like one of these?”
Tina: “Yes please.”
Bette takes a strawberry and rubs it on Tina’s bottom lip then replaces the strawberry with her lips. The taste of the wonderful fruit mixed with Tina’s taste makes Bette crave Tina even more.
Tina is so turned on right now that she barely sit still. She is wiggling all about knowing that her lips are not the only thing that is wet right now. She needs to feel this wonderful woman and feel every inch of her.
They being making out. Bette gently places small kisses on Tina’s lips and then moves to her neck which smells of warm vanilla sugar. This is a scent that Bette will find in the future will drive her more crazy that anything else in the world. Bette could stay in that soft place on Tina’s neck forever but decides that there are more interesting places she needs to explore on this heavenly body. Bette runs her hand up Tina’s side and finds her left breast and a very aroused nipple. This makes Bette shudder. What is this woman doing to her?
Bette decides it is time to take this exploration to a more comfortable place. She stands up and takes Tina’s hand and leads her to the edge of the bed. All Tina can think now is….Let the games begin!
TBC
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(37 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
Don’t leave us waiting. I really like your story. Post soon.
k. you said this was the start of what we wanted. i can tell you for all of us, that well want more today. you cant just leave us panting, did i just say that lol, i mean hanging like that. this was fun and good. post soon, girl.
Let the gaaaaaaaames begin Love this post more sooooon
WOW! Bring it ON hurry up LOL! Hey I’m just really Excited LOL! WHOA! I Love it Please continue ASAP LOL! it’s just bring us some Hope all the Drama for B&T in Fanfic Story we need some Loving right NOW LOL! Hey Thanks for this Wonderful Story keep it up I Love it Please post soon.
woooo hooooo, now I’m gonna go check 2 see if u posted the rest!!!!! I HOPE SO!!!!!! LOL!!!!
Nips, you are an absolute riot! You already know the previous chapter had me howling with laughter; but I couldnt even get off the first page before I fell all over myself again:
Kristin then speaks, “Don’t tell me those are from the one and only Bette Porter?”…..”No Kristin they are from the old lady that cleans our room in the morning…
I hope you realize just how much I am enjoying this; post again soon
Damn this is so awesome and excited, please don’t leave us long, post soon please, can’t wait to see the game began. Hot hot hot coming!!!!!!
Hell no! don’t stop there….you are killing us. I love this story, Bette is so sweet and loving…….bring on the next chapter soon….please.
wow a lot of happy couples. cant wait for B&T loving. post soon
oh nip this story is so sweet. I love the pace. this is a 7 day cruise is it? and they are on what day 2? whatever the day I see lots of adventure ahead for the ladies. post soon.
This story is SO HOT!!!! Please don’t make your readers wait to LONG.
Thanks for the update Nipples…and yes I´ll read what ever you write even if it on toiletpaper as long as it is good….now get the show on the road Nipples we want an NC-17…are we getting our wish. Post soon
keep it going, that’s all I have to say :)
Loving this story, very sweet. Damn that roses bit it is good, must remember to steal it! Where did u get it?
oh yeah..Let the games begin..and lets play hard..lol..OMG i love it..B&T seems very confortable to next step and so do i..lol..bring it on!!!!!great chapter as always post soon!!!
You really won’t make us wait long…will you? Nice chapter and we need more.
let the games begin… indeed. can’t wait for the next one… waiting after this chapter won’t be so easy.
hmm wow…can’t wait to see how you gonna write, whats gonna come next :p
just caught up on your chapters . your story is so sweet . i love it . looking forward “to the games”
OHHHHHHH! Tonight is her night, gurl. Great chapter. “And let the games begin”!!!!!
Lookin’ forward to the great Bette Porter technique. Nice job.
Hey Nipple! Sorry that I haven’t been able to comment. I was away on vacation. I love how you’ve progressed the story though. It’s going to be a magical week for all of them!
F*cking Hell!!!!!!! My god I was holding my breath when they were in the room……and the WVS eh? HEE HEE….I love it!!!
Oh my god Nips, you are soooo mean leaving everyone hanging like that. YOU HAVE to post soon soon soon!!!!
K
Excellent as always. I love how this is fun and drama free. Wonderful two chapters. Can’t wait for more.
hOT dOG!! LOL I just read the last 2 chapters and this story is so f-ing funny! I love Alice getting water dumped on her–that sounds like a true story, ever happen to you Nips? hmmmmm lol I’m glad you love to write, cause I love to read. I’m a very good reader so don’t be afraid to have a 10-20 page chapter I can handle it!!! lol goodnight :)
Damn that Porter. She is such a romantic. Or should I say you are. Flowers after the day spent together, a single rose in the evening, candles, strawberries, I’m dying here, and you leave us with let the games begin. So cruel, so cruel. Its kinda late so hopefully in the morning you will have posted, course I don’t know if I want to read it at work. Can’t wait.
oh come on plz post weve been waitin soooo long now and i wanna c mr action plzplzplz xxx