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Cruise on the Big Sea Chapter 8
With that comment a light bulb went off in Tina’s head….Thinking to herself: ‘Did she just say her and Alice’s room? Does that mean that Bette has her own room? Hot Damn!’
Bette: “Tina…I will come back to get you in about an hour if that is alright with you.”
Tina: “That sounds like a wonderful plan, Bette. I will be waiting for you.”
With that Bette comes over and gives Tina a light kiss on the cheek and with that she is gone.
Dana then gets up and goes to Kristin and gives her a deep long kiss. Kristin opens her mouth and gladly takes Dana’s tongue. This kiss makes Kristin want to throw Dana down on the bed and go for round two but she know she can’t because Tina is standing there watching them with a ***** eating grin on her face.
Kristin: “Dana, go get ready and we will finish this after dinner. What do ya say?”
Dana: “Oh baby I can’t wait! I want to scream your name all night long!”
Kristin: “That you will my love, that you will.”
Dana opens the door to leave and standing there is a delivery man with a vase of 2 dozen yellow rose with a single red rose in the middle.
Delivery man: “Is there a Tina Kennard here?”
Tina: “I’m Tina…Thank you so much!”
Tina sits the flowers on the table and opens the card that is attached….
Tina, Thank you for making this the best cruise I could have ever hoped for. The yellow roses represents the life long friendship that I know I have found and the red rose represents the love that I know I will have for you for the rest of my life. I hope that I can make you as happy as you have made me!
Bette
Tina smiles and her heart melts for the first time in her life. Kristin then speaks, “Don’t tell me those are from the one and only Bette Porter?”
Tina: “No Kristin they are from the old lady that cleans our room in the morning…Of course they are from Bette. Don’t be jealous Kris, your girl just left the room. And I’m sure she will have a wonderful gift for you tonight as well.”
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(37 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
Don’t leave us waiting. I really like your story. Post soon.
k. you said this was the start of what we wanted. i can tell you for all of us, that well want more today. you cant just leave us panting, did i just say that lol, i mean hanging like that. this was fun and good. post soon, girl.
Let the gaaaaaaaames begin Love this post more sooooon
WOW! Bring it ON hurry up LOL! Hey I’m just really Excited LOL! WHOA! I Love it Please continue ASAP LOL! it’s just bring us some Hope all the Drama for B&T in Fanfic Story we need some Loving right NOW LOL! Hey Thanks for this Wonderful Story keep it up I Love it Please post soon.
woooo hooooo, now I’m gonna go check 2 see if u posted the rest!!!!! I HOPE SO!!!!!! LOL!!!!
Nips, you are an absolute riot! You already know the previous chapter had me howling with laughter; but I couldnt even get off the first page before I fell all over myself again:
Kristin then speaks, “Don’t tell me those are from the one and only Bette Porter?”…..”No Kristin they are from the old lady that cleans our room in the morning…
I hope you realize just how much I am enjoying this; post again soon
Damn this is so awesome and excited, please don’t leave us long, post soon please, can’t wait to see the game began. Hot hot hot coming!!!!!!
Hell no! don’t stop there….you are killing us. I love this story, Bette is so sweet and loving…….bring on the next chapter soon….please.
wow a lot of happy couples. cant wait for B&T loving. post soon
oh nip this story is so sweet. I love the pace. this is a 7 day cruise is it? and they are on what day 2? whatever the day I see lots of adventure ahead for the ladies. post soon.
This story is SO HOT!!!! Please don’t make your readers wait to LONG.
Thanks for the update Nipples…and yes I´ll read what ever you write even if it on toiletpaper as long as it is good….now get the show on the road Nipples we want an NC-17…are we getting our wish. Post soon
keep it going, that’s all I have to say :)
Loving this story, very sweet. Damn that roses bit it is good, must remember to steal it! Where did u get it?
oh yeah..Let the games begin..and lets play hard..lol..OMG i love it..B&T seems very confortable to next step and so do i..lol..bring it on!!!!!great chapter as always post soon!!!
You really won’t make us wait long…will you? Nice chapter and we need more.
let the games begin… indeed. can’t wait for the next one… waiting after this chapter won’t be so easy.
hmm wow…can’t wait to see how you gonna write, whats gonna come next :p
just caught up on your chapters . your story is so sweet . i love it . looking forward “to the games”
OHHHHHHH! Tonight is her night, gurl. Great chapter. “And let the games begin”!!!!!
Lookin’ forward to the great Bette Porter technique. Nice job.
Hey Nipple! Sorry that I haven’t been able to comment. I was away on vacation. I love how you’ve progressed the story though. It’s going to be a magical week for all of them!
F*cking Hell!!!!!!! My god I was holding my breath when they were in the room……and the WVS eh? HEE HEE….I love it!!!
Oh my god Nips, you are soooo mean leaving everyone hanging like that. YOU HAVE to post soon soon soon!!!!
K
Excellent as always. I love how this is fun and drama free. Wonderful two chapters. Can’t wait for more.
hOT dOG!! LOL I just read the last 2 chapters and this story is so f-ing funny! I love Alice getting water dumped on her–that sounds like a true story, ever happen to you Nips? hmmmmm lol I’m glad you love to write, cause I love to read. I’m a very good reader so don’t be afraid to have a 10-20 page chapter I can handle it!!! lol goodnight :)
Damn that Porter. She is such a romantic. Or should I say you are. Flowers after the day spent together, a single rose in the evening, candles, strawberries, I’m dying here, and you leave us with let the games begin. So cruel, so cruel. Its kinda late so hopefully in the morning you will have posted, course I don’t know if I want to read it at work. Can’t wait.
oh come on plz post weve been waitin soooo long now and i wanna c mr action plzplzplz xxx