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"Does it make you wet to suck the orgasm from my body?" Tina whispered. "You know how much it turns me on to make you come. Do you have the same reaction?"
"God, Tee, yes," Bette could barely speak. "I want you so much."
"It won’t be long before you feel my tongue inside you, licking at your clit," Tina started. "Encouraging your body toward the same release you just gave me."
"But how long are you going to make me wait?" Bette asked cautiously, as she tried to reach to capture Tina in a kiss.
"Not long at all," Tina replied. "As long as you beg a little." She leaned in and bit just under Bette’s ear. "I would love to hear you beg me to fuck you."
"You know I want you to, though," Bette said.
"Want me to what?" Tina smiled, kissing back to Bette’s mouth.
"Use your mouth to make me come," Bette whispered.
"So if I suck your clit into my mouth like this," Tina pulled Bette’s lip between her own and flicked her tongue across the surface. "Is that likely to be arousing to you?"
Bette struggled slightly to move her hands, which Tina still had pinned above her head. Tina tightened her grip even more, while tightening her thigh muscles simultaneously around Bette’s hips, such that she was powerless to move.
"Tina, you’re making me crazy," Bette begged. "Please let me touch you."
"I’m going to move one of my hands, but you have to promise to lie still," Tina said, with mock seriousness in her tone.
"Promise," Bette said solemnly.
Tina shifted slightly so she could reach between Bette’s legs, and then brought her moist fingers to her own mouth for a taste.
"God you are so ready," Tina said quietly. "And I want so very much to feel your heartbeat stroking at you while my tongue is caressing you."
This time when Bette reached up, she was successful in reaching Tina’s lips. They kissed each other hungrily, while Tina repositioned herself to rest her elbows on either side of Bette’s head.
"Don’t worry, I won’t be making you wait much longer," Tina said. "I want to fuck you as much as you want to be fucked."
Each time Bette heard Tina announce the word, it sent a subtle tingle through her, and made her ache even more.
"Turn your body around so I can taste you again," Bette said. She added one word as an afterthought. "Please…"
Tina moved as requested, bowing her head down to kiss at Bette’s inner thighs. She felt Bette mimicking her actions, and immediately knew that Bette would follow her lead. She took one long slow stroke from Bette’s clit to her opening and dipped inside her deliberately before dragging back up to flick back and forth at her sensitive flesh. She moaned into Bette as she felt her do exactly the same thing.
Tina searched over Bette, loving every noise that she encouraged from her, and that she encouraged in return. They were soon lying in an exhausted tangle of sheets, having both reached amazing peaks of climax at the will of the other. They moved to hold one another, kissing quietly, enjoying the after effects of their explosive releases.
"I have a feeling that’s not the last time Angelica’s going to be staying over at Auntie Alice’s," Bette said with a grin.
"No," Tina agreed. "The first of many overnight trips for our little one."
Their tender kisses continued and soon escalated as their passion for one another re-ignited, the stars of a Canadian winter twinkling outside the hotel room’s patio doors.
(the end.)
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I’m not so into TiBette either. I have to replace one name mentally when I read it. lol. Great chapter. Hope you could bring on more stories.
That was so HOTTTT!!!!! To bad we can’t have a Bette and Tina like that on the show.
Sorry I am still a Tibetter at heart and will be until I die. Now that is the moan of love that I like to hear. I do have one question though. If the show had not messed up the character of Tina would most of the Tina haters still feel that way? Or did IC’s handling of Tina cause this dislike of her? From reading interviews both Laurel and Jennifer are not happy about what has happened to their on screen love. I just hate to see that chemistry go down the drain because one woman has no clue about love and relationships.
I so agree w/patti. One diehard TiBetter here. Your description and attention to detail makes your stories so perfect. I swear, you could write a story about a grocery list and it would be award-winning.
just, your writing is spellbinding, and as for the next season of the L word. Remember it is just television and anything can happen
Well, I am a die-hard TiBetter and a great big Texas THANK YOU for that chapter. Loved it.
Wow! That was absolutely HOT. And if I could, I’d given you 10 stars.
I’m still very much a die hard Betina believer!! I need to have faith that IC will do the right thing. great story!
thank you JKS…I will always be a Tibette fan…even if the characters have been taken to a place I don’t understand…but thank god you can still find it inside to write about them.
well, that’s what i like to read…you just made my night JKS…i totally agree on the rating…even i complained about the hellbette story because my fragile TiBette heart was breaking, i still find your writing so very fascinating…i hope something else will inspire you to write more about B&T…i still believe that they are meant for each other…thanks
I think it is crazy to “downrate” a story just because of the character pairing. When it’s a great and entertaining story it should be rated for that. You do a great job no matter who you pair. Thank you.
What the hell? Someone gave you a 1? O.o Now, I wasn’t crazy about the Helena/Bette pairing and honestly I stopped reading because it did nothing for me. The story didn’t suck though, just so you know. I just had to stop. But I loved this one though as I am still a TiBetter. I hate how Tina was just transformed into this unknown person in S3. She wasn’t even close to the woman who enjoyed helping out children in S2. The worst part is we really don’t know why. My mom seems to think if the show went on for 10 years we’d learn to read between the lines. I disagree. I don’t like making assumptions like that. My mom is used to her daily soap operas where they can stretch a storyline out with little to no problems. Anyway, grats on the award. You’re an excellent writer and deserve it.
Glad to see a post from you. Willingly ingnored most of season 3 while reading this and it was HOT. Allow me to give you some stars anyway *******
jks you made my nite just like you did everyone elses.im a tibette fan also and i love youre stories please continue lady. i pray to the goddess nitely for there reuion in #4. but i say HELLNO to the belenas out there it just “WRONG” please post soon! this was “HOT”
You’re stories are wonderful. Ratings, awards … well, recognition is nice but, it really doesn’t matter in the general scheme of things. And, like most other authors, I’m betting you don’t write for those cudoos anyway. Seek solace in the catharsis that is the process … it’s all about the writing, readership of any kind is just an added bonus!
Congratulations on the well deserved win, JKS. Somebody gave you a one? Ignore the ignorant. This was a sweet little essay of how we’d have liked to have seen it.
Veils Disappear Entirely!(Associated Press)Today, all over world veils disappeared from bridal shops, wedding ceremonies and Dennis Rodman’s closet. Jennifer Lopez and Elizabeth Taylor wept publicly at the loss of that marriage ceremony mainstay. Their publicists released a joint statement.”Ms. Lopez and Ms. Taylor regret the loss of the veils of the world, but do not begrudge JKS’ skilful narrative style and intellectually engaging storytelling. That said, the likelihood that our clients will marry again…and again and again, suffice it to say they will miss the veils dearly. However, following a perusal of justkeepswimming’s past works, Ms. Taylor and Ms. Lopez are carefully considering marrying women this go ’round”Good show, dude. (ain’t inside jokes grand?)
wwwwow! whoever gave you just one star for your writing obviously can’t count! This story got a definate 5 with me! Any chance i could stay over with B & T while Angelica is with auntie Alice, I kinda think I could have some fun with them! Great post, Thanks!
AWESOME!!!! 5-thousand stars
Fantastic JKS. You write and i will swim to read. Thank you, i’m not going to repeat what everyone else has written, but i agree with them.
Swimmie, congrats on the award. Although I was skeptical on the pairing initially, I was quickly convinced that the pairing works through your wonderful writing. Thank you for giving some B&T loving in this story. 5 zillion stars to you. The comments are what matters more and as you can see, you have a legion of fans following you.
Great story, Fins, I agree with you, I can not conceive how they are possibly going to get these two back together. Actually, at this point, I think I would be offended if they were to get back together because there has been way too much crap between them. I, personally, like the Bette and Helena pairing, but perhaps we should be thinking about Marleen Matlin…hmmmmm
Welcome back to B&T crazy in love-land LOL. I absolutely loved this chapter like all the others you post. I’m a Tibetter at heart, always will be and nothing can change that, so this was amazing for me!!!! Thank you and please post more Snippets of B&T bliss…you do them so great :o)) And please don’t worry about a few people how doesn’t like your writing, we are so many that loves it and are addicted :o))
Oh I forgot – congrats on your second award, very well deserved :o))
WOW!, this was intense. With the sign ‘Rating Disabled By Author’, I still give you 5 stars!.
I had to scroll down here to Southern Texas to get my comment in…JKS, that ‘1’ must have been from Bizzaro Fan, BF was created by a mad scientist, is the same as a normal fan, but lacking in some way. Bizarro Fan’s mind is somewhat scrambled and unfocused: “Me am very happy with story. Me give it a one!” …Bizarro Fan appears on this site from time to time, gracing the comment section of various stalwart authors. It’s best to just ignore him/her/it…BTW, did you know that Jimmy Olsen would occasionally appear as a transvestite in Superman comics, going undercover dressed as a woman?…Wickipedia doesn’t have a listing for ‘JKS’ yet. “Accomplished author of various genres of TLW fanfiction. Enranged and endeared herself to the loyal fanbase by creating the first plausible B&H fanfic, to huge positive response.” …be sure to wear a helmet and leathers, okay?…Thanks for giving Angelica’s mothers a ‘lil respite. Loved it!
Swimmie, Wow what a Hot story. I am of T&B religion So my montra is KEEP HOPE AliVE! Anything can happen on T.V. :)
Lovely chapter! Like so many others, I’m a die-hard Tibette fan so this was just what the doctor ordered. We’ve still not seen S3 in the UK – so can still dream on for a little longer. Congrats on the award – richly deserved.
DIE HARD TIBETTER!Till the end, Hey if the ship sinks, I go dwn with it lol! But in saying that, I’m not the type of person, to critisize one’s story, just because it’s not going the way I like, simple put, I just don’t read it lol, anyhooNOW THIS IS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT!This is what should be damn well happening, tibette gettin it on!
a Tibette fan here too.. Although I kinda agree with you that it’ll be VERY hard to bring those two back together, I still can’t help it.. and well I’m still on this ship ’till IC gives us and B&T a REAL “I don’t love you no more” closure.. Thank you..
Thank you for using your extraordinary talent to make us tibetters happy with this story! I loved reading it… I like your nickname sooooo much… I keep singing: justkeepswimming lol like dory in (and lets all quote peggy peabody here: Finding f*cking nemo… LMAO! thanks!
heyy swimmie so great to see you back here, and man, what a comeback it was! totally loved it.. even though i’m no TiBetter I’m definitely one Justkeepswimmer! i know this is easier said than done but i say f*ck ratings, we love your writing. (but even as i say this, i’ll probably be crushed when i get rated down. but, bound to happen one way or the other eh?) oh by the way, do i detect a trademark line “I adore how wet you are for me”? Brilliant! Just keep swimming darl’…
Sorry I forgot to mention that I liked your story. You deserve five stars*****.
I am also a Tibetter. Where did everyone come up with the pairing of Bette & Helena? I understand not liking the Tina character after season 3. But I saw no indication of Bette & Helena together other than the ride on the ski lift.
JKS, That was a marvellous and majestic moment of Bette and TIna’s lives. As a true blue Bettina fan, I bow to your wonderful and inspired writing. Your talent oozes from every story you post. If those small minded individuals can’t see past the series couplings then please encourage them to only read those stories which relate to these pairings and not rate based on the union involved. The rating is for the quality and talent of narrative and story-telling ability of the author only. As for the HelBette story they are only flights of fantasy and who knows what wickedness Season 4 may bring our way. I adore the emotional contact that your stories contain. This one captures the love and passion between Bette and Tina. The essence of their relationship is here for all to feel. A pure and sheer delight to savor and revel in. Thank you so much for putting yourself out there. Just trust that there are people who love every word you craft and judge the tales on their merits. I thankfully place myself in this group and will always be here to defend against the pettiness that others may sling your way. Much gratitude and appreciation for this and all your other stories. I will be watching and waiting for the next chapter of ‘Wanted’. Your Loyal Fan.
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, love it!
am still a die-hard tibetter. Thx for this post…you made my day!
I should’ve waited to read this…now I have to go to work. I think I’m going to have a tough time concentrating.
Congratulations on your award and its nice to see you back writing about B&T, can we have more when you are ready.Being a B&T fan too, I honestly do not even see how Bette and Tina can be reconciled, it is just IMO not going to happen in S4, what I think will happen in S4 is how Bette and Tina will be shown moving on from each other, I hope Bette will still be in Angelica life, so the connection will still be there for B&T but it will be through raising Angelica. I will stay on the B&T ship until the very end, you never know with IC she just might surprise us. (maybe wishes do come true):-o)
“Wanted†was a magnificent story, the award is extremely well deserved. For me, it was a wonderfully rich piece of writing, no matter how, some of the lines you wrote at times, softly broke my heart.“Wanted†was one of your best, you have such a reservoir of prowess to enrapture your readers. Thank you.
hotttttttttttttttttt
Awesome chapter jks! Another tibette fan here. We could never have enough B&T stories! ^_^ Congrats on your award.